for The Collection4/26/2023 c2 Flora Mile
I am going to be honest… what is the “Collection Series”. Sorry I don’t know this!
I am going to be honest… what is the “Collection Series”. Sorry I don’t know this!
3/22/2023 c36 Allear
Now, if Rosalie is just a friend, what business did he have kissing her? And especially after sleeping with Bella? I think she's far too lenient with him here.
Now, if Rosalie is just a friend, what business did he have kissing her? And especially after sleeping with Bella? I think she's far too lenient with him here.
2/18/2023 c46 Guest
I really hope we get the sequel to this
I really hope we get the sequel to this
12/17/2022 c1 
5Naijalight
So I read the first 3 books of the selection. And felt like it could have been so much better. So I’m eager to read thissee how it goes.
5NaijalightSo I read the first 3 books of the selection. And felt like it could have been so much better. So I’m eager to read thissee how it goes.
1/31/2022 c45 17Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarches
Aww, I'm so sad it's over, AGAIN! I have to confess, this is actually the second time I've read this story, and as it's been a while in-between, I had forgotten enough to get swept up in the tale again. My 4 year old was quite annoyed at how tired I was today, as I was up until 3 am reading last night, haha, and I finished it tonight. It won't let me review the last chapter, as I have already done so previously, so I'm writing it here. I just wanted to let you know again how much I adore this story. It's like a classy royal, but actually enjoyable version of The Bachelor, and I know it's a crossover so I may have to check out the story inspiration novels.
I also know it's been a while, and that you have so many other stories going, but if you ever do write that sequel, I'll be there with bells on! But I do hope that their twins would have a much less... violent Collection compared to their parents! Ooh, would both twins have a Collection, even if they have a girl? That would be so interesting! :)
Okay, now that I've left you an unintended essay! I'll be off. I just wanted to let you know the love I have for this. The relationship between Edward and Bella - how he was smitten with her immediately, even though she wasn't there for him in the beginning, and that she was so fierce! I loved Alice and I cried at the Conviction, I loved the Queen and Bella's maids, but my faves were Charlie, Ren, Carlisle and Esme; the strength and support they gave Bella - even at great risk to themselves, was lovely, and I loved the reveal that Charlie was a NR. Oh, and I loved Jane too! That bow and wink of hers was hilarious.
Sorry, I'm rambling again, but yeah, thank you so much for writing and sharing this, it's one of my all time fave fics 3
17Lavellan-ofthe-FreeMarchesAww, I'm so sad it's over, AGAIN! I have to confess, this is actually the second time I've read this story, and as it's been a while in-between, I had forgotten enough to get swept up in the tale again. My 4 year old was quite annoyed at how tired I was today, as I was up until 3 am reading last night, haha, and I finished it tonight. It won't let me review the last chapter, as I have already done so previously, so I'm writing it here. I just wanted to let you know again how much I adore this story. It's like a classy royal, but actually enjoyable version of The Bachelor, and I know it's a crossover so I may have to check out the story inspiration novels.
I also know it's been a while, and that you have so many other stories going, but if you ever do write that sequel, I'll be there with bells on! But I do hope that their twins would have a much less... violent Collection compared to their parents! Ooh, would both twins have a Collection, even if they have a girl? That would be so interesting! :)
Okay, now that I've left you an unintended essay! I'll be off. I just wanted to let you know the love I have for this. The relationship between Edward and Bella - how he was smitten with her immediately, even though she wasn't there for him in the beginning, and that she was so fierce! I loved Alice and I cried at the Conviction, I loved the Queen and Bella's maids, but my faves were Charlie, Ren, Carlisle and Esme; the strength and support they gave Bella - even at great risk to themselves, was lovely, and I loved the reveal that Charlie was a NR. Oh, and I loved Jane too! That bow and wink of hers was hilarious.
Sorry, I'm rambling again, but yeah, thank you so much for writing and sharing this, it's one of my all time fave fics 3
11/7/2021 c46 Guest
Great story.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
Great story.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
11/7/2021 c30 Guest
I hated that to think of Edward kissing all the girls
I hated that to think of Edward kissing all the girls
11/6/2021 c17 Guest
I hated that Bella kissed Jacob in her bed.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
I hated that Bella kissed Jacob in her bed.
Thanks for your time
Regards
LQUEZ
4/16/2021 c46 blb1000
Nice Nice wrap with the pet names. Thank you for this lovely, intricate story. 901 reviews!
Nice Nice wrap with the pet names. Thank you for this lovely, intricate story. 901 reviews!