for The Inevitability of Oversight7/14/2022 c40 
1ssj3gohan007
Another brilliant installment! Great job, my friend! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
1ssj3gohan007Another brilliant installment! Great job, my friend! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
7/12/2022 c36 7TheButterflyComposer
oh my...this chapter touched me in how Anakin is so hurt, Palpatine is going on and on about hw horrible the galaxy is...and then someone genuinely asks if he can help, because it would be the right thing to do, and because he just cares.
it's like reading Watchmen, which at once deconstructs super heros and reconstructs the remarkable capacity of normal people to love and protect one another.
I'm catching up on updates so will be reading the other chapters soon.
7TheButterflyComposeroh my...this chapter touched me in how Anakin is so hurt, Palpatine is going on and on about hw horrible the galaxy is...and then someone genuinely asks if he can help, because it would be the right thing to do, and because he just cares.
it's like reading Watchmen, which at once deconstructs super heros and reconstructs the remarkable capacity of normal people to love and protect one another.
I'm catching up on updates so will be reading the other chapters soon.
7/9/2022 c40 bassplayer123
Interesting, are you going to bring in some elements from the Kenobi TV show? The 'trail' mentioned in this chapter sounds pretty similar to 'The Path' from the show.
Also, I want to believe Lan Supa is a good guy, but he seems sort of fishy.
Interesting, are you going to bring in some elements from the Kenobi TV show? The 'trail' mentioned in this chapter sounds pretty similar to 'The Path' from the show.
Also, I want to believe Lan Supa is a good guy, but he seems sort of fishy.
7/8/2022 c40 2OgamiRei-kun
ahahah, I wonder here what will happen, specially as Lan Supa has the perfect opportunity to kill the ambassador...and anakin to fake being the culpit, even if indirectly, if he can feel himself allowing the homicide to happen
2OgamiRei-kunahahah, I wonder here what will happen, specially as Lan Supa has the perfect opportunity to kill the ambassador...and anakin to fake being the culpit, even if indirectly, if he can feel himself allowing the homicide to happen
7/7/2022 c40 223Courtesy Trefflin
I’m glad that Anakin is so much more calm than usual when it comes to his Ambassadorial assignment. I like hearing about the discussion that Anakin and Master Xio had about the Jedi and Sith and their respective philosophies. And I love how Anakin is beginning to think of Palpatine in a different light. I do wonder how in control Palpatine really is of the Dark Side. It’s a thought to consider, at least. Anakin trying to apply the definitions of freedom to the Sith Code to try and better understand it was nice! I’m not surprised that Anakin is still having a hard time admitting that he was abused by Palpatine. Seeing the way that Palpatine is still trying to work his way into Anakin’s confidence and is using his presence to “prove a point”… Oof. And Palpatine talking about Anakin’s slave past to Orn Free Taa because Anakin will have “first-hand insight” was awful. At least Anakin knows more about how Palpatine operates, so he’ll be more prepared (not that anyone could ever truly be prepared). And the only good thing is that Palpatine doesn’t think Anakin is a time traveler. I liked Anakin talking to Taa about Twi’lek slaves. I’m not even surprised that the female Twi’lek accompanying Taa is a slave of some kind or knows one. Oof. Of course, Palpatine is enjoying the discussion. *glares* It makes sense that he’s trying to figure out if Anakin is really a secret Sith apprentice in hiding by making him get worked up and seeing if he reacts the way Jedi do. Palpatine silently offering to let Anakin kill Taa and he’ll cover up the murder was awful. I’m glad that Anakin sent a message with a codeword so he could escape from Palpatine for the day. I’m not surprised that Anakin is so scared of being left alone with Palpatine. Oof. I was a little worried that the Jedi wouldn’t be able to find a credible reason to get Anakin out of there immediately, but I’m so relieved that they did. I also really, really wonder what’s going on in Palpatine’s head right now. I wonder what he’s thinking… I loved Anakin talking to that Twi’lek! I didn’t see that coming, and I wonder how it will affect things going forwards. I loved this chapter so, so much! :D
223Courtesy TrefflinI’m glad that Anakin is so much more calm than usual when it comes to his Ambassadorial assignment. I like hearing about the discussion that Anakin and Master Xio had about the Jedi and Sith and their respective philosophies. And I love how Anakin is beginning to think of Palpatine in a different light. I do wonder how in control Palpatine really is of the Dark Side. It’s a thought to consider, at least. Anakin trying to apply the definitions of freedom to the Sith Code to try and better understand it was nice! I’m not surprised that Anakin is still having a hard time admitting that he was abused by Palpatine. Seeing the way that Palpatine is still trying to work his way into Anakin’s confidence and is using his presence to “prove a point”… Oof. And Palpatine talking about Anakin’s slave past to Orn Free Taa because Anakin will have “first-hand insight” was awful. At least Anakin knows more about how Palpatine operates, so he’ll be more prepared (not that anyone could ever truly be prepared). And the only good thing is that Palpatine doesn’t think Anakin is a time traveler. I liked Anakin talking to Taa about Twi’lek slaves. I’m not even surprised that the female Twi’lek accompanying Taa is a slave of some kind or knows one. Oof. Of course, Palpatine is enjoying the discussion. *glares* It makes sense that he’s trying to figure out if Anakin is really a secret Sith apprentice in hiding by making him get worked up and seeing if he reacts the way Jedi do. Palpatine silently offering to let Anakin kill Taa and he’ll cover up the murder was awful. I’m glad that Anakin sent a message with a codeword so he could escape from Palpatine for the day. I’m not surprised that Anakin is so scared of being left alone with Palpatine. Oof. I was a little worried that the Jedi wouldn’t be able to find a credible reason to get Anakin out of there immediately, but I’m so relieved that they did. I also really, really wonder what’s going on in Palpatine’s head right now. I wonder what he’s thinking… I loved Anakin talking to that Twi’lek! I didn’t see that coming, and I wonder how it will affect things going forwards. I loved this chapter so, so much! :D
7/6/2022 c40 49Brievel
Your writing is pure artistry. The seamless transition from emotions to actions and back again is fantastic. And I'm very curious about Lan Supa and the girl!
49BrievelYour writing is pure artistry. The seamless transition from emotions to actions and back again is fantastic. And I'm very curious about Lan Supa and the girl!
7/5/2022 c40 Lamelinam
A chapter building on the thematic of freedom, ending with this wonderful, powerful moment of recognition and sharing in a half-forgotten language.
The tension running in Palpatine's office! I just can't...
That man is a snake and I hate him, but...
"Who indeed?" Palpatine asked with a deadpan look"... pffft! He is such a great villain. And I admit he made me laugh.
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see the repercussions of Palpatine's realisation and Anakin's realisation that Palpatine has realized. I can't wait to see the gala and I'm crossing my fingers for a cameo from Padme.
This story is just amazing. You write masterful character development. Anakin has come so far, and this is reflected in his approach of the Force.
A chapter building on the thematic of freedom, ending with this wonderful, powerful moment of recognition and sharing in a half-forgotten language.
The tension running in Palpatine's office! I just can't...
That man is a snake and I hate him, but...
"Who indeed?" Palpatine asked with a deadpan look"... pffft! He is such a great villain. And I admit he made me laugh.
Another great chapter! I can't wait to see the repercussions of Palpatine's realisation and Anakin's realisation that Palpatine has realized. I can't wait to see the gala and I'm crossing my fingers for a cameo from Padme.
This story is just amazing. You write masterful character development. Anakin has come so far, and this is reflected in his approach of the Force.