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4/5 c2 Guest
The guy should at least make some moves of his own like a ki sword or ki laser eyes like darkseid maybe a ki whip?

Or a ki shield?

Ki there is basically green lantern stuff bro!
1/31 c24 OutlawSnide7
I got it why not when Ginyus show up Krillin made a teamfourstar joke and said team five star, cause there be five of them and dragon balls have stars on them, and their a team
1/5 c2 somethinz
vjjctgvvffcz hi thetjl ugh members in BCBG xx BGN
10/14/2021 c10 Ghost012
Wow, even if you are going through an existential crisis don't just leave your friends to fight to the death while you just give up. Talk about a drama queen
7/26/2021 c8 Takemikazuchi25
Eight chapters in, and there's still no damn explanation about the multiple thoughts. I guess you are one of those edgy authors who think bullshit like this is cool. Sorry but this is as far as I read, I tried but my patience has run out
7/26/2021 c1 Takemikazuchi25
Ok wtf does he have multiple thoughts now, it's confusing as fuck, and if I'm being honest it's raising a flag for me since there's shit like this in the first chapter.
6/6/2021 c24 25DredgenVayn
This is a good fic. Shame it never got finished.
6/6/2021 c21 DredgenVayn
Ch21 Omake: "And then he turned into a pickle! Funniest shit I've ever seen! Pickle Piccolo!"
3/20/2021 c24 darkifiedluis
i know you havent updated this in a while but i was wondering what storylime where you gonna follow dbz to gt or dbz to super that and the xenoverse elements ?
2/27/2021 c21 2a crashclown
My favorite chapter. 10/10
1/21/2021 c1 Fujimaru24
wth... first part was in 1st person with a singular thought and suddenly after waking up he has another thought inside his head... no explanation and suddenly hes thinking in "we" instead of im and i
8/20/2020 c1 Guest
Your English needs improvement before doing a review.
8/16/2020 c16 Knightwalker405
Not to burt your stories bubble but only Tien can use the multi form technique that moment in anime was filler and it also haves your power level with every clone you make.
8/10/2020 c1 1tallman51
I really wish you would return to this story
7/28/2020 c1 Lol
Is this story dead?
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