for The Inevitability of Oversight7/6 c45 BobTheSkrull
I think anyone that's been in the fanfiction community long enough knows that we don't have to worry about a fic being abandoned until at least 2 years since last updating. So, don't worry too much about that part. It's nice to see you back and to see Anakin working out issues with Mace!
I think anyone that's been in the fanfiction community long enough knows that we don't have to worry about a fic being abandoned until at least 2 years since last updating. So, don't worry too much about that part. It's nice to see you back and to see Anakin working out issues with Mace!
7/6 c45 SunPhoenix90
I still wonder who will be Anakin's master. You have several good choices. If Qui-Gon is still alive he'd be the father that Annie never had but needed, Mace , a maybe uncle figure who can teach him control over both sides, and a certain other who like Annie specializes in form 5 and hates slavery, Plo Koon who's also a skilled pilot. I can't think of any others.
I still wonder who will be Anakin's master. You have several good choices. If Qui-Gon is still alive he'd be the father that Annie never had but needed, Mace , a maybe uncle figure who can teach him control over both sides, and a certain other who like Annie specializes in form 5 and hates slavery, Plo Koon who's also a skilled pilot. I can't think of any others.
7/5 c45 Shalk Zailackar
Very cool. I liked the visualization of how Windu's mind works. This sort of thing is always pretty interesting to me.
Very cool. I liked the visualization of how Windu's mind works. This sort of thing is always pretty interesting to me.
7/5 c45 Guest
Oohh yay! Another spectacular chapter! The twists and angles are so exciting! Each addition to the subplots gets me excited for more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Oohh yay! Another spectacular chapter! The twists and angles are so exciting! Each addition to the subplots gets me excited for more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
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11Haku's Lover18
Thank you for coming back! I look forward to Ani learnin Vaapad. That will be interesting to read about. Can’t wait for more! I hope Bail received one of the packages.
11Haku's Lover18Thank you for coming back! I look forward to Ani learnin Vaapad. That will be interesting to read about. Can’t wait for more! I hope Bail received one of the packages.
7/5 c43 Haku's Lover18
Awesome chapter! I’m really glad that Ani wasn’t outed as Vader. That will make things much easier for him while playing Palps. I’m also glad that Jango is thinking of going back to become the Mand’alore for his people and finding homes for his clones. I do hope though that he keeps Boba and Omega for himself though. Or at minimum those two stay together with another family at least. Can’t wait for the next segment!
Awesome chapter! I’m really glad that Ani wasn’t outed as Vader. That will make things much easier for him while playing Palps. I’m also glad that Jango is thinking of going back to become the Mand’alore for his people and finding homes for his clones. I do hope though that he keeps Boba and Omega for himself though. Or at minimum those two stay together with another family at least. Can’t wait for the next segment!
7/5 c45 Paul McKinnon
Brilliant chapter once again, I'm really enjoying how you're developing Mace. Don't push yourself too hard.
Brilliant chapter once again, I'm really enjoying how you're developing Mace. Don't push yourself too hard.
7/5 c45 5Dragon lord Syed 101
Good chapter also Mace is training Anakin all we need is the Dark Woman and the kid is going to have the full anti-Dark Side team helping him out.
5Dragon lord Syed 101Good chapter also Mace is training Anakin all we need is the Dark Woman and the kid is going to have the full anti-Dark Side team helping him out.
7/5 c45 Tony McNucklz
Huh, not often I see an original take on the vastly overused mind palace trope Sherlock inflicted on wy to many fandoms.
Huh, not often I see an original take on the vastly overused mind palace trope Sherlock inflicted on wy to many fandoms.
7/5 c45 5ShadowLDrago
This is genuinely fascinating. Poor Mon Mothma though, she's realizing how deep Palpatine has sunk his claws into the Senate.
5ShadowLDragoThis is genuinely fascinating. Poor Mon Mothma though, she's realizing how deep Palpatine has sunk his claws into the Senate.