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4/15/2019 c32 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
4/9/2019 c31 ThunderClaw03
Wiser words were never spoken. Update soon
4/7/2019 c31 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
4/7/2019 c31 4FANactic Writer
That last line slayed me! XD
4/6/2019 c31 Jostanos
Is there something that I would like to see?

Matsuo: OH! I know something that _I_ would like to see that would be an homage to an old US Children's TV show! *eye smiles*
me: *face palms* Oh no... you don't mean..
Matsuo: *Nods excitedly* Uh-huh.. Capt. Kangaroo's pal Moose's _favorite_ thing to call for.. usually in the form of knock knock jokes.

Me: *sighs* Let's get _THAT_ ball rolling : Knock-knock
Matsuo: *blinks* How come _YOU_ get to start it? *pouts* Who's there?
Me: Walter
Matsuo: Walter who?
Me: I would like to see Walter wall PING PONG BALLS!
3/19/2019 c30 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
3/19/2019 c30 Jostanos
I'm glad that Calla has regained the majority, if not all of, her Fae Magic back. I am also glad that the Devon were able to not only crack the soul shard in Calla's head, but also provide Jareth with a possible answer to their "How to get Lily out of Calla's Head and into a proper body?" question.

*chuckles* the _only thing_ that cracked was the Soul shard in Calla's head..
3/18/2019 c30 4TheMarphasChappers
I love this story more and more and with each chapter, I'm becoming more of a Candy Pop fan, I found you on Ao3 and I can't say it often enough, I love how you write the 'Candy Twins' They are very sympathetic but still demonic and I love it.
3/18/2019 c30 4FANactic Writer
All in all Calla had a good break from Hogwarts and learn some new things!~
3/14/2019 c29 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
3/14/2019 c29 FANactic Writer
This was great and look like we're in for some Fae 101 lessons!~
3/13/2019 c29 Jostanos
*sighs* Using up half of your magical energy (especially if that "half" is that of the Fae or another magical being) _may_ cause unexpected consequences in the end.
To me, it seemed like Calla _may_ have been about to _'SNAP'_ ,, But I've been known to be wrong before. :)
3/8/2019 c28 Jostanos
I agree with Hoodie, Candy Pop, and Night Terrors on this: Calla is one BAMF the you _DO NOT_ want to mess with.. ESPECIALLY when it comes to her friends and family.
To go after them is tempting Fate and Murphy to unleash Calla's "SNAPPED SIDE"!
3/8/2019 c28 FANactic Writer
Love love love the chapter!~
3/7/2019 c28 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
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