for The Wildest Son7/31/2019 c3 XyaOuss
Nice idea, but it's bad storywise...
Nice idea, but it's bad storywise...
5/11/2019 c6 master Aaaarlong
Great! That Arlong ... has secured a threesome! I am happy with the idea. I think this is the first time I see nojiko as part of the arlong pirates. Was it the fishman who trained her with weapons? Needless to say, I can't wait to see nami and nojiko interacting with arlong, I wonder if arlong forced nojiko into dealing with him as nojiko is a more mature woman than nami. Oh well surely nami and nojiko feed towards arlong but I would like to see a bit more in tune with each other ... hated but also teacher, as doflamingo and violet.
arlong has reached the dream of fish men! Living on the earth! why should other fish men ostragize it? with violence yes, but has achieved results, jinbe should now be united with those who want to put an end to all this? I don't think it's that simple ...
Great! That Arlong ... has secured a threesome! I am happy with the idea. I think this is the first time I see nojiko as part of the arlong pirates. Was it the fishman who trained her with weapons? Needless to say, I can't wait to see nami and nojiko interacting with arlong, I wonder if arlong forced nojiko into dealing with him as nojiko is a more mature woman than nami. Oh well surely nami and nojiko feed towards arlong but I would like to see a bit more in tune with each other ... hated but also teacher, as doflamingo and violet.
arlong has reached the dream of fish men! Living on the earth! why should other fish men ostragize it? with violence yes, but has achieved results, jinbe should now be united with those who want to put an end to all this? I don't think it's that simple ...
5/7/2019 c7 Wes
Chapter 6 is a duplicate of chapter 5
Chapter 6 is a duplicate of chapter 5
10/21/2018 c5 lknjsadoi
"actual numbers when it comes to members"
So it's just gonna be a cluster fuck of random characters who get fuck all development like in Fairy Tale? What's the fucking point of making it much larger than the original crew?
Why did you make Luffy struggle in the Buggy fight? For a person who was trained under the WB and has the strongest logia he is really fucking weak
"Wild Son Pirates" sounds really stupid honestly
"actual numbers when it comes to members"
So it's just gonna be a cluster fuck of random characters who get fuck all development like in Fairy Tale? What's the fucking point of making it much larger than the original crew?
Why did you make Luffy struggle in the Buggy fight? For a person who was trained under the WB and has the strongest logia he is really fucking weak
"Wild Son Pirates" sounds really stupid honestly
9/16/2018 c4 shity cook
this is a crappy story great title,great choice of fruit but crapy writting u took away all that makes luffy all know he would nver wear anothers mark'Pirate king has no captain'
this is a crappy story great title,great choice of fruit but crapy writting u took away all that makes luffy all know he would nver wear anothers mark'Pirate king has no captain'
7/10/2018 c3 Matt
Sorry was a little woozy when reading Mr. 2's description. He's same as canon.
Sorry was a little woozy when reading Mr. 2's description. He's same as canon.
7/10/2018 c3 Matt
Meh. I mean making Morgan a good guy?! He's one of the first baddies that's shown and you've got him as nice? Also I'm really confused about who this Mr. 2's(Izo) is, along with whose good and whose bad. Also what happened to Alvida, the last we saw of her Luffy used his fruit and sucked her up.
Meh. I mean making Morgan a good guy?! He's one of the first baddies that's shown and you've got him as nice? Also I'm really confused about who this Mr. 2's(Izo) is, along with whose good and whose bad. Also what happened to Alvida, the last we saw of her Luffy used his fruit and sucked her up.
7/10/2018 c1 
1Mr. Soze
Call it a prologue, I call it a bad chapter. this introduction could have been done better by adding it to chapter 1 or just not adding it at all. Its better to show what you wanna say through events and story plot rather than just writing out what we can come to expect from your story.
It was just 2 paragraphs and double that of author's notes. Not a fan of doing that.
But, the concept as presented in the summary, could be interesting.
1Mr. SozeCall it a prologue, I call it a bad chapter. this introduction could have been done better by adding it to chapter 1 or just not adding it at all. Its better to show what you wanna say through events and story plot rather than just writing out what we can come to expect from your story.
It was just 2 paragraphs and double that of author's notes. Not a fan of doing that.
But, the concept as presented in the summary, could be interesting.
7/9/2018 c3 jurassicdinodrew
I sure like it if Vivi, along with Carue the duck, Conis and Su and Carrot and Jinbei will join the crew as well, those girls might be able to keep Luffy calm as Vivi did on Drum kingdom and Conis can use her harp music to smooth-en the tense in the crew if that happens, just an idea and all, well good luck with this story.
I sure like it if Vivi, along with Carue the duck, Conis and Su and Carrot and Jinbei will join the crew as well, those girls might be able to keep Luffy calm as Vivi did on Drum kingdom and Conis can use her harp music to smooth-en the tense in the crew if that happens, just an idea and all, well good luck with this story.
7/5/2018 c2 Awareness Bringer
A general story is a common term for something that all but forbids romance. And I rather like romance, preferably the straight ones. I don’t think Shanks was already an Emperor when Luffy was seven, but I just don’t see someone as influential as Whitebeard sailing to the East Blue for whatever reason.
A general story is a common term for something that all but forbids romance. And I rather like romance, preferably the straight ones. I don’t think Shanks was already an Emperor when Luffy was seven, but I just don’t see someone as influential as Whitebeard sailing to the East Blue for whatever reason.
7/5/2018 c1 2SebasOoalDemiurge
So, when you say that Zoro is going to be the strongest, is that physical strength, or would he beat Luffy in a fight? Considering you said that Luffy is going to be the most powerful, I'm guessing that it is physical strength. However, the way you said it left it a little ambiguous.
2SebasOoalDemiurgeSo, when you say that Zoro is going to be the strongest, is that physical strength, or would he beat Luffy in a fight? Considering you said that Luffy is going to be the most powerful, I'm guessing that it is physical strength. However, the way you said it left it a little ambiguous.