for Red Savior12/26/2024 c4 Sunny us
Hi! Your story was absolute joy, the characters felt so real and the way you wove emotions into the the narattion thet kept me hooked from start to finish
Thank you for sharing such a fantastic piece, this story would look great in a comic style and am thrilled to make it in comic style. I look forward to reading more stories from you!
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Addy
Hi! Your story was absolute joy, the characters felt so real and the way you wove emotions into the the narattion thet kept me hooked from start to finish
Thank you for sharing such a fantastic piece, this story would look great in a comic style and am thrilled to make it in comic style. I look forward to reading more stories from you!
My Discord: itsgametech
My intsa: itsgametech
Hope to hear from you soon!
Warm regards,
Addy
10/30/2018 c4 N2
Please continue.
Please continue.
8/10/2018 c4 Guest
What a funny thing you say amused archer? Humans are not saints. Just like what gilgamesh said before, 'Human is the name for a beast that cant rejoice their life without sacrifice'
Superman live in a wotld where everyone lives happily ever after. Reality is difffent. Thats why i hated justice league universe.
What a funny thing you say amused archer? Humans are not saints. Just like what gilgamesh said before, 'Human is the name for a beast that cant rejoice their life without sacrifice'
Superman live in a wotld where everyone lives happily ever after. Reality is difffent. Thats why i hated justice league universe.
8/8/2018 c4 Guest
Hero of justice and the CEO of the 'justice league' lol
Nice
Hero of justice and the CEO of the 'justice league' lol
Nice
8/8/2018 c4 Archer headass
isn't Shirous vigilantism also super illegal and he is killing criminals?
kinda sounds like a superman deal with the people turning against him because no one would be able to stop him if he one day decided to massacre innocents
isn't Shirous vigilantism also super illegal and he is killing criminals?
kinda sounds like a superman deal with the people turning against him because no one would be able to stop him if he one day decided to massacre innocents
8/8/2018 c4 Flamers pkk
This is seriously awesome!
This is seriously awesome!
8/2/2018 c3 Matt
I love it just please continue translating it.
I love it just please continue translating it.
7/31/2018 c3 piddle
please keep translating it this story is not only great but you definly do a better job translating then fanfiction does when you push translate
please keep translating it this story is not only great but you definly do a better job translating then fanfiction does when you push translate
7/30/2018 c2 snow in the darkness
damn i didn't expect this.I was expecting back in the original universe alaya said "damn i send him to the wrong universe"
damn i didn't expect this.I was expecting back in the original universe alaya said "damn i send him to the wrong universe"
7/30/2018 c2 Mugen-Blade
I see two problems here... first one being EMIYA tracing the key for the GoB... that sounded like bullshit, even if only opened a portal to it.
Second, the GoB store all sort of things, not only weapons, and Gil has used it to transport Shinji before. So that part also sounds like bullshit.
I see two problems here... first one being EMIYA tracing the key for the GoB... that sounded like bullshit, even if only opened a portal to it.
Second, the GoB store all sort of things, not only weapons, and Gil has used it to transport Shinji before. So that part also sounds like bullshit.
7/30/2018 c1 Mugen-Blade
Nice, the prose and grammar are solid, something that unfortunately is lacking around here.
But... i have a problem. Counter Guardians cannot disobey Alaya. Its an imposibility as they arent called slaves of the Counter Force for nothing. Alaya owns their souls and there is little they can do about that.
Nice, the prose and grammar are solid, something that unfortunately is lacking around here.
But... i have a problem. Counter Guardians cannot disobey Alaya. Its an imposibility as they arent called slaves of the Counter Force for nothing. Alaya owns their souls and there is little they can do about that.