for Efforts10/14/2018 c1 
12thewindinthemeadow
I love how you realized that for an evil villain the first few steps of trying to be good would be rough. In so many stories it feels the redemption arc is too instantaneous and then the entire thing feels fake. Maybe you could write a sequel, or something else in this vein? Please?
12thewindinthemeadowI love how you realized that for an evil villain the first few steps of trying to be good would be rough. In so many stories it feels the redemption arc is too instantaneous and then the entire thing feels fake. Maybe you could write a sequel, or something else in this vein? Please?
9/28/2018 c1 1willows dancing in the wind
I love this! It made me feel bad for Lucifer. All he wants is to be a good father, or as he probably considers it, a better father than his dad. I love this fic so much.
1willows dancing in the windI love this! It made me feel bad for Lucifer. All he wants is to be a good father, or as he probably considers it, a better father than his dad. I love this fic so much.
9/1/2018 c1 45SummerMistedDragon
Oh my Chuck! I just love this sooooo much! I love the insights to Lucifer's thoughts and his real struggle! Fabulous piece! Very well written!
45SummerMistedDragonOh my Chuck! I just love this sooooo much! I love the insights to Lucifer's thoughts and his real struggle! Fabulous piece! Very well written!
7/11/2018 c1 VegasGranny
I love Lucifer counting! I actually felt bad for him. This was amazing thanks :)
I love Lucifer counting! I actually felt bad for him. This was amazing thanks :)
7/5/2018 c1 4certifiedsaladexpert
Definitely a fun read- and a long one, too! I like your style and you kept everyone in character. Lucifer by nature is a very chaotic but very complex character and I think you did a very good job of illustrating that, especially his relationship with Jack, whom I think he really does care about. Its good as a one-shot but if you continue that'd be great. Awesome job with a capitol A!
4certifiedsaladexpertDefinitely a fun read- and a long one, too! I like your style and you kept everyone in character. Lucifer by nature is a very chaotic but very complex character and I think you did a very good job of illustrating that, especially his relationship with Jack, whom I think he really does care about. Its good as a one-shot but if you continue that'd be great. Awesome job with a capitol A!
6/30/2018 c1 Kathy
Really enjoyed reading this, good feelings, good dialogues and thoughts, thanks
Really enjoyed reading this, good feelings, good dialogues and thoughts, thanks