for The Inevitability of Oversight12/19/2023 c22 TheButterflyComposer
nearly up to where I caught up to last time. believe i commented something about how easy it would be to kill someone once sufficently trained in the force, such that the darkside need only mildly twist or push your mind and youd have a giant body count. vader in particualr just killed people who annyoed him. the emperor certainly did the same, and probably encouraged vader to kill more.
it is not suprisng that anakin hates that part of himself. he killed an awful lot of people for no reason, as well as several terrible and misjudged reasons. the former are peobably even harder to forgive and get over than the latter two.
nearly up to where I caught up to last time. believe i commented something about how easy it would be to kill someone once sufficently trained in the force, such that the darkside need only mildly twist or push your mind and youd have a giant body count. vader in particualr just killed people who annyoed him. the emperor certainly did the same, and probably encouraged vader to kill more.
it is not suprisng that anakin hates that part of himself. he killed an awful lot of people for no reason, as well as several terrible and misjudged reasons. the former are peobably even harder to forgive and get over than the latter two.
12/16/2023 c10 TheButterflyComposer
at this point, Palpatine has fallen for my third option: a very old sith reawakened. That doesnt leave many options for who it could be, aside from an entirely unknown creature (he'll think of that too but discount for now as uselessl.
the two most likely are vitiate or revan. both are terrible beings to contend with, as both have created sith empires and destroyed the greatest jedi and sith of their era. but of the two, vitate is the worse, because he essentially is the old republic version of palpatine but even worse. he created two empires, one sith and one in the unknown regions, ruled over the entire galaxy, effortlessly manipulated the sith and rhe jedi and even revan...and survived death more times than palpatine.
i suspect hes eventually going to plump for vitate being back, not only because hes demonstrated restorative power before but because hiding in the shadows and messing with othet sith is what he does. meaning sidious now cant even trust the plan to take over the galaxy, because its exactly the same plan viteate planted in Reven and the sith empire, before he took over both.
at this point, Palpatine has fallen for my third option: a very old sith reawakened. That doesnt leave many options for who it could be, aside from an entirely unknown creature (he'll think of that too but discount for now as uselessl.
the two most likely are vitiate or revan. both are terrible beings to contend with, as both have created sith empires and destroyed the greatest jedi and sith of their era. but of the two, vitate is the worse, because he essentially is the old republic version of palpatine but even worse. he created two empires, one sith and one in the unknown regions, ruled over the entire galaxy, effortlessly manipulated the sith and rhe jedi and even revan...and survived death more times than palpatine.
i suspect hes eventually going to plump for vitate being back, not only because hes demonstrated restorative power before but because hiding in the shadows and messing with othet sith is what he does. meaning sidious now cant even trust the plan to take over the galaxy, because its exactly the same plan viteate planted in Reven and the sith empire, before he took over both.
12/15/2023 c5 TheButterflyComposer
ok, i need to point this nitpick out because youve changed to the canon name. in the first story of this series, you refer to Palpatine as Cos or Coz Palpatine at least once.
ok, i need to point this nitpick out because youve changed to the canon name. in the first story of this series, you refer to Palpatine as Cos or Coz Palpatine at least once.
11/30/2023 c45 ThatRandomTaco
Bro died
Bro died
11/23/2023 c45 
5SandsOfTimeAndDropsOfBlood
This was really, really good, and I'm glad to see it's still being updated. I'm fairly sure that I initially read this fic after last chapter was posted, and I've been unable to access my notifications for a few months, so it's really cool to see new stuff. I really liked this chapter, too. Your characterisation of Master Windu is *chef's kiss*.
5SandsOfTimeAndDropsOfBloodThis was really, really good, and I'm glad to see it's still being updated. I'm fairly sure that I initially read this fic after last chapter was posted, and I've been unable to access my notifications for a few months, so it's really cool to see new stuff. I really liked this chapter, too. Your characterisation of Master Windu is *chef's kiss*.
9/19/2023 c45 1silverstreak93242
Greetings, salutations, and hello! I must say, first and foremost, that I have read all of the Sight stories, self-explanatory, if I'm reviewing this chapter, but...hehe..had to be said, but anyways, I digress...I haven't read any other time travel fics for the SW universe, until yours, and I find I rather enjoy the plot, premise and story line as you have presented them here! I look forward to reading more of your story for this, and I believe you indicated a 4th story for this...if I'm mistaken, then please don't take that as a demand for a 4th, LOL, but I am looking forward to more of this story, and I am planning to read some of your other stories as well! I must say, that when I have read in your AN about the trolls...yes...TROLLS...that complained, it made me mad on your behalf, because they are simply jealous! Jealous because they are unable to come up with a story such as you have, and can't make the changes like you have, and so they are taking that frustration out on you! I rather think that it takes guts and a good imagination to make the changes you have, and come up with the changes you have, so...I hope that the TROLLS that review will not bother you as much since again, their just jealous! I am hoping that this review finds you well, and continuing with ALL of your stories, and also your webcomic, and all your other creative outlets! TTFN
1silverstreak93242Greetings, salutations, and hello! I must say, first and foremost, that I have read all of the Sight stories, self-explanatory, if I'm reviewing this chapter, but...hehe..had to be said, but anyways, I digress...I haven't read any other time travel fics for the SW universe, until yours, and I find I rather enjoy the plot, premise and story line as you have presented them here! I look forward to reading more of your story for this, and I believe you indicated a 4th story for this...if I'm mistaken, then please don't take that as a demand for a 4th, LOL, but I am looking forward to more of this story, and I am planning to read some of your other stories as well! I must say, that when I have read in your AN about the trolls...yes...TROLLS...that complained, it made me mad on your behalf, because they are simply jealous! Jealous because they are unable to come up with a story such as you have, and can't make the changes like you have, and so they are taking that frustration out on you! I rather think that it takes guts and a good imagination to make the changes you have, and come up with the changes you have, so...I hope that the TROLLS that review will not bother you as much since again, their just jealous! I am hoping that this review finds you well, and continuing with ALL of your stories, and also your webcomic, and all your other creative outlets! TTFN
8/22/2023 c45 Une passante
Hi! As always, I absolutely loved this chapter! The psychological part and the evolution of the relationship between Anakin and Mace are very interesting. Thank you for sharing this amazing story! I wish you all the best for your recovery. Take care :)
Hi! As always, I absolutely loved this chapter! The psychological part and the evolution of the relationship between Anakin and Mace are very interesting. Thank you for sharing this amazing story! I wish you all the best for your recovery. Take care :)
8/15/2023 c45 Jacrame
Perfect! You came back. And it is the opportunity for me to post my first review. First of all sorry for my english. I suck at learning another language (I'm from belgium qnd speak french). Your story is really good and I think it's the best star wars fiction I've read. I always found interresting the redemption of the dark side and how to manage it (and this question is always avoided in the movie because Anakin and Ben just die after their redemption...) This "adiction" version of the dark side is really interresting and I can't wait to read the following chapters. I see you've had some burn out problems. I work in a union and have to cope with this kind of problems with workers so I know how it can take a lot from you. So... May the Force be with you ;)
Perfect! You came back. And it is the opportunity for me to post my first review. First of all sorry for my english. I suck at learning another language (I'm from belgium qnd speak french). Your story is really good and I think it's the best star wars fiction I've read. I always found interresting the redemption of the dark side and how to manage it (and this question is always avoided in the movie because Anakin and Ben just die after their redemption...) This "adiction" version of the dark side is really interresting and I can't wait to read the following chapters. I see you've had some burn out problems. I work in a union and have to cope with this kind of problems with workers so I know how it can take a lot from you. So... May the Force be with you ;)
7/22/2023 c45 1ssj3gohan007
Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
1ssj3gohan007Another brilliant installment! Great job! Well done! I love it! I am dying to know what happens next! :D
7/18/2023 c45 Valeks
Happy to see a new chapter! Always happy when I see something new for this story. I still like this story very much and will continue to follow it even if it takes a lot of years.
Also, I hope to see more of young Ahsoka :)
Happy to see a new chapter! Always happy when I see something new for this story. I still like this story very much and will continue to follow it even if it takes a lot of years.
Also, I hope to see more of young Ahsoka :)
7/17/2023 c45 48reppad98
Woohoo, a new chapter! That's great :D First of all, thank you so much for the update. It sucks that you have had a bit of a burnout, I hope things are looking up again for you! Anyway, back to the chapter, it was good to see that information about Palpatine has gotten in the right hands and that something is going to be done with it. I'm so excited to see what kind of things are going to happen when the information gets out! The therapy session was great as always, and it gives some good insights. And then the scene with Mace, very interesting! You're setting something up again, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.
Thank you very much for updating, I hope you update soon and keep up the great work!
48reppad98Woohoo, a new chapter! That's great :D First of all, thank you so much for the update. It sucks that you have had a bit of a burnout, I hope things are looking up again for you! Anyway, back to the chapter, it was good to see that information about Palpatine has gotten in the right hands and that something is going to be done with it. I'm so excited to see what kind of things are going to happen when the information gets out! The therapy session was great as always, and it gives some good insights. And then the scene with Mace, very interesting! You're setting something up again, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.
Thank you very much for updating, I hope you update soon and keep up the great work!
7/12/2023 c45 Guest
Out of Mace Windu, Yaddle or Adi Gallia, who will Anakin accept as a master? Or will he go for Siri?
Out of Mace Windu, Yaddle or Adi Gallia, who will Anakin accept as a master? Or will he go for Siri?
7/11/2023 c45 14Gracidea of the Valley
Burnout sucks, but glad to have you back!
Looking forward (as always) for what's to come!
14Gracidea of the ValleyBurnout sucks, but glad to have you back!
Looking forward (as always) for what's to come!
7/10/2023 c45 5lDragonElf
Im so happy to see this updated! It literally made my morning. Take care of yourself, your quality of writing is definitely worth the wait.
5lDragonElfIm so happy to see this updated! It literally made my morning. Take care of yourself, your quality of writing is definitely worth the wait.