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3/2/2019 c1 6GlowingGem
Great work! Adeleine and ribbon are so cute!
8/6/2018 c1 Guest
That was a very nice little story.
7/27/2018 c1 10TechnoDee
(psst typo in the first line of the second last paragraph)

Adeleine self-setting a goal to paint at least one thing per month is so realistic. I like that. Even better because it's an almost-failure and she ends up procrastinating to the very deadline trying to keep at it. Procrastination is the foundation of humanisation. No printer only fax.

I do have a complaint that Adeleine's mood swings an almost-one-eighty after Ribbon said just only one or two lines that were inspiring but not that inspiring to the point it would move someone like that. Then again, the mind is a finicky thing and Adeleine is ever the optimist... hm. Well, it's inconsequential so don't mind it.

Waddle Dee nuzzling Adeleine's thigh—too cute. I died. I was dead for 9 words.

Kirby intending to visit but never having the time because Life Is Hard and Dedede being a softie when it comes to group hugs. This was good. Life is good.
7/26/2018 c1 Guest
Nice story but kirby talking always weirds me out
7/26/2018 c1 Guest
Nice fanfiction! Hyped for Wave 2! :D
7/26/2018 c1 3FanficLovingPerson
Beautiful, I love this so much

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