for Toy Maker's Daughter Book Two: Serpentine Chambers9/4/2018 c10 Jostanos
Calla's eyes flashed and almost white gold? Does that mean that she is close to snapping? or that she _has_ snapped? If calla _Has_ snapped.. I wonder who and or what her alt personality may be like.
Calla's eyes flashed and almost white gold? Does that mean that she is close to snapping? or that she _has_ snapped? If calla _Has_ snapped.. I wonder who and or what her alt personality may be like.
9/4/2018 c10 
4TheMarphasChappers
Oh wow, that is creative, Kudos to Night Terrors. I want to cuddle the Incubus. I should mention, I'm somewhat of an Incubus fan, thanks to Merlin from the Type-Moon universe, that is one awesome half-demon. *grins* Also, I know it's a little late but I really loved Jareth a few chapters ago, it is interesting that he is related to Calla but also because most writers forget that old movie even though it is awesome and I would love to know if you plan to bring in beings from other movies as well? Like... the Krampus? Or if we go after games, maybe the Automatons form Five Nights at Freddy's.
Ok, the thing with Calla's eyes is an awesome cliffhanger, now I really want to know what that was about. The interaction between her and Remus was just too cute, I really wanted to just cuddle her and the poor Werewolf and I absolutely Loved Leon's first appearance, he seems to be an interesting character and he reminds me a bit of a less insane Joker now that I think about it.
4TheMarphasChappersOh wow, that is creative, Kudos to Night Terrors. I want to cuddle the Incubus. I should mention, I'm somewhat of an Incubus fan, thanks to Merlin from the Type-Moon universe, that is one awesome half-demon. *grins* Also, I know it's a little late but I really loved Jareth a few chapters ago, it is interesting that he is related to Calla but also because most writers forget that old movie even though it is awesome and I would love to know if you plan to bring in beings from other movies as well? Like... the Krampus? Or if we go after games, maybe the Automatons form Five Nights at Freddy's.
Ok, the thing with Calla's eyes is an awesome cliffhanger, now I really want to know what that was about. The interaction between her and Remus was just too cute, I really wanted to just cuddle her and the poor Werewolf and I absolutely Loved Leon's first appearance, he seems to be an interesting character and he reminds me a bit of a less insane Joker now that I think about it.
9/2/2018 c9 Jostanos
Yeah.. It wasn't the best joke I could make out of it, but it was the best I could come up with at the time.
*blinks* Oh my.. Ginny is a "Calla" Fangirl? As in "Girl-Who-Lived"? *sighs* This is not going to end well.
Yeah.. It wasn't the best joke I could make out of it, but it was the best I could come up with at the time.
*blinks* Oh my.. Ginny is a "Calla" Fangirl? As in "Girl-Who-Lived"? *sighs* This is not going to end well.
9/2/2018 c9 TheMarphasChappers
Firstly, you made me really curious about that other insult you thought up *grins like L.J* also, the Fiction I talked about is Demon Bounty Hunter by sakurademonalchemist. Also, I wish you the best of luck with finding a new Job it can be difficult to find one.
Now to this chapter. I liked if very much and I find the mentions of Leon very interesting, it gets me wondering how he will be when he's 'outside' so to speak. Also... am I right when I asume that Jeff in the Kitchen Lital Weapon in the making? *snickers*
Firstly, you made me really curious about that other insult you thought up *grins like L.J* also, the Fiction I talked about is Demon Bounty Hunter by sakurademonalchemist. Also, I wish you the best of luck with finding a new Job it can be difficult to find one.
Now to this chapter. I liked if very much and I find the mentions of Leon very interesting, it gets me wondering how he will be when he's 'outside' so to speak. Also... am I right when I asume that Jeff in the Kitchen Lital Weapon in the making? *snickers*
8/23/2018 c8 Jostanos
Oh, Calla.. By saying those words.. Thou hast tempted not only Fate, but also Murphy. May the Pastas protect you from the Madness that is to come this year. *looks over by the door, facepalms, and groans* Oh Nooo! Not LEO NIDAS!
"Madness? THIS.. IS.." *Turns around and suddenly he not only has a chefs hat and an apron on, but he is also holding..* "A LOT OF SPAGHETTI!"
Oh, Calla.. By saying those words.. Thou hast tempted not only Fate, but also Murphy. May the Pastas protect you from the Madness that is to come this year. *looks over by the door, facepalms, and groans* Oh Nooo! Not LEO NIDAS!
"Madness? THIS.. IS.." *Turns around and suddenly he not only has a chefs hat and an apron on, but he is also holding..* "A LOT OF SPAGHETTI!"
8/22/2018 c8 ThunderClaw03
Great job keep it up. Hermione's and Calla's friendship maybe a bit stranded but hopefully they get back to as close to normal as there group can get. Update soon
Great job keep it up. Hermione's and Calla's friendship maybe a bit stranded but hopefully they get back to as close to normal as there group can get. Update soon
8/22/2018 c8 TheMarphasChappers
*stares at text* You Lucifer be blessed son of a whore? Now that is a new one but in the words of another fanfictions writer "In order to trash talk demons you have to get creative" I liked this chapter very much and I'll try to review more often again, I just did not have much time like at all.
*stares at text* You Lucifer be blessed son of a whore? Now that is a new one but in the words of another fanfictions writer "In order to trash talk demons you have to get creative" I liked this chapter very much and I'll try to review more often again, I just did not have much time like at all.
8/14/2018 c7 57A7IC Tarn
Okay so ive never really seen a scenario like this one and i LOVE IT! more MORE MORE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE!
Okay so ive never really seen a scenario like this one and i LOVE IT! more MORE MORE MORE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSE!
8/14/2018 c7 Jostanos
Omake: When they reached LJ's room, Vivian and Calla noticed something rather odd.. the lights were off for, seemingly, no apparent reason, but after they walked into the room?
They hear LJ's seemingly disembodied voice ask "have I any chocolates?"
Then a FANFARE plays as the lights turn on to reveal LJ surrounded not only with bright, colorful lights, but also mounds upon mounds of chocolate goodies! "WELCOME TO LAUGHING JACK'S CHOCOLATE EMPORIUM! Free to family and friends, but prices may vary for other customers."
Omake: When they reached LJ's room, Vivian and Calla noticed something rather odd.. the lights were off for, seemingly, no apparent reason, but after they walked into the room?
They hear LJ's seemingly disembodied voice ask "have I any chocolates?"
Then a FANFARE plays as the lights turn on to reveal LJ surrounded not only with bright, colorful lights, but also mounds upon mounds of chocolate goodies! "WELCOME TO LAUGHING JACK'S CHOCOLATE EMPORIUM! Free to family and friends, but prices may vary for other customers."
8/13/2018 c7 ThunderClaw03
Great job keep it up. The boys better watch what they say from now on . Update soon
Great job keep it up. The boys better watch what they say from now on . Update soon