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103Lady Arreya
I'm so glad that "Field Notes" inspired you to write this story. I'll pass on your feedback to Riss. She'll be thrilled as well.
I like that Captain Janeway sent B'Elanna on a covert mission to get the encrypted files from Seven's alcove, and that B'Elanna was willing to do this.
I love the P/T scene. Tom was right, of course. Sleep is always the highest priority when you have a baby. My favorite line: "Even Seven's enhanced senses do not give her mind reading abilities."
I also like B'Elanna and Chakotay's interaction and the way you tied in "The Voyager Conspiracy."
Seven's conclusions are hilarious. I like Captain Janeway's reactions, too.
The last scene is so vivid and powerful. I love it. I'm really looking forward to reading your new stories in this series.
103Lady ArreyaI'm so glad that "Field Notes" inspired you to write this story. I'll pass on your feedback to Riss. She'll be thrilled as well.
I like that Captain Janeway sent B'Elanna on a covert mission to get the encrypted files from Seven's alcove, and that B'Elanna was willing to do this.
I love the P/T scene. Tom was right, of course. Sleep is always the highest priority when you have a baby. My favorite line: "Even Seven's enhanced senses do not give her mind reading abilities."
I also like B'Elanna and Chakotay's interaction and the way you tied in "The Voyager Conspiracy."
Seven's conclusions are hilarious. I like Captain Janeway's reactions, too.
The last scene is so vivid and powerful. I love it. I'm really looking forward to reading your new stories in this series.
7/24/2018 c1 86CaptainLyssa
I read Lady A and Riss’s piece just the other day. This is a great follow up and very believable. Voyager’s crew really are a family. One for all and all for one. You have displayed it so well using B’Elanna. By the way, I love this stronger Tom, able to say no to his wife. He really is the emotional calm to her storm. In some ways there is such a likeness between grown up Tom and Chakotay, I wonder if that’s not the reason they disliked each other initially.
86CaptainLyssaI read Lady A and Riss’s piece just the other day. This is a great follow up and very believable. Voyager’s crew really are a family. One for all and all for one. You have displayed it so well using B’Elanna. By the way, I love this stronger Tom, able to say no to his wife. He really is the emotional calm to her storm. In some ways there is such a likeness between grown up Tom and Chakotay, I wonder if that’s not the reason they disliked each other initially.
7/23/2018 c1 46jamelia116
Interesting take on the C/7 relationship's genesis. I do believe that on the ship, Kathryn and Chakotay never had a physical relationship (although on New Earth, I find it hard to believe they didn't!). Whether or not Seven would want what amounted to a platonic romance, too, is also an interesting thought. Nicely written, Beth! Thanks for sharing.
46jamelia116Interesting take on the C/7 relationship's genesis. I do believe that on the ship, Kathryn and Chakotay never had a physical relationship (although on New Earth, I find it hard to believe they didn't!). Whether or not Seven would want what amounted to a platonic romance, too, is also an interesting thought. Nicely written, Beth! Thanks for sharing.