for The Inevitability of Oversight7/16/2018 c1 FreelanceBum
Nope, they are dead to each other. Benny boy just said Annie was dead to him.
Nope, they are dead to each other. Benny boy just said Annie was dead to him.
7/15/2018 c1 
6Savvywolf
AAAAAHHH! I'm so excited! We're going to get so many of the interactions we've been looking for! I'm just going to die when Palpatine makes an actual appearance (hopefully Anakin doesn't though) Poor Siri and Ani, poor Obi-Wan being in the middle of this mess and not really knowing it. Sigh silly Jedi. However! Look the Jedi council is being self aware! FINALLY! No really you did a great job of slowly showing their realization that they needed to change over the course of your stories. I can't wait to see where you take this! Good luck!
-Savvywolf
6SavvywolfAAAAAHHH! I'm so excited! We're going to get so many of the interactions we've been looking for! I'm just going to die when Palpatine makes an actual appearance (hopefully Anakin doesn't though) Poor Siri and Ani, poor Obi-Wan being in the middle of this mess and not really knowing it. Sigh silly Jedi. However! Look the Jedi council is being self aware! FINALLY! No really you did a great job of slowly showing their realization that they needed to change over the course of your stories. I can't wait to see where you take this! Good luck!
-Savvywolf
7/13/2018 c1 Guest
Yay great first chapter!
Yay great first chapter!
7/14/2018 c1 1ArctureNox
Keep it coming Anne, this has been and continues to be on of my favorite little continuations on Fanfiction. Looking forward to the next bit.
1ArctureNoxKeep it coming Anne, this has been and continues to be on of my favorite little continuations on Fanfiction. Looking forward to the next bit.
7/14/2018 c1 jmeec316
Wow! So much in this chapter!
Glad to hear you are still planning for Anakin and Obi-wan to "bond" in future chapters. However, I have to admit that I'm nervous for Anakin to have to be so close to Palpatine again.
Can't wait for the next update!
Wow! So much in this chapter!
Glad to hear you are still planning for Anakin and Obi-wan to "bond" in future chapters. However, I have to admit that I'm nervous for Anakin to have to be so close to Palpatine again.
Can't wait for the next update!
7/14/2018 c1 IntelEwok
I already love the sequel, and I do trust you: with or without Anakin/Kenobi friendship.
I already love the sequel, and I do trust you: with or without Anakin/Kenobi friendship.
7/14/2018 c1 GumGumOnigiri
If you haven't already, you should watch a video on YouTube called "The Case Against The Jedi Order" by Pop Culture Detective. Very enlightening stuff.
If you haven't already, you should watch a video on YouTube called "The Case Against The Jedi Order" by Pop Culture Detective. Very enlightening stuff.
7/14/2018 c1 3doraemax
Anakin myriad issues... a naughty part of me can't help to think what would happened if Shirou Emiya was injected into this 'verse as padawan too...and someone were to clue-in to his 'broken' mentality. huhuhu...Yoda and the rest will definitely have a field day...
Surprising a lot was covered, in just a mere 'catch-up' conversation... a very good first chapter to a new 'book'.
3doraemaxAnakin myriad issues... a naughty part of me can't help to think what would happened if Shirou Emiya was injected into this 'verse as padawan too...and someone were to clue-in to his 'broken' mentality. huhuhu...Yoda and the rest will definitely have a field day...
Surprising a lot was covered, in just a mere 'catch-up' conversation... a very good first chapter to a new 'book'.
7/14/2018 c1 Duchess of Blueberries
Thank you, thank you, thank you for this! I love this series so much! It's brilliant as always!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for this! I love this series so much! It's brilliant as always!
7/14/2018 c1 DriftingOnlooker23
I rarely like recap conversations, but you did it so organically, it was quite nice. I'm actually really liking this new addition to the series a lot so far, very interested in dooku and jango. Also quite glad to hear you're still interested in obi-wan!
I rarely like recap conversations, but you did it so organically, it was quite nice. I'm actually really liking this new addition to the series a lot so far, very interested in dooku and jango. Also quite glad to hear you're still interested in obi-wan!
7/13/2018 c1 9Kelana-ti
Yay! The... for lack of a better title... Jedi Traditions Internal Assessment Committee is awesome. :)
9Kelana-tiYay! The... for lack of a better title... Jedi Traditions Internal Assessment Committee is awesome. :)
7/13/2018 c1 8Quathis
His bonding with Siri is building well, especially if people are thinking she's taking Anakin as a Padawan. Good chapter for catching us up on what has been goin on by having them catch up on news. Certainly helps in making the exposition feel natural. Also the chapter flows well from the calm atmosphere at the beginning to the feeling of anticipation at the end. Until next time.
8QuathisHis bonding with Siri is building well, especially if people are thinking she's taking Anakin as a Padawan. Good chapter for catching us up on what has been goin on by having them catch up on news. Certainly helps in making the exposition feel natural. Also the chapter flows well from the calm atmosphere at the beginning to the feeling of anticipation at the end. Until next time.
7/13/2018 c1 arisian
Glad to see the third "book" get started! I've been really impressed with the character work in this story, you've got a more plausible and consistent psychology for Anakin than just about anyone (including Lucas). I look forward to seeing where you take things plot-wise as well as character-wise, since you set up some very interesting possibilities with this chapter. Keep up the good work!
Glad to see the third "book" get started! I've been really impressed with the character work in this story, you've got a more plausible and consistent psychology for Anakin than just about anyone (including Lucas). I look forward to seeing where you take things plot-wise as well as character-wise, since you set up some very interesting possibilities with this chapter. Keep up the good work!
7/13/2018 c1 cameron1812
What a lovely start to a new "chapter" in your epic. Lovely, cautious and healing conversation with Anakin and Siri which sets the stage beautifully. Thank you - what a great way to start the weekend:)
What a lovely start to a new "chapter" in your epic. Lovely, cautious and healing conversation with Anakin and Siri which sets the stage beautifully. Thank you - what a great way to start the weekend:)