for Child of the Kaminoki2/24/2023 c15 Guest
Hooray!
Hooray!
2/24/2023 c14 Guest
I'm glad you made this, it's nice to see the dynamic without Naruto.
I'm glad you made this, it's nice to see the dynamic without Naruto.
2/24/2023 c13 Guest
The Jiongu is perfect for Kankuro, and that bijuu battle was epic.
The Jiongu is perfect for Kankuro, and that bijuu battle was epic.
2/17/2023 c19 amavgupta0
Bro reaper death seal was not used and cannot bow used to seal someone into something else it only goes inside shinigami’s stomach and kyuubi was never connected to Naruto she will die but reform after some years that’s a very stupid plot honestly
Bro reaper death seal was not used and cannot bow used to seal someone into something else it only goes inside shinigami’s stomach and kyuubi was never connected to Naruto she will die but reform after some years that’s a very stupid plot honestly
2/17/2023 c10 amavgupta0
Bro madara and obito made themselves TEN TAILS jinchuuriki and I don’t think they are kids they are definitely adults and almost all times tailed beasts are sealed with children between age 4 and 6, in the anime gaara and Naruto were the only ones to have tailed beast sealed by birth
Bro madara and obito made themselves TEN TAILS jinchuuriki and I don’t think they are kids they are definitely adults and almost all times tailed beasts are sealed with children between age 4 and 6, in the anime gaara and Naruto were the only ones to have tailed beast sealed by birth
2/16/2023 c8 amavgupta0
And bro Naruto is right now 6yrs old almost 7 the age difference between him and Hanabi is 4yrs how can he be her father that just doesn’t make any sense whatsoever
And bro Naruto is right now 6yrs old almost 7 the age difference between him and Hanabi is 4yrs how can he be her father that just doesn’t make any sense whatsoever
2/16/2023 c8 amavgupta0
bro I tbink you shouldnt have done the hanabi part like that plot was vey bad honestly of hiashia treating his daughter hanabi badly whereas hiashi loved hanabi very much in the anime, even more than hinata
bro I tbink you shouldnt have done the hanabi part like that plot was vey bad honestly of hiashia treating his daughter hanabi badly whereas hiashi loved hanabi very much in the anime, even more than hinata
2/16/2023 c5 amavgupta0
See no offense about my previous comments just genuine review and when a good chapter then a good story
See no offense about my previous comments just genuine review and when a good chapter then a good story
2/16/2023 c5 amavgupta0
Not 5 tails monkey but 4 tails monkey son goku is 4 tails kokuo the dolphin-horse is 5 tails a mistake in this chapter just correct it
Not 5 tails monkey but 4 tails monkey son goku is 4 tails kokuo the dolphin-horse is 5 tails a mistake in this chapter just correct it
2/16/2023 c4 amavgupta0
And bijuus can’t heal people from poison and only kyuubi has healing properties no other bijuu so shukaku shouldn’t be able to heal gases from poison but it gives resistance surely for prove- Naruto wave arc demon brothers Naruto hand poisoned and 2nd Naruto shippuden the movie with the sky village invasion Naruto poisoned not able to even move
And bijuus can’t heal people from poison and only kyuubi has healing properties no other bijuu so shukaku shouldn’t be able to heal gases from poison but it gives resistance surely for prove- Naruto wave arc demon brothers Naruto hand poisoned and 2nd Naruto shippuden the movie with the sky village invasion Naruto poisoned not able to even move
2/16/2023 c4 amavgupta0
Bro when kyuubi was sealed mito she was an adult not a baby and even kushina was 5-6yrs old when kyuubi was sealed inside her definitely not a baby and only uzumakis can handle kyuubi chakra and a baby can’t handle full chakra hence the kyuubi was separated using the reaper death and it was not sealed inside Naruto using reaper death but 8 trigrams seal reaper death seal seals things inside the shinigami’s stomach not in someone else 8 trigrams was the seal used to seal kyuubi inside Naruto
Bro when kyuubi was sealed mito she was an adult not a baby and even kushina was 5-6yrs old when kyuubi was sealed inside her definitely not a baby and only uzumakis can handle kyuubi chakra and a baby can’t handle full chakra hence the kyuubi was separated using the reaper death and it was not sealed inside Naruto using reaper death but 8 trigrams seal reaper death seal seals things inside the shinigami’s stomach not in someone else 8 trigrams was the seal used to seal kyuubi inside Naruto
2/16/2023 c23 thor94
good chapter.
interesting these genin team and the rainbow dash hair style prank on the haruno family was really fun.
Does takumi is kabuto in disguise or you just used his nin-info card idea for an OC?
Can't wait next chapter.
good chapter.
interesting these genin team and the rainbow dash hair style prank on the haruno family was really fun.
Does takumi is kabuto in disguise or you just used his nin-info card idea for an OC?
Can't wait next chapter.
12/16/2023 c3 amavgupta0
Since when kyuubi healing can regenerate limbs I didn’t see Naruto growing a limb after his fight with sasuke I wonder why
Since when kyuubi healing can regenerate limbs I didn’t see Naruto growing a limb after his fight with sasuke I wonder why