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10/30/2018 c4 N2
Please continue.
8/10/2018 c4 Guest
What a funny thing you say amused archer? Humans are not saints. Just like what gilgamesh said before, 'Human is the name for a beast that cant rejoice their life without sacrifice'

Superman live in a wotld where everyone lives happily ever after. Reality is difffent. Thats why i hated justice league universe.
8/9/2018 c4 The Rupture
Keep it up.
8/9/2018 c4 Hiei-Uchiha
Ballin! I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/8/2018 c4 Guest
Hero of justice and the CEO of the 'justice league' lol

8/8/2018 c4 Archer headass
isn't Shirous vigilantism also super illegal and he is killing criminals?
kinda sounds like a superman deal with the people turning against him because no one would be able to stop him if he one day decided to massacre innocents
8/8/2018 c4 Flamers pkk
This is seriously awesome!
8/7/2018 c4 1Primecore
Thank you for the chapt~!
8/2/2018 c3 Matt
I love it just please continue translating it.
7/31/2018 c3 piddle
please keep translating it this story is not only great but you definly do a better job translating then fanfiction does when you push translate
7/30/2018 c2 snow in the darkness
damn i didn't expect this.I was expecting back in the original universe alaya said "damn i send him to the wrong universe"
7/30/2018 c2 Masterx01
I see two problems here... first one being EMIYA tracing the key for the GoB... that sounded like bullshit, even if only opened a portal to it.

Second, the GoB store all sort of things, not only weapons, and Gil has used it to transport Shinji before. So that part also sounds like bullshit.
7/30/2018 c1 Masterx01
Nice, the prose and grammar are solid, something that unfortunately is lacking around here.

But... i have a problem. Counter Guardians cannot disobey Alaya. Its an imposibility as they arent called slaves of the Counter Force for nothing. Alaya owns their souls and there is little they can do about that.
7/30/2018 c3 Lazymanjones96
Interesting stuff looking forward to more
7/30/2018 c2 Guest
Great job with the story and I hope you are allowed to continue to translate this story because I looks it's really good.
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