for Child of the Kaminoki11/27/2019 c5 Uzumaki spiral
You give abilities without making unbelievable you my friend need a prize!
You give abilities without making unbelievable you my friend need a prize!
11/27/2019 c4 Uzumaki spiral
Ehy dont you just throw it the m rating then you can swear like you want? I found this story by chance i only search in m rating btw...
Ehy dont you just throw it the m rating then you can swear like you want? I found this story by chance i only search in m rating btw...
11/27/2019 c21 Daniel Wray
I really Enjoyed this story. A little annoyed that it ended right before the chunin exams. I tried to look on your profile for the Rewrite, but I wasn't able to find it.
I really Enjoyed this story. A little annoyed that it ended right before the chunin exams. I tried to look on your profile for the Rewrite, but I wasn't able to find it.
11/16/2019 c18 lara5170
It is odd that Nakada is so vengeful over someone he only knew for a couple of days, it just shows how easily influenced he is by others. He is not a character who can think for himself.
It is odd that Nakada is so vengeful over someone he only knew for a couple of days, it just shows how easily influenced he is by others. He is not a character who can think for himself.
11/11/2019 c3 Guest
This is one of the most creative story of naruto i ever read. Im so sick of the usual plot of naruto. This is so refreshing. I cant wait to finish reading this story. Good job author!
This is one of the most creative story of naruto i ever read. Im so sick of the usual plot of naruto. This is so refreshing. I cant wait to finish reading this story. Good job author!
11/11/2019 c21 demzerff1
Such a fun story too bad it ended.
I might read the rewrite one day but it seems likely that it will take a year or so to reach this many words again so who knows.
Such a fun story too bad it ended.
I might read the rewrite one day but it seems likely that it will take a year or so to reach this many words again so who knows.
11/1/2019 c22 StrikerTheFallen
Awwww I was hoping this fic was going to continue! It was and still is one of my favorite fics to revisit an read!
Awwww I was hoping this fic was going to continue! It was and still is one of my favorite fics to revisit an read!
11/1/2019 c22 Desk Vampire
Yes~! This is one of the best Naruto FanFictions I have ever read! This is so good that i even after a year I am still happy that it continues to expand ant Thank You for this joy of a read.
Yes~! This is one of the best Naruto FanFictions I have ever read! This is so good that i even after a year I am still happy that it continues to expand ant Thank You for this joy of a read.