for The Inevitability of Oversight7/12/2023 c45 Guest
Out of Mace Windu, Yaddle or Adi Gallia, who will Anakin accept as a master? Or will he go for Siri?
Out of Mace Windu, Yaddle or Adi Gallia, who will Anakin accept as a master? Or will he go for Siri?
7/11/2023 c45 
14Gracidea of the Valley
Burnout sucks, but glad to have you back!
Looking forward (as always) for what's to come!
14Gracidea of the ValleyBurnout sucks, but glad to have you back!
Looking forward (as always) for what's to come!
7/10/2023 c45 5lDragonElf
Im so happy to see this updated! It literally made my morning. Take care of yourself, your quality of writing is definitely worth the wait.
5lDragonElfIm so happy to see this updated! It literally made my morning. Take care of yourself, your quality of writing is definitely worth the wait.
7/9/2023 c45 7Te Ne'tra Mand'alor
Glad to see you’re alive and well! I hope you’re well rested.
Good Luck in all of your endeavors and God Bless.
7Te Ne'tra Mand'alorGlad to see you’re alive and well! I hope you’re well rested.
Good Luck in all of your endeavors and God Bless.
7/8/2023 c45 391Courtesy Trefflin
Ooh, I really liked seeing Mothma’s perspective! I’m not surprised that she’s realized that the Jedi know something about Palpatine and fear him, which is why they were being so careful when slipping her the information. She wouldn’t be a politician and one who started the Rebel Alliance if she wasn’t clever like that. Distributing the information publicly and pretending it was leaked so she can address it from there is the best idea, definitely. Anakin struggling a little in his next therapy session makes sense. Of course, he’s going to be in shock right now. That makes sense. I really liked Girth explaining to Anakin why it’s understandable that he’s still struggling and having to address some of the same things repeatedly. Anakin’s session with Girth and Xio was awesome! I can’t blame Anakin for being a little nervous about talking to WIndu. Lol. It makes sense that Anakin would go to Windu about learning to master the ability to use both the Light and Dark at once. Anakin explaining about the Ones was a little funny for some reason, though. Anakin’s probably giving Windu a migraine. Lol. “The look Mace shot him couldn't have been more deadpan. "Yes." Loool. He’s not wrong. "I'm guessing you want my technique for channeling darker emotions without falling." Ooh, that’ll be a fun lesson, me thinks. Partitioning… yeah, I definitely see how it could be badly misused. I really liked Windu showing Anakin how to partition. I can’t wait to see what will happen next! I loved this chapter so, so much! :D:D:D
391Courtesy TrefflinOoh, I really liked seeing Mothma’s perspective! I’m not surprised that she’s realized that the Jedi know something about Palpatine and fear him, which is why they were being so careful when slipping her the information. She wouldn’t be a politician and one who started the Rebel Alliance if she wasn’t clever like that. Distributing the information publicly and pretending it was leaked so she can address it from there is the best idea, definitely. Anakin struggling a little in his next therapy session makes sense. Of course, he’s going to be in shock right now. That makes sense. I really liked Girth explaining to Anakin why it’s understandable that he’s still struggling and having to address some of the same things repeatedly. Anakin’s session with Girth and Xio was awesome! I can’t blame Anakin for being a little nervous about talking to WIndu. Lol. It makes sense that Anakin would go to Windu about learning to master the ability to use both the Light and Dark at once. Anakin explaining about the Ones was a little funny for some reason, though. Anakin’s probably giving Windu a migraine. Lol. “The look Mace shot him couldn't have been more deadpan. "Yes." Loool. He’s not wrong. "I'm guessing you want my technique for channeling darker emotions without falling." Ooh, that’ll be a fun lesson, me thinks. Partitioning… yeah, I definitely see how it could be badly misused. I really liked Windu showing Anakin how to partition. I can’t wait to see what will happen next! I loved this chapter so, so much! :D:D:D
7/7/2023 c45 2V01dSw0rd
“To walk THDAT pathWHOOPS
“It bares repeatingit should be BEARS here, DARN HOMOPHONES! (I looked it up, to double check…)
… i wonder if stablizing the galaxy would mean that the Father can wait until after Anakin’s natural lifespan is over. Especially with the implications of the entrance to the World Between Worlds being connected to a depiction of them!
2V01dSw0rd“To walk THDAT pathWHOOPS
“It bares repeatingit should be BEARS here, DARN HOMOPHONES! (I looked it up, to double check…)
… i wonder if stablizing the galaxy would mean that the Father can wait until after Anakin’s natural lifespan is over. Especially with the implications of the entrance to the World Between Worlds being connected to a depiction of them!
7/6/2023 c45 BobTheSkrull
I think anyone that's been in the fanfiction community long enough knows that we don't have to worry about a fic being abandoned until at least 2 years since last updating. So, don't worry too much about that part. It's nice to see you back and to see Anakin working out issues with Mace!
I think anyone that's been in the fanfiction community long enough knows that we don't have to worry about a fic being abandoned until at least 2 years since last updating. So, don't worry too much about that part. It's nice to see you back and to see Anakin working out issues with Mace!
7/6/2023 c45 SunPhoenix90
I still wonder who will be Anakin's master. You have several good choices. If Qui-Gon is still alive he'd be the father that Annie never had but needed, Mace , a maybe uncle figure who can teach him control over both sides, and a certain other who like Annie specializes in form 5 and hates slavery, Plo Koon who's also a skilled pilot. I can't think of any others.
I still wonder who will be Anakin's master. You have several good choices. If Qui-Gon is still alive he'd be the father that Annie never had but needed, Mace , a maybe uncle figure who can teach him control over both sides, and a certain other who like Annie specializes in form 5 and hates slavery, Plo Koon who's also a skilled pilot. I can't think of any others.
7/5/2023 c45 Shalk Zailackar
Very cool. I liked the visualization of how Windu's mind works. This sort of thing is always pretty interesting to me.
Very cool. I liked the visualization of how Windu's mind works. This sort of thing is always pretty interesting to me.
7/5/2023 c45 Guest
Oohh yay! Another spectacular chapter! The twists and angles are so exciting! Each addition to the subplots gets me excited for more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Oohh yay! Another spectacular chapter! The twists and angles are so exciting! Each addition to the subplots gets me excited for more. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
7/5/2023 c45 11Haku's Lover18
Thank you for coming back! I look forward to Ani learnin Vaapad. That will be interesting to read about. Can’t wait for more! I hope Bail received one of the packages.
11Haku's Lover18Thank you for coming back! I look forward to Ani learnin Vaapad. That will be interesting to read about. Can’t wait for more! I hope Bail received one of the packages.