
4/16 c58 Zepolmoon
Wonder if Draudillon will change her form as a way to entice Siegfried to be hers (though since he is a married man not sure if that will work….. wait is his wife here as well?). Would be nice if her true form was very beautiful but in an office lady kinda way. And once again Shirou leaves a kingdom in awe with his Tracing. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
Wonder if Draudillon will change her form as a way to entice Siegfried to be hers (though since he is a married man not sure if that will work….. wait is his wife here as well?). Would be nice if her true form was very beautiful but in an office lady kinda way. And once again Shirou leaves a kingdom in awe with his Tracing. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
4/16 c58 Citrine Quartz
#Cyricist001: You're mistaken Kriemhild with Brynhild. Kriemhild never have a urge to kill Siegfried. However, she's easily get angry at Siegfried.
#Cyricist001: You're mistaken Kriemhild with Brynhild. Kriemhild never have a urge to kill Siegfried. However, she's easily get angry at Siegfried.
4/16 c58 Guest
I hope to read Fate Stay Cooking & Fate: Legend next & Both of them need to be on Tv Tropes
I hope to read Fate Stay Cooking & Fate: Legend next & Both of them need to be on Tv Tropes
4/15 c58 Guest
Oh boy I sure hope Kriemhild doesn't hear her talking like that. Berserker would not be pleased is right lol
Oh boy I sure hope Kriemhild doesn't hear her talking like that. Berserker would not be pleased is right lol
4/15 c58 ulttoanova
I don't have too many comments other than feeling sorry for Draudillon when Kremhild finds out about another woman being interested in her man. I look forward to more of this and more of your other work.
I don't have too many comments other than feeling sorry for Draudillon when Kremhild finds out about another woman being interested in her man. I look forward to more of this and more of your other work.
4/15 c58
26Cyricist001
Over reliance makes less allies and more vassals me thinks. I'm surprised Siegrfied is still alive, isn't Berserker's nature to kill him? Or at least obsessively hound his steps.
Anyway great chapter.

Over reliance makes less allies and more vassals me thinks. I'm surprised Siegrfied is still alive, isn't Berserker's nature to kill him? Or at least obsessively hound his steps.
Anyway great chapter.
4/15 c58 LOSTxWo1f
This fic could be so much longer if you went into more detail on this part. Scenes of Shirou outfitting the army or taking part in a battle. Some of Siegfried taking on Beastmen and the Beastmmenin charge reacting to what they are up to. Things like that. I'm sure there's other parts that could also extend the story if you wrote more about the process of what Shirou and company achieved. I'm not sure that makes complete sense.
This fic could be so much longer if you went into more detail on this part. Scenes of Shirou outfitting the army or taking part in a battle. Some of Siegfried taking on Beastmen and the Beastmmenin charge reacting to what they are up to. Things like that. I'm sure there's other parts that could also extend the story if you wrote more about the process of what Shirou and company achieved. I'm not sure that makes complete sense.
4/15 c58
4Kleave guy
‘My Siegfried’
Lady, you’ve might have just pissed off the most Vengeful Widow of Burgundy.

‘My Siegfried’
Lady, you’ve might have just pissed off the most Vengeful Widow of Burgundy.