for Toy Maker's Daughter Book Two: Serpentine Chambers10/1/2018 c15 
4TheMarphasChappers
Firstly, Jeff in a Tutu without underwear... giving a person that imagination should be a crime I could have done the rest of my life without the knowledge that Jeff is going commando, so thank you for that I'm going to dunk my head in a tub of bleach in hopes it works as a makeshift self Obliviate. On another note, I find it funny that Calla seems to corrupt the others, Hermione and Vivian, with blackmail. Them and Luna could build the 'Ladies of Blackmail Club' or something. Anyway, is Calla going to get 'The Talk' from Cane? I'm asking because I read another fiction in which FemHarry got adopted by a Demon (Crowly from Supernatural) and then somehow ended up getting 'The Talk' from a Succubus by the name Pretty Poison which had some very... let's say amusing side effects. *snicker* If you want to know which Fiction I'm talking about, it's A Deal Made in Good Faith by sakurademonalchemist. Lastly, I thought the ending was very mean, I wanted to see what Jane will do to the sick blonde idiot, call me bloodthirsty but I HATE that ass.
All in all, it was a good chapter though, thank you for the update!
4TheMarphasChappersFirstly, Jeff in a Tutu without underwear... giving a person that imagination should be a crime I could have done the rest of my life without the knowledge that Jeff is going commando, so thank you for that I'm going to dunk my head in a tub of bleach in hopes it works as a makeshift self Obliviate. On another note, I find it funny that Calla seems to corrupt the others, Hermione and Vivian, with blackmail. Them and Luna could build the 'Ladies of Blackmail Club' or something. Anyway, is Calla going to get 'The Talk' from Cane? I'm asking because I read another fiction in which FemHarry got adopted by a Demon (Crowly from Supernatural) and then somehow ended up getting 'The Talk' from a Succubus by the name Pretty Poison which had some very... let's say amusing side effects. *snicker* If you want to know which Fiction I'm talking about, it's A Deal Made in Good Faith by sakurademonalchemist. Lastly, I thought the ending was very mean, I wanted to see what Jane will do to the sick blonde idiot, call me bloodthirsty but I HATE that ass.
All in all, it was a good chapter though, thank you for the update!
9/27/2018 c14 ThunderClaw03
Even though Voldemort had a messed up childhood don't mean he had to turn evil. Update soon
Even though Voldemort had a messed up childhood don't mean he had to turn evil. Update soon
9/27/2018 c14 TheMarphasChappers
I liked that Calla had sympathy for Ms. Norris and that she cut Parkinson down to size, that girl needs a kick in the ass. It was a good chapter though.
I liked that Calla had sympathy for Ms. Norris and that she cut Parkinson down to size, that girl needs a kick in the ass. It was a good chapter though.
9/14/2018 c13 Jostanos
Omake: 1) In love with Candy Pop _and_ Night Terrors.
2) Only to wake up with a gasp to find that she had only fallen out of her bed. 'Was that even real?' she wondered; then Calla notices that she is not alone in the room, and that her companions are lying on the floor in sleeping bags fast asleep. 'It is only as real as you would like the experience to have been, Calla Potter-Black-Evens-Maker!' Ivy's voice echoes in Calla's head.
Omake: 1) In love with Candy Pop _and_ Night Terrors.
2) Only to wake up with a gasp to find that she had only fallen out of her bed. 'Was that even real?' she wondered; then Calla notices that she is not alone in the room, and that her companions are lying on the floor in sleeping bags fast asleep. 'It is only as real as you would like the experience to have been, Calla Potter-Black-Evens-Maker!' Ivy's voice echoes in Calla's head.
9/12/2018 c13 TheMarphasChappers
Hm... this was very interesting so Calla will be a person that evens the scale, so to speak? That is something new... I'm very curious to see what will happen next. This was a very good chapter! Thank you for the update.
Hm... this was very interesting so Calla will be a person that evens the scale, so to speak? That is something new... I'm very curious to see what will happen next. This was a very good chapter! Thank you for the update.
9/12/2018 c13 ThunderClaw03
Interesting, someone's going to get a boot up the ass. Dad is going to need to know about this meeting. Update soon
Interesting, someone's going to get a boot up the ass. Dad is going to need to know about this meeting. Update soon
9/12/2018 c13 AceofHeartz
oooh this Ivy goddess was interesting and I'm curious about what an Equalizer is. Great chapter!
oooh this Ivy goddess was interesting and I'm curious about what an Equalizer is. Great chapter!