for Naruto uzumaki : The greatest prodigy8/1 c11 robertkouts173
I don't like how he making it seem like danzo is going to get naruto on his side
I don't like how he making it seem like danzo is going to get naruto on his side
4/1 c15 
18Luciendar
Naruto's progression makes very little sense. I mean, it's cool that he uses Genjutsu. But that's not how Itachi trained him. Him favoring it so heavily makes no sense.
If you want your audience to understand that you should make it more obvious. Him using a bit of Genjutsu at the chunin exams inferred very little. It looks more like you just pulled that excuse out of your ass. Not saying you did but that's the impression I'm left with.
18LuciendarNaruto's progression makes very little sense. I mean, it's cool that he uses Genjutsu. But that's not how Itachi trained him. Him favoring it so heavily makes no sense.
If you want your audience to understand that you should make it more obvious. Him using a bit of Genjutsu at the chunin exams inferred very little. It looks more like you just pulled that excuse out of your ass. Not saying you did but that's the impression I'm left with.
3/31 c8 Luciendar
Please don't make the girls pathetic. I love Yugao. Naruto doesn't need weak like girls on his team.
Please don't make the girls pathetic. I love Yugao. Naruto doesn't need weak like girls on his team.
3/31 c4 Luciendar
Good stuff for the most part. Just realized Sakura isn't in the poll. Lol, F Sakura. Kidding, but I don't like her.
That said, I have one issue. I really hate how so many write a young Naruto accepting such life altering news so easily. He finds out Hiruzen has been lying and tears into him. Then he finds out the reason why everyone hates him is because his father sealed the fox inside of him, knowingly leaving him alone with a massive burden and a target on his back. How does he handle this? Like it's no big freaking deal! I know, he cried a bit, but even if he wasn't mad Naruto should've had a full blown panic attack at the very least. I mean, his entire life has basically been a lie. How are you writing him sucking it up so easily? Why would he even take Hiruzen's assurances that they loved him at face value after everything he just found out? None of it makes sense.
Good stuff for the most part. Just realized Sakura isn't in the poll. Lol, F Sakura. Kidding, but I don't like her.
That said, I have one issue. I really hate how so many write a young Naruto accepting such life altering news so easily. He finds out Hiruzen has been lying and tears into him. Then he finds out the reason why everyone hates him is because his father sealed the fox inside of him, knowingly leaving him alone with a massive burden and a target on his back. How does he handle this? Like it's no big freaking deal! I know, he cried a bit, but even if he wasn't mad Naruto should've had a full blown panic attack at the very least. I mean, his entire life has basically been a lie. How are you writing him sucking it up so easily? Why would he even take Hiruzen's assurances that they loved him at face value after everything he just found out? None of it makes sense.
1/7 c1 Brian
Vote Anko Miterashi as Naruto wife. Only Anko can relate to Naruto as both are hated by Konoha for events beyond their control. Both are passionate and impulsive and fun loving people. Both are named after food. No one else can connect to each other like they can. Seriously who else can understand the pain of being outcast for years and years cursed at wherever you go and flat out ignored. Only Anko can relate to that. Vote Anko Miterashi as Naruto wife today.
Vote Anko Miterashi as Naruto wife. Only Anko can relate to Naruto as both are hated by Konoha for events beyond their control. Both are passionate and impulsive and fun loving people. Both are named after food. No one else can connect to each other like they can. Seriously who else can understand the pain of being outcast for years and years cursed at wherever you go and flat out ignored. Only Anko can relate to that. Vote Anko Miterashi as Naruto wife today.
1/6 c1 ItzJoe
dude he cant just pick up a scroll on the fireball jutsu and learn it, he needs to learn nature transformations and what actual affinity he has first smh
dude he cant just pick up a scroll on the fireball jutsu and learn it, he needs to learn nature transformations and what actual affinity he has first smh