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8/20/2018 c8 137Griffin Stone
Where do you come up with these things?! Not just the idea of using ice cream flavors for swears, but also the alien swears in the beginning? I mean really, that's just cookies and cream awesome!
Stubbing your toe is definitely a vanilla bean level of pain. Plus, Coran's apparent inability to use proper ice cream names is just a Coran thing.
8/20/2018 c8 1FaceplantNINJA
HAHAHAHAAAA! You killed me with this one! I think my favorite part is when Shiro is trying so hard to bash his head on Black's dash.
8/19/2018 c8 89Star-The-Writer
Keith, Lance, and Pidge would be the scariest terror squad ever and I love it
8/19/2018 c8 8Kippysaurus
What the chocolate trifle was that?

Oh yes this is being used (evil cackling insues)
8/19/2018 c8 19Cuthalion97
Imaginative. Very imaginative. :D I like the checkers game, and how Shiro's really tired of listening to them... And Hunk WOULD think of that idea!

If you bark your shin on a metal edge or something, hopping around and shouting, "Oh, chocolate peppermint STRIPE!" is rather satisfying, and this was taken to a whole new level. ;)

I like Pidge's line: "Do not question my pain scale." :)
8/14/2018 c7 Coralnightblade
I love you story so far. Really love the name too. Please continue.
8/13/2018 c7 3An Amber Pen
Another really cool chapter with a great blend of action and character exploration. I don't know how you keep doing it, but I don't have to in order to enjoy the heck out of it. I understand the significance of the constellations, but I think you might've gotten Cassiopeia and Andromeda switched. I also spotted the Doctor Who reference in your A.N., you clever writer. ;) Please keep writing!
8/12/2018 c7 19Cuthalion97
Orion - Keith - Leo - Lion - Cassiopeia - no idea? I'm not sure if any of those were right, but there's my two cents' worth. :) Maybe the Castle of Lions could fly to Altea's former position so Shiro could see the constellations? ':D

ALSO, I really love the part with Pidge and Lance. And did you do the flowers' colors on purpose? I presume you did, but, you know . . . blue and yellow flowers, red flowers with black centers . . . and greenery, of course.

Keep up the great work!
8/10/2018 c7 1FaceplantNINJA
WOO HOO! Another (*throws coffee mug on the ground in excitement*)
I love the bonds between the lions and their paladins, and I thought it was hilarious when Shiro walked in to Keith burning paper!
8/9/2018 c7 137Griffin Stone
Love, love what you are doing with the Paladin and lion bonds! Why didn't the showmakers include ideas such as these?
I have to laugh at Pidge. The not really outdoorsy Paladin has become obsessed with plants! Ah, she and Lance are so cute with the flower crown!
And Keith, my little pyro... don't burn down the Castle, there's only one.
8/9/2018 c7 Guest
Your story is amazing, nd here’s just an idea I can’t write out: Pidge on her period, and none knows how to handle it, maybe lance after he’s sitsters
8/8/2018 c2 Shiranai Atsune
Haha! That Incredibles reference was the best!
8/1/2018 c6 1FaceplantNINJA
This is so cool! I love the connections that each of them have to their lions, especially how Hunk!
7/31/2018 c6 137Griffin Stone
Wow, this is a side of the paladin/lion bond that never occurred to me! Although, would Lance go from constantly on the chilly side to basically feverish after becoming the red paladin? Hm, just thinking.
I think it is adorable that the team collects rocks for Hunk! Keeps him "grounded" while in space.
The effect on Pidge is my favorite: craving salads and wanting to explore.
I love these stories!
7/31/2018 c6 19Cuthalion97
Hey, nice chapter! :) Random writing style note: you have excellent descriptive capabilities. . . That whole paragraph when Shiro and Pidge reach the surface? I could see it. As in, SEE it. Beautiful!

As for the rest of the chapter, well, you've got some great character moments. I like when Hunk was baking brownies - hadn't thought of that one - and I liked when Lance rushed out on Shiro, cackling . . . but I think my favorite part is really when Keith decided to give Hunk that rock. ;) Also, I think it's really neat that you know about different martial arts . . . The only one I know anything about for real is jiu-jitsu . . . ;) Thanks, and looking forward to the next chapter!
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