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3/2/2023 c24 12mastercheif1229
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Just finished re-reading the story!
3/1/2023 c24 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Excellent work! I enjoyed this! I can’t wait for the immense chaos that’ll soon be coming by in the next coming chapters! Until next time!

P.S. I also made sure to read your revised prologue and it looks good. Granted I didn’t see much difference but maybe that’s the reason in the first place? Things seemed a lot more hashed out and flowed better? So I guess my “no news is good news”!
2/26/2023 c12 Guest
Now he finally has enough people to reenact The Last Supper.
2/26/2023 c22 Guest
I like this story, it almost seems like the logical end to Naruto.
2/26/2023 c21 Guest
I just realized that anyone born on the moon is technically an alien.
2/25/2023 c23 lara5170
Love this story and reread the entire thing so I could recall everything. Looking forward to reading more
2/24/2023 c17 Guest
I like this chapter. It's really important for the pacing.
2/24/2023 c16 Guest
Now this is good writing.
2/24/2023 c15 Guest
2/24/2023 c14 Guest
I'm glad you made this, it's nice to see the dynamic without Naruto.
2/24/2023 c13 Guest
The Jiongu is perfect for Kankuro, and that bijuu battle was epic.
2/17/2023 c19 amavgupta0
Bro reaper death seal was not used and cannot bow used to seal someone into something else it only goes inside shinigami’s stomach and kyuubi was never connected to Naruto she will die but reform after some years that’s a very stupid plot honestly
2/17/2023 c10 amavgupta0
Bro madara and obito made themselves TEN TAILS jinchuuriki and I don’t think they are kids they are definitely adults and almost all times tailed beasts are sealed with children between age 4 and 6, in the anime gaara and Naruto were the only ones to have tailed beast sealed by birth
2/16/2023 c8 amavgupta0
And bro Naruto is right now 6yrs old almost 7 the age difference between him and Hanabi is 4yrs how can he be her father that just doesn’t make any sense whatsoever
2/16/2023 c8 amavgupta0
bro I tbink you shouldnt have done the hanabi part like that plot was vey bad honestly of hiashia treating his daughter hanabi badly whereas hiashi loved hanabi very much in the anime, even more than hinata
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