
11/29/2023 c5 Eyrelav-13
It seriously captured my little heart, so... could you update this spectacular story and give us the grace and sanctity of your writing, for us your humble readers, especially to this one who asks you with all the hope and desire to read more. ..?
by fis author-san
It seriously captured my little heart, so... could you update this spectacular story and give us the grace and sanctity of your writing, for us your humble readers, especially to this one who asks you with all the hope and desire to read more. ..?
by fis author-san
7/26/2023 c5
8GwendolynD
Ok...I am glad i read back some of my favourite stories...I wouldn't have noticed this update otherwise. I also cannot believe I didn't see it earlier...
I love any of the original six (from the Marvel movie verse) with Harry. Your Harry Clint story was great and I like the idea of your Harry/Bucky/Steve.
I think you've done a great job of writing the different characters- from both Avengers and Harry Potter, even though this Harry is and entrepreneur and scientist he still feels like Harry- at least to me.
The argument about living together was fabulous, so was their reconciliation and Tony tentatively playing with Teddy. It is nice to see every chapter Harry and Tony are both realising the similarities that they have.
I'm curious as to how you are going to look into the whole magic not working with technology thing, is it going to be a non-issue, or mild inconvenience like Tony perhaps being inconvenienced if he ever wanders into the magical world, or something they'd have to work around, because I can see it being a good bonding moment if Harry and Tony to work together to have magic and technology working together.
But I can also see it being a non issue or a mild convenience as your Harry probably uses technology at work and basic mod cons at home and probably rarely uses magic.
However, I almost see him as a mix between Tony and Steve, whilst he has a strong scientific mind and does use technology, he only has what is necessary- eg at work he might only use magic as necessary as to not disturb what machines they do have, at home he might use magic a bit more so he only has gadgets that are older and hard wearing and only has gadgets/ mod cons that are necessary.
Like he has an old mobile, a tv because teddy uses it, an old car without much modern electronics, no smart gadgets etc, he might have an oven and stove top, but does he have a dishwasher? Or a washing machine and dryer? etc
Many magical homes probably use magic in place of many modern electrical things, since magic not only makes it obsolete, but if they use every day magic around the items it could cause them to combust or something...
Anyways, that is my thoughts on that small issue.
Either way I know I'll continue to enjoy the story.

Ok...I am glad i read back some of my favourite stories...I wouldn't have noticed this update otherwise. I also cannot believe I didn't see it earlier...
I love any of the original six (from the Marvel movie verse) with Harry. Your Harry Clint story was great and I like the idea of your Harry/Bucky/Steve.
I think you've done a great job of writing the different characters- from both Avengers and Harry Potter, even though this Harry is and entrepreneur and scientist he still feels like Harry- at least to me.
The argument about living together was fabulous, so was their reconciliation and Tony tentatively playing with Teddy. It is nice to see every chapter Harry and Tony are both realising the similarities that they have.
I'm curious as to how you are going to look into the whole magic not working with technology thing, is it going to be a non-issue, or mild inconvenience like Tony perhaps being inconvenienced if he ever wanders into the magical world, or something they'd have to work around, because I can see it being a good bonding moment if Harry and Tony to work together to have magic and technology working together.
But I can also see it being a non issue or a mild convenience as your Harry probably uses technology at work and basic mod cons at home and probably rarely uses magic.
However, I almost see him as a mix between Tony and Steve, whilst he has a strong scientific mind and does use technology, he only has what is necessary- eg at work he might only use magic as necessary as to not disturb what machines they do have, at home he might use magic a bit more so he only has gadgets that are older and hard wearing and only has gadgets/ mod cons that are necessary.
Like he has an old mobile, a tv because teddy uses it, an old car without much modern electronics, no smart gadgets etc, he might have an oven and stove top, but does he have a dishwasher? Or a washing machine and dryer? etc
Many magical homes probably use magic in place of many modern electrical things, since magic not only makes it obsolete, but if they use every day magic around the items it could cause them to combust or something...
Anyways, that is my thoughts on that small issue.
Either way I know I'll continue to enjoy the story.
7/12/2023 c5 hannahsanna
I hope they have a happy ending, but Harry needs to be a little more understanding. Yes, tony is the way he is, but he can't change himself in one night just because Harry doesn't like him and how he acts and just like harry is asexual tony seems to be hyper sexual so it's going to be hard to get through that barrier.
I hope they have a happy ending, but Harry needs to be a little more understanding. Yes, tony is the way he is, but he can't change himself in one night just because Harry doesn't like him and how he acts and just like harry is asexual tony seems to be hyper sexual so it's going to be hard to get through that barrier.
1/18/2023 c5 Millie072
This is a wonderful story, hopefully you'll return for an update. Tony & Teddy maybe the breakthrough both men need. Thanks for sharing.
This is a wonderful story, hopefully you'll return for an update. Tony & Teddy maybe the breakthrough both men need. Thanks for sharing.
2/13/2022 c5
1kittyranma
So much fun. I hope you get your muse back for this one soon. Keep up the excellent work.

So much fun. I hope you get your muse back for this one soon. Keep up the excellent work.
2/13/2022 c4 kittyranma
Loopholes, a concubine or develop a sexbot as someone suggested. It's not adultery if the couple brings a third-party/mate into the mix. In other words polygamy. Find a nympho for Tony, go to a country where plural marriages are aloud. Or Harry gifts Tony a concubine. Or better yet let Tony have an affair. There is no divorce... Since Harry can just give it back to Tony or even sell it back for say a dollar/pound. Although maybe magic won't allow it... we'll have to see.
Loopholes, a concubine or develop a sexbot as someone suggested. It's not adultery if the couple brings a third-party/mate into the mix. In other words polygamy. Find a nympho for Tony, go to a country where plural marriages are aloud. Or Harry gifts Tony a concubine. Or better yet let Tony have an affair. There is no divorce... Since Harry can just give it back to Tony or even sell it back for say a dollar/pound. Although maybe magic won't allow it... we'll have to see.
9/26/2021 c1 Nightstalker100
This is really good and I can’t wait to see where it gets to in the future. Hopefully you return to it soon, thanks for the hard work and stay safe.
This is really good and I can’t wait to see where it gets to in the future. Hopefully you return to it soon, thanks for the hard work and stay safe.
4/12/2021 c4 Confused Paradox
You write so well! This story is better written than some bestsellers I've read! I'm really being absorbed into the story!
You write so well! This story is better written than some bestsellers I've read! I'm really being absorbed into the story!
4/12/2021 c1 Confused Paradox
This is the first time I've ever come across an asexual character in a story and being ace myself I never realized how much that little bit of acknowledgment could mean to me. Thank you for that! Also, its the first time I've read a fic wherein the characters respond realistically to a marriage contract. You did a GREAT job writing this!
This is the first time I've ever come across an asexual character in a story and being ace myself I never realized how much that little bit of acknowledgment could mean to me. Thank you for that! Also, its the first time I've read a fic wherein the characters respond realistically to a marriage contract. You did a GREAT job writing this!