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7/1/2018 c3 19BellaLaila87
Love it! Can’t wait for the next update!
7/1/2018 c1 Twowillows
Not bad! the story line is good, try adding descriptions that can really put the reader in room with Bella, it's hard to set the scene in my mind without knowing what the hospital is like. how does it look, smell, feel? What kind of vibe does the doctor give off, what's his personality? How does Bella feel being there and what are things she notices? Just some suggestions! Good work
6/30/2018 c3 2Peacelovefairy
Oh wow
6/28/2018 c3 9USNeshama
Interested to see where you take this
6/26/2018 c1 amy
can't wait for the updates!
6/28/2018 c3 Twisted Musalih
Cant wait to read more
6/27/2018 c1 Mhyrne01
My son was diagnosed with Hodgkins lymphoma in May. Alot of parts of your story hit home with me. The quickness of being diagnosed, the notebook I carry around. I really am looking forward to more of your story.
6/27/2018 c2 1Anna Doherty
A great start to what looks to be a great read
6/26/2018 c1 2Peacelovefairy
Not bad

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