for Happily Never After10/23/2009 c1 
6Wild Blueberries
I think you did a great job with this -it's kind of dark but compelling at the same time. (I have to say, I am terrible at poetry, so I’m always so impressed when I see others execute it well.) Great job!
6Wild BlueberriesI think you did a great job with this -it's kind of dark but compelling at the same time. (I have to say, I am terrible at poetry, so I’m always so impressed when I see others execute it well.) Great job!
6/14/2006 c1 5noneofyourbusiness885858838
woww! that one i didnt expect.. but yeahh that does sound like auron and rikku. anyways nice one, keep on writin em:)
-whit-
5noneofyourbusiness885858838woww! that one i didnt expect.. but yeahh that does sound like auron and rikku. anyways nice one, keep on writin em:)
-whit-
9/13/2004 c1 26shadows-of-flame
yes have one that is rikkus POV. this is REALLY kool, i luv aurikkus!
26shadows-of-flameyes have one that is rikkus POV. this is REALLY kool, i luv aurikkus!
6/20/2004 c1 10Silvanus16
Yep! Even though I don't know what you are talking about (unfortunately I don't know FF10 from any of the others or from Adam) I think you should definitely show the other side of the coin.
By the way... I ain't dead. I was away for two weeks over at Deaconess. No I wasn't sick otherwise I'd get a laptop and send stuff in. Oh God it was primitive! No computer (as you know), no stereo, no TV, no time to sleep, and crappy food. But you'll be happy to know that Without the Mask is back in the works... just thought I'd let you know.
Ta Ta!
10Silvanus16Yep! Even though I don't know what you are talking about (unfortunately I don't know FF10 from any of the others or from Adam) I think you should definitely show the other side of the coin.
By the way... I ain't dead. I was away for two weeks over at Deaconess. No I wasn't sick otherwise I'd get a laptop and send stuff in. Oh God it was primitive! No computer (as you know), no stereo, no TV, no time to sleep, and crappy food. But you'll be happy to know that Without the Mask is back in the works... just thought I'd let you know.
Ta Ta!
3/15/2004 c1 tAINTED hEART
This was a really nice poem. I liked it and i'd love to see a poem in rikku's POV about this.
This was a really nice poem. I liked it and i'd love to see a poem in rikku's POV about this.
3/6/2004 c1 5NoelleFord1
That was a nice poem! I couldn't figure out who it was! Until I realized it WAS Auron and Rikku! You got me good!
5NoelleFord1That was a nice poem! I couldn't figure out who it was! Until I realized it WAS Auron and Rikku! You got me good!
1/3/2004 c1 Ida
Heheh, i really like ur poem! Its great. Finally, someone can see that Auron's suffering! LoL. Well, i'm a fan of Auron+Lulu (maybe weird) but umm... mail me if ya wanna discuss! ^^
Heheh, i really like ur poem! Its great. Finally, someone can see that Auron's suffering! LoL. Well, i'm a fan of Auron+Lulu (maybe weird) but umm... mail me if ya wanna discuss! ^^
11/28/2003 c1 Risu
Dear god, that was an amasing peom! great job! I loved it. But holy fuck, no way in hell would that pairing ever happen Ack! messed up, come on now, auron, IS DEAD! dead people don't love liveing people! plus in ffx-2 she finds someone so naw naw, that pairing is dead. dead to the ground ! MWAHAHHA! sorry, *ahem* anyway, it was a good peom
Dear god, that was an amasing peom! great job! I loved it. But holy fuck, no way in hell would that pairing ever happen Ack! messed up, come on now, auron, IS DEAD! dead people don't love liveing people! plus in ffx-2 she finds someone so naw naw, that pairing is dead. dead to the ground ! MWAHAHHA! sorry, *ahem* anyway, it was a good peom
11/25/2003 c1 6bamboomarang
your poem is WAY better. i myself dont have any final
fantasy games, but my best friend has all of em and i
practaclly live at her house. ^^; also please finish your rayearth fic id like to read it.
Loki: arn't you forgetting something?
no...
bambu: ^^ thankies for reviewing.
oh yeah ^^; what she said.
6bamboomarangyour poem is WAY better. i myself dont have any final
fantasy games, but my best friend has all of em and i
practaclly live at her house. ^^; also please finish your rayearth fic id like to read it.
Loki: arn't you forgetting something?
no...
bambu: ^^ thankies for reviewing.
oh yeah ^^; what she said.
11/12/2003 c1 Vanilla Fox
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Hmm... I think i get it... vaguely, but it's there. great work, I must say though, on the poem! I could'nt write a poem if it would save my life. *grin* Write another one on Rikku, but... FINISH YOUR RAYEARTH FIC FIRST! mwahahahaha... i'm an idiot. Ignore this.
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Hmm... I think i get it... vaguely, but it's there. great work, I must say though, on the poem! I could'nt write a poem if it would save my life. *grin* Write another one on Rikku, but... FINISH YOUR RAYEARTH FIC FIRST! mwahahahaha... i'm an idiot. Ignore this.
10/27/2003 c1 KidNovelist
cool, I really am amazed at the poem...by Auron...lol it's so dark to write something like that. Well, keep up the great work ^_^ . Rikku POV, go ahead, knock yourself out!
cool, I really am amazed at the poem...by Auron...lol it's so dark to write something like that. Well, keep up the great work ^_^ . Rikku POV, go ahead, knock yourself out!
9/26/2003 c1 Suki-Saki-14
it was nice...i like it...yes, you should make one from rikku's POV...i cant wait to see if you write anymore...
it was nice...i like it...yes, you should make one from rikku's POV...i cant wait to see if you write anymore...
9/20/2003 c1 5emesisbowl
wow, really deep. Liked it a lot!
Oh, and sorry for the whole Tifa mix up in my story.
Continue
~Fiery
5emesisbowlwow, really deep. Liked it a lot!
Oh, and sorry for the whole Tifa mix up in my story.
Continue
~Fiery