for The Sable Library5/21/2019 c6 Guest
Would love to see this continued - good, well written characters, and a good storyline so far.
Would love to see this continued - good, well written characters, and a good storyline so far.
7/22/2018 c1 No One Will Believe You
Read this story:
That’s good..
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Cool...
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Yeah, you got me now...
I’m addicted...
Read this story:
That’s good..
Yeah I like that...
Cool...
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Yeah, you got me now...
I’m addicted...
7/12/2018 c6 ChenMango
Just caught up to the most recent chapter, and it's good stuff! While somewhat short, there's enough content per chapter to make it feel like there's progress being made between introducing new characters, their personalities, and how they interact with the MC (who's THANKFULLY not a typical kid with hormones). I like how direct and to the point he is, which might explain why the pacing is lightning fast. Maybe a little TOO fast sometimes, I would have liked to see what the fight against Blue Monsoon was like, but I understand that fighting isn't really the point of this series. Combined with how quickly this series seems to be updating and I think that overall it's a nice little story you have going on here!
Just caught up to the most recent chapter, and it's good stuff! While somewhat short, there's enough content per chapter to make it feel like there's progress being made between introducing new characters, their personalities, and how they interact with the MC (who's THANKFULLY not a typical kid with hormones). I like how direct and to the point he is, which might explain why the pacing is lightning fast. Maybe a little TOO fast sometimes, I would have liked to see what the fight against Blue Monsoon was like, but I understand that fighting isn't really the point of this series. Combined with how quickly this series seems to be updating and I think that overall it's a nice little story you have going on here!
7/3/2018 c5 
32chynnchilders
I really hope that Hector and the Liminal girls won't have any more problems with gangs.
32chynnchildersI really hope that Hector and the Liminal girls won't have any more problems with gangs.
6/28/2018 c3 RP
I very much enjoyed your story. I hope you continue with it. It’s something different and your OCs are interesting.
RP
I very much enjoyed your story. I hope you continue with it. It’s something different and your OCs are interesting.
RP