for Forging A Dragon7/21/2018 c2 Artjom435
Ah tah is a interesting fanfiction. Are all exp trough Grimm over the collection of these papers after they are dead? By the way, are the pairing already decided?
Ah tah is a interesting fanfiction. Are all exp trough Grimm over the collection of these papers after they are dead? By the way, are the pairing already decided?
7/7/2018 c2 
11AFatFlyingWhale
This is certainly interesting, although it isn't without it's flaws. I'd suggest making sure your grammar is all good before uploading, even if it does means taking an extra hour to thoroughly check through, and using linebreaks to break up scenes, just for ease of reading. Otherwise, whilst the concept of Jaune being a blacksmith isn't the most original you've certainly taken it a different direction. Keep up the good work!
11AFatFlyingWhaleThis is certainly interesting, although it isn't without it's flaws. I'd suggest making sure your grammar is all good before uploading, even if it does means taking an extra hour to thoroughly check through, and using linebreaks to break up scenes, just for ease of reading. Otherwise, whilst the concept of Jaune being a blacksmith isn't the most original you've certainly taken it a different direction. Keep up the good work!
7/7/2018 c2 2merendinoemiliano
Pretty cool chapters, Jaune was pretty badass and i liked the dragon, i'm very curious to see next work.
2merendinoemilianoPretty cool chapters, Jaune was pretty badass and i liked the dragon, i'm very curious to see next work.
6/30/2018 c1 merendinoemiliano
Quite nice beginning, i'm curious to see next events and i hope you will go with Arkos. I admit, i would make Grimm something different(if you want i could have an idea), but let's see, i hope though there is still some form of inner up the good work and see you soon.
Quite nice beginning, i'm curious to see next events and i hope you will go with Arkos. I admit, i would make Grimm something different(if you want i could have an idea), but let's see, i hope though there is still some form of inner up the good work and see you soon.