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8/17/2018 c18 9ArtificialRangerLiuria
I'm sorry but I keep imagining Vaati as this shrimp arguing with Link over finding the cap. I do mentally correct myself, but it's always funny to goof off and think of how Vaati's own appearance undermines him.
8/14/2018 c16 ArtificialRangerLiuria
Oh man, I can feel Vaati's bitterness over Ezlo. But as much as I wanted to marry Vaati when I was ten, I will always side with Ezlo, because he is my dad.

OwO wats this?
It appears Vaati isn't completely windless without the mage's cap. Interesting...
8/14/2018 c15 ArtificialRangerLiuria
I'm really enjoying your exploration of Link's feelings about being used. He's at once frustrated with people's expectations of him (even/especially those of yhe princess) but he also understands that his mantle of Hero puts so many people at ease. He keeps going aeound in circles, being unsatisfied with his position and then accepting the burden as it's for the greater good, and then feeling pressured again. Very nice.

Also looking forward to Vaati's redemption lol
8/14/2018 c16 Mari
Link's in for a nasty shock. But first, he'll probably worry himself sick over the "beast".

I wouldn't be surprised if the Yiga have the hat.
8/12/2018 c14 Mari
I love it. I love it so much.
8/12/2018 c14 ArtificialRangerLiuria
Link says Urbosa WASN'T someone he could put all his faith in... is that a typo? It seems a little weird for Link to go from fondly remembering her love for him to saying something so negative without a proper connector like "but" or "however". It reads likeLink loved Urbosa. He couldn't tell her anything."

Wait did you just insinuate that Vaati is taller than Link? No way. Absolutely not. I refuse to accept that. I must have misread.

Oh god, Link's just trying to take his stuffy boyfriend for a ride on his sweet bi-OH NO

(I actually do have an AO3, so at some point I'll follow you on there as well. For the time being I have no computer and the ffn app on my phone is much more convenient than using the browser, so meh.)
8/12/2018 c13 Mari
Vaati is clearly having trouble with link being the hero, and also liking him at the same time.
8/11/2018 c13 ArtificialRangerLiuria
These kinds of adventure stories always make me apprehensive because I feel like I would never be able to figure out a good purpose for the adventure, rather than just... I dunno, something that sounds terribly fanfiction-y. But I commend you for taking on this task.
8/11/2018 c11 ArtificialRangerLiuria
"okay, he screams a little."
Vaati's practicing his fangirl impression.

This chapter was pretty short. Are you trying to make your update schedule more manageable?
8/6/2018 c10 ArtificialRangerLiuria
Loved the drama here. The tension was tangible, and that's a difficult feat to accomplish. Happy writing!
8/6/2018 c1 Captain Lou
When is Link going to make spaghetti?
8/4/2018 c8 ArtificialRangerLiuria
"This is why he should just keep his mouth shut."
Oof. That hurt.

I will say I didn't realize this was a romance, and I'm a little disappointed, because your prose is particularly nice to read. I guess I mean that I would have liked this to stay more neutral, especially since 50% of BoTW's main story is that the power of the goddesses is unlocked by Zelda admitting that she wants to fug Link, lol. But oh well, I'll live!
8/4/2018 c7 ArtificialRangerLiuria
Omg you did it, you mentioned Classical Hylian, you absolute madman
8/4/2018 c5 ArtificialRangerLiuria
If I may nitpick, the written Hylian language in BoTW is based on the English alphabet, while the Hylian in the Toon-styled games is based on the Japanese syllabary, right? In that case, would it not be far-fetched to say that Vaati's Hylian and Link's Hylian are different, if not mutually unintelligible (maybe like the difference between Mandarin and Cantonese)? Obviously this doesn't really have a place in your story, but it's fun to think about about a character from one era having trouble understanding a character from another. Maybe I should just buckle down and write about it myself lol.
8/4/2018 c2 ArtificialRangerLiuria
Something I notice about a lot of tumblr/ao3 writers is that you guys are the absolute best at stream of consciousness writing. I only WISH I could belt out this sort of flowing, brilliantly organic prose on a regular basis. Instead I go for the Victorian gothic approach to trick people into thinking I'm sophisticated (but it's very clear that I'm not, otherwise I wouldn't be writing in Victorian gothic lol)
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