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4AidsNinja
I really do love this story so far. The only minor gripe I have are a few misspells and that’s it. I’m curious to see where you take this in the future

I really do love this story so far. The only minor gripe I have are a few misspells and that’s it. I’m curious to see where you take this in the future
12/31/2020 c28 E
Ayy bro, you should update this.
Ayy bro, you should update this.
11/30/2020 c28
1Fyr RedNight
Great story so far!
I really like the way how you write the characters.
But what I even more appreciate is your way to introduce the lore of the Aurbis to the people of Halkeginia. Really makes for an interesting read.
I look forward to the future chapters!

Great story so far!
I really like the way how you write the characters.
But what I even more appreciate is your way to introduce the lore of the Aurbis to the people of Halkeginia. Really makes for an interesting read.
I look forward to the future chapters!
11/20/2020 c28
1MasterXMaster
Thank you for writing this story. I just finished binge-reading it and I found it well written and fun. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thank you for writing this story. I just finished binge-reading it and I found it well written and fun. Can't wait for the next chapter.
11/14/2020 c28
1Kraftykidd
Still waiting for the awesomeness that will be the confrontation with Louise and her family. Her being able to cast normal magic, and other magic as well. It’s gonna be amazing. Also, I bet Johan could heal up her sister.

Still waiting for the awesomeness that will be the confrontation with Louise and her family. Her being able to cast normal magic, and other magic as well. It’s gonna be amazing. Also, I bet Johan could heal up her sister.
11/4/2020 c28
11Bile 1.0
I’m both dreading and excited for the inevitable confrontation between Johan and Louise’s mother (who’s name I can’t remember right now). That’ll be a battle and a half.

I’m both dreading and excited for the inevitable confrontation between Johan and Louise’s mother (who’s name I can’t remember right now). That’ll be a battle and a half.
10/19/2020 c28
15Shikaku Zetsumei
I came across this story on a whim, but I was pleasantly surprised. The plot feels unique, though it can meander at times. The writing is coherent and it doesn't feel like you're trying to copy whatever the canon material was. I'm very interesting in seeing how the conflict between teacher and family turns out.
-Zetsumei

I came across this story on a whim, but I was pleasantly surprised. The plot feels unique, though it can meander at times. The writing is coherent and it doesn't feel like you're trying to copy whatever the canon material was. I'm very interesting in seeing how the conflict between teacher and family turns out.
-Zetsumei