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8/14 c47 59Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
It seems that a lot has happened. As usual, Yuuji just rolls with the punches when he is in a peculiar situation and the others are also just bowing down to the insanity.

I wasn’t expecting Tiamat to make an appearance again but here we go and the guy is most definitely showing off on his part with the fighting. And it’s clear that he is proving himself to her. The fight was something you had expected to go like.

But it’s not just him. Gasper is also on the front lines and showing off. Byakko is also testing him out to see what he can do and if he can protect Koneko. Still, he is not going overboard. It would have gone horribly wrong for the young Bat.
Still, there are few who can handle an unleashed Gasper and it’s a good thing that it’s Byakko who is handling that fallout.

With the whole point of Yuuji, the mating exercise is going on. But well, it’s rare that he can fully live himself out on her. And Tiamat just loves that.

With Kazuki, she is a genius on many other fronts. Grayfia just got a miracle worker sent her way and that is going to work on her. I wonder how this is going down. But well, if any can break that Curse, it’d be Kazuki.

With Akeno and Tiamat, that is how you expect things to go. For her, a decade ain’t that long but it’s be time enough for Yuuji when he still thinks on human terms like time.

With the First, a human/Fallen Angel hybrid. You are giving me ideas that I am not even nowhere near to implement. Screw you.

As for why I took so long, that is largely due to IRL stuff going on. Like the job. And Alcatraz festival. That was lots of fun.

I really wonder if you are either wrapping things up or if you are opening new cans of worms. Knowing you, probably both.
Saluut.
8/3 c47 JustSenseiXD-Fan
My one hope is that the TV Tropes page for it is constantly being updated to the latest possible version, ASAP… otherwise, thanks for all the lewds in your stories, Curse of Whimsy!
8/4 c47 Biblio388
Yeah, this was definitely worth the wait. Nice pickup from the previous chapter, definitely a good tone shift. Yuuji might be one of the mightiest dragon layers. Very much enjoyed the conclusion to that Arsenal mystery.
8/2 c47 InfiniteShadow3
Thannks for the chapter
5/26 c44 Apocalyptica-sama
great chapter!

everyone got so many power-ups!
4/14 c9 iikd
way too much snivelling and crying
4/14 c8 iikd
why is everyone crying all the time tho?
4/14 c8 iikd
very cliche to have a wolf familiar, but thats a minor gripe.
4/3 c46 1Spartan of Rome
So Yuuji has either been ‘kidnapped’, by maybe Vali and friends asking him to speak to Ophis who wants to talk with him (I have a few other ideas to), or he has actually been kidnapped but I don’t know by who
3/23 c46 Sora Hinokage
Kazuki: "How many of you are carrying Yuuji's children?"
(Oh, one day I would like to read the follow-up to that scene, years into the future… like an 'Earn Your Happy Ending' after all the Hell they’ve been through.)
3/22 c46 59Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov
My friend, don’t make promises that you don’t know if you can keep them. We’ll have to wait and see but I am not the only one who is waiting for the next chapter.

I can understand why you have taken a break though. We all need those. We all get busy though.

Yuuji is all too happy to have Kazuki back home and make sure that they are together again. Instead of scifi, it’s now the magical bullshit that brought her back.

With Akeno and Yuuji, they are keeping each other on their toes. She is right though. There is a lot of women who have to make up for lost time. I think that she would need to share with the others.

He got off somewhere with Hela remaking his body and he can’t keep that a secret forever. The other girls need to know that as well. But some light hearted teasing makes this a whole lot better and he has quite a big tab to repay.

She could have taken up cold water though for the girls. That would have been a lot more amusing.

Six ladies in the bath and it’s not even all of them. Yuuji really made it out for him, plus, they all want to enjoy it.

I don’t think that Rias can drink just yet and she wouldn’t be up for having the same stuff as what Rossweisse and Julia have done there but all of those women, drunk during that time, I am going to lean that it would be scary.

I almost forgot that he has Tiamat also behind him. She is only now coming back around. Plus, we also have Roygun and Yumiko after them. Funny that you are using a LN character but I have also been getting those.

Rias is right though. The whiplash is getting way too much.

He didn’t just get Kazuki back. Asako also came around. And there’s something that tells me that she is going to stay.

Julia has a lot of catching up to do with her best friend.

There is now some catching up to do with Roygun of how it all went down. There is the beautiful (cant think of a better word) of Grisaia and DxD.

I do agree there should have been more of meeting with the haremettes in this fic with Kazuki and the girls talking. But yes, the bluntness definitely runs in the family.

Kazuki is a genius, she picks up stuff really fast. But there is also a lot of gratitude involved.

But there is also the horror as more actual monsters are out there.

We also got the meeting of Byakko with Kuroka and Koneko. Why do I have the feeling you are introducing such a major character just now? But it has taken a while indeed before that he came around.

But it couldn’t last, could it? And he just promised that he wouldn’t go anywhere. That tab just keeps on growing.

I really look forward to the next chapter.
Saluut.
3/21 c46 3704550
New chapter posted: extremely happy

Reads it in 20 minutes

Sad that I have wait 3-4 months for a new chapter
3/21 c46 Biblio388
Great to see the wrap-up for this arc, the emotions are impactful. Sounds like the next chapter is going to be a blast, one way or another. Thanks for the chapter, as always.
3/21 c46 andreevmix111
well... how should I say, I'm sad that there is so little of Kazuki and her interactions with her brother.
3/21 c46 1Gill45
calling it now Kazuky will be Roygun's new queen.
Glad to see this story again hope the simple times wil go on for a bit. waiting for the Rosseweiss date. in my head she would be like the pink haired Grissaia Sempai who's name I forget. But is the only one who can match or even surpass Yuji's libido with her own. Also kinda hoping this would be it for the harem. You've done it well but love and attention are finite resources. So I'm fine with spending time with some of the more overlooked members and developing the relationships within. both with yuji and one another.
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