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Excellent work! This is an interesting piece and you do a great job mimicking the style of the game’s narration.
The details of the final delve are good and I liked the assessment of the condition of the post-game estate.
The protagonist’s despair and his realisation of small hope are excellently done, as was him wrestling with his decision to doom his family.

Excellent work! This is an interesting piece and you do a great job mimicking the style of the game’s narration.
The details of the final delve are good and I liked the assessment of the condition of the post-game estate.
The protagonist’s despair and his realisation of small hope are excellently done, as was him wrestling with his decision to doom his family.