for Kaguya's Jinchuriki4/29/2023 c3 
1ChaoticAssasin
Please continue. Great writing and you still have good material left to use.
1ChaoticAssasinPlease continue. Great writing and you still have good material left to use.
3/22/2023 c1 Slick21
Haven't read you twin Phoenix story but the other two was perfect wish you still worked on em
Haven't read you twin Phoenix story but the other two was perfect wish you still worked on em
4/4/2022 c3 Guest
Come back
Come back
11/15/2021 c3 12FilthyCasual543
I really hope some way done how you come back to this and the rest of your fics
12FilthyCasual543I really hope some way done how you come back to this and the rest of your fics
9/15/2021 c1 1InHumanMan
Going to be honest this chapter was bad like really really bad. Naruto is acting like an OC after kaguya gets sealed in him. For some reason he kills Sasuke even though he has the power to just knock him out and take him back to the leaf. Not to mention you have sasuke crying like a little kid who got his toy taking away even though he could just attempt to steal the chakra from Naruto using his rennegan. Then you have kaguya being sympathetic to Naruto... Actually I can excuse that since she did see her great grandkids get raped. Naruto giving up on his dream though this complete bif anything he would think he could become Hokage forever since he can live forever. And then there's that last bit of trauma that was completely unnecessary. Your basically telling me that he's completely fine with being beaten, starved and neglected but draws the line at a raped? His whole thing where he abandons everybody because he's immortal is dumb. If anything he would be spending as much time with them as possible since he's the type of person who values bonds with people. there's more to say on this but to end this off You did a terrible job portraying Naruto in this fan fiction you were two eager to move on to the DXD universe and to give Naruto a reason to leave even though you could have just had everyone die from old age and had him move on to his next great adventure. If you did that then kaguya would have mellowed out a little by the because of talk no jutsu which works on even the most hardened of antagonist (nagato for example).
1InHumanManGoing to be honest this chapter was bad like really really bad. Naruto is acting like an OC after kaguya gets sealed in him. For some reason he kills Sasuke even though he has the power to just knock him out and take him back to the leaf. Not to mention you have sasuke crying like a little kid who got his toy taking away even though he could just attempt to steal the chakra from Naruto using his rennegan. Then you have kaguya being sympathetic to Naruto... Actually I can excuse that since she did see her great grandkids get raped. Naruto giving up on his dream though this complete bif anything he would think he could become Hokage forever since he can live forever. And then there's that last bit of trauma that was completely unnecessary. Your basically telling me that he's completely fine with being beaten, starved and neglected but draws the line at a raped? His whole thing where he abandons everybody because he's immortal is dumb. If anything he would be spending as much time with them as possible since he's the type of person who values bonds with people. there's more to say on this but to end this off You did a terrible job portraying Naruto in this fan fiction you were two eager to move on to the DXD universe and to give Naruto a reason to leave even though you could have just had everyone die from old age and had him move on to his next great adventure. If you did that then kaguya would have mellowed out a little by the because of talk no jutsu which works on even the most hardened of antagonist (nagato for example).
8/10/2021 c3 abaddon777
good chapter naruto is warming up to the woman he even let them touched him i really like the development of the characters continue the story i really like it pls update soon
good chapter naruto is warming up to the woman he even let them touched him i really like the development of the characters continue the story i really like it pls update soon
8/10/2021 c2 abaddon777
like this chapter i read many dxd x naruto crossover the ly have naruto join rias peerage and naruto loss all of his power pla updated more i like your story
like this chapter i read many dxd x naruto crossover the ly have naruto join rias peerage and naruto loss all of his power pla updated more i like your story
7/30/2021 c3 Ranmaleopard
This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue
This is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue