for Child of the Kaminoki2/13/2023 c4 GloGang214
I know this is an au and this is a fanfiction but I always cringe seeing different names and genders to people. it has nothing to do with your story in general, its just something I can never get over. other than that this is a great story.
I know this is an au and this is a fanfiction but I always cringe seeing different names and genders to people. it has nothing to do with your story in general, its just something I can never get over. other than that this is a great story.
2/12/2023 c22 
12mastercheif1229
Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Hope that you update this again soon! I'm probably going to reread it since it's been so long.
12mastercheif1229Awesome chapter! Can't wait for the next one! Hope that you update this again soon! I'm probably going to reread it since it's been so long.
2/8/2023 c23 Guest
You have no idea how fucking invested I got in this story before you said about a rewrite... I don't want to start this again, I want to continue. So much good shit was happening and now I just have to... Move to a fucking rewrite... God damnit. I feel so cheated.
14 hours I spent reading this. It took my entire day, and I was genuinely invested in every chapter
You have no idea how fucking invested I got in this story before you said about a rewrite... I don't want to start this again, I want to continue. So much good shit was happening and now I just have to... Move to a fucking rewrite... God damnit. I feel so cheated.
14 hours I spent reading this. It took my entire day, and I was genuinely invested in every chapter
6/1/2022 c1 kganya may s.a
good job
good job
4/13/2022 c3 The Slacker9
Bro this chapter is literally bs like kyuubi can’t literally heal severed body parts or else the jinchuriki would literally be immortal and then how the heck did the baby not die having it’s hand severed also the blood lose should be too much
Bro this chapter is literally bs like kyuubi can’t literally heal severed body parts or else the jinchuriki would literally be immortal and then how the heck did the baby not die having it’s hand severed also the blood lose should be too much
3/28/2022 c21 Guest
I just happen to find this book or fanfic.
Is was one of the best that I found so far and appreciated all the efforts. Too bad that is not finished
I just happen to find this book or fanfic.
Is was one of the best that I found so far and appreciated all the efforts. Too bad that is not finished
2/14/2022 c23 kurama Baryon mode
to be honest your rewrite was not that good, I like this one more, but you won't see this
to be honest your rewrite was not that good, I like this one more, but you won't see this
10/20/2021 c22 lamthai316
I'll be honest...
Most of us are a fan this one. Its your choice to
discontinue this and work on the rewrite.
Your rewrite is terrible though.
I dont expect you to ever come back to this or
care about my opinion. Just letting you know.
I'll be honest...
Most of us are a fan this one. Its your choice to
discontinue this and work on the rewrite.
Your rewrite is terrible though.
I dont expect you to ever come back to this or
care about my opinion. Just letting you know.
10/7/2021 c23 Danirodriguez1995
Please continue, the story is very good, Please don't give up, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a huge fan of this type of story and the truth is they have no comparison.
Please continue, the story is very good, Please don't give up, a story that the truth has no comparison. I can tell you since I am a huge fan of this type of story and the truth is they have no comparison.
7/17/2021 c23 4savagegamer675
This was an amazing read, at first I wasn’t sure but after reading more chapter this was probably my favorite, although I won’t read Blind sight since it’s not that appealing and isn’t the same story
4savagegamer675This was an amazing read, at first I wasn’t sure but after reading more chapter this was probably my favorite, although I won’t read Blind sight since it’s not that appealing and isn’t the same story
5/23/2021 c1 BYmTRax
I am fascinated by this story, it has a good plot, the fights are very well detailed, well, leaving aside the references, I would like to know if you would let me upload your story to my YouTube channel. could you enjoy it with me well I hope your answer
I am fascinated by this story, it has a good plot, the fights are very well detailed, well, leaving aside the references, I would like to know if you would let me upload your story to my YouTube channel. could you enjoy it with me well I hope your answer
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