for Made for You8/24/2019 c6 Willa
Am loving this story! Can’t wait to see when the first date happens.
Am loving this story! Can’t wait to see when the first date happens.
7/30/2019 c6 VryUnique
I would have liked to hear more about why Edward changed his mind about dating before Mike interrupted. Bella being beautiful didn’t seem to be a good enough reason. She was just as beautiful the last two times he saw her. Let’s not forget that he doesn’t think he’s good for her also. I was originally wondering if Mike was secretly in love with Bella and was scared to push for more, I guess that was answered. I hope Mike and Bella’s past relationship doesn’t cause a problem for either one of them.
Garrett’s an ass who should be thankful for the opportunity he’s been given but on top of his entitled attitude we find out his drumming skills aren’t even up to par. I’m betting he is going to be a problem and looking forward to seeing what the final straw is going to be. I bet he starts flirting with Bella which will definitely cause a problem.
Is Bella going to already change her mind about going out with Edward? Rose did have a point, Bella is overly cautious. I wonder what Jacob did to her, will he be making an eventual appearance? Will Makenna?
I would have liked to hear more about why Edward changed his mind about dating before Mike interrupted. Bella being beautiful didn’t seem to be a good enough reason. She was just as beautiful the last two times he saw her. Let’s not forget that he doesn’t think he’s good for her also. I was originally wondering if Mike was secretly in love with Bella and was scared to push for more, I guess that was answered. I hope Mike and Bella’s past relationship doesn’t cause a problem for either one of them.
Garrett’s an ass who should be thankful for the opportunity he’s been given but on top of his entitled attitude we find out his drumming skills aren’t even up to par. I’m betting he is going to be a problem and looking forward to seeing what the final straw is going to be. I bet he starts flirting with Bella which will definitely cause a problem.
Is Bella going to already change her mind about going out with Edward? Rose did have a point, Bella is overly cautious. I wonder what Jacob did to her, will he be making an eventual appearance? Will Makenna?
7/29/2019 c5 VryUnique
I figured Bella was going to run into Edward at the coffee shop as soon as she said she had to meet Mike at noon. I at first assumed that would be where she was meeting Mike.
I can’t believe Rose didn’t tell Bella to blow Edward off and instead encouraged a relationship or hookup with him after he left her stranded in an alley alone. Edward used a code to get out of the club and I doubt Bella would have been able to open the door from the outside. They had to wait in line to get in so I’m sure you can’t just walk in the back door. So, again... he left her stranded in an alley.
I’m glad Bella set him straight and didn’t fold under those green eyes. I do wish she still played a little harder to get. Edward seemed adamant that he doesn’t date in the last chapter. What changed his mind about Bella? Was it spur of the moment because she kind of just gave him the boot?
What happened the night before with Makenna? Edward said it was disastrous.
At least Edward came clean, I’m looking forward to Bella’s reaction in the next chapter.
Prediction... Garett eventually gets the boot and someone named Jasper takes his place who starts dating Alice...? Am I close?
I figured Bella was going to run into Edward at the coffee shop as soon as she said she had to meet Mike at noon. I at first assumed that would be where she was meeting Mike.
I can’t believe Rose didn’t tell Bella to blow Edward off and instead encouraged a relationship or hookup with him after he left her stranded in an alley alone. Edward used a code to get out of the club and I doubt Bella would have been able to open the door from the outside. They had to wait in line to get in so I’m sure you can’t just walk in the back door. So, again... he left her stranded in an alley.
I’m glad Bella set him straight and didn’t fold under those green eyes. I do wish she still played a little harder to get. Edward seemed adamant that he doesn’t date in the last chapter. What changed his mind about Bella? Was it spur of the moment because she kind of just gave him the boot?
What happened the night before with Makenna? Edward said it was disastrous.
At least Edward came clean, I’m looking forward to Bella’s reaction in the next chapter.
Prediction... Garett eventually gets the boot and someone named Jasper takes his place who starts dating Alice...? Am I close?
7/29/2019 c4 VryUnique
I don’t think I agree with the “Edward’s not a complete douchebag” comment. He sounds like a pretty big douchebag to me. He left a girl in a alley by herself and just called another for a booty call. I really hope Bella is embarrassed enough to blow him off since she is so interchangeable to him.
If drummers are so easy to find then Garrett should be booted. The fact that he is new and they have to worry about him screwing up is enough reason. He also just admitted he wasn’t going to stop doing drugs.
I don’t think I agree with the “Edward’s not a complete douchebag” comment. He sounds like a pretty big douchebag to me. He left a girl in a alley by herself and just called another for a booty call. I really hope Bella is embarrassed enough to blow him off since she is so interchangeable to him.
If drummers are so easy to find then Garrett should be booted. The fact that he is new and they have to worry about him screwing up is enough reason. He also just admitted he wasn’t going to stop doing drugs.
7/29/2019 c3 VryUnique
I’m glad Bella was embarrassed because I was kind of embarrassed for her. I couldn’t believe she was going to let him fuck her in an alley, that did seem possible. Seth seemed like an ass, he was rude. Another one of Eddie-boys romp sessions? Sounded like he was basically calling Bella a whore. The way Edward took off was also rude, like she didn’t really matter. He should have told Seth that he would be there in a minute and give Bella at least a proper goodbye. I hope Bella learned her lesson and refuses to be treated that way in the future. Tomorrow night she’s going to realize who Edward is and I hope she doesn’t give him the time of day.
I’m glad Bella was embarrassed because I was kind of embarrassed for her. I couldn’t believe she was going to let him fuck her in an alley, that did seem possible. Seth seemed like an ass, he was rude. Another one of Eddie-boys romp sessions? Sounded like he was basically calling Bella a whore. The way Edward took off was also rude, like she didn’t really matter. He should have told Seth that he would be there in a minute and give Bella at least a proper goodbye. I hope Bella learned her lesson and refuses to be treated that way in the future. Tomorrow night she’s going to realize who Edward is and I hope she doesn’t give him the time of day.
7/29/2019 c2 VryUnique
Soooooo, did Jacob cheat on Bella. Ass. Maybe he started being mentally or physically abuse. I can’t help wondering who is going to be sexually abused or abused in this story after reading your description. I hope it’s not bad.
Soooooo, did Jacob cheat on Bella. Ass. Maybe he started being mentally or physically abuse. I can’t help wondering who is going to be sexually abused or abused in this story after reading your description. I hope it’s not bad.
7/29/2019 c1 VryUnique
I’m sure Edward is with the band. I wonder if James was just being an ass or if he’s really dangerous. A really big ass since he was acting like Bella owed him something for his patronage.
I’m sure Edward is with the band. I wonder if James was just being an ass or if he’s really dangerous. A really big ass since he was acting like Bella owed him something for his patronage.
7/19/2019 c1 KatHat4
Just to let you know, Made for You was rec'd today on The Fic Dive on A Different Forest (dot net)! Thank you for writing!
Kat
Just to let you know, Made for You was rec'd today on The Fic Dive on A Different Forest (dot net)! Thank you for writing!
Kat
7/7/2019 c6 Grandmachix
How convenient that Wolf ran into Bella. I'm glad Edward told her who he is. Maybe if they move slowly, they will eventually go on that date.
Judy
How convenient that Wolf ran into Bella. I'm glad Edward told her who he is. Maybe if they move slowly, they will eventually go on that date.
Judy
7/1/2019 c6 Midnight Cougar
Now she has to renege her refusal to the date... lol Cant wait to see how she approaches that. Thanks for the update!
Now she has to renege her refusal to the date... lol Cant wait to see how she approaches that. Thanks for the update!