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11/16/2019 c1 41Blyssabella
So good UwU
8/9/2018 c1 12noukinav018
That was intense, but beautifully you for this wonderful one shot.
Happy writing!
7/30/2018 c1 Cartoonlover422
1.) Yea...I was just about to say that! XD Cause it was only a matter of time for someone to find out or it! XD
2.) He’s ether with Webby, or somewhere with that orb...
3.) XD
4.) Ohhhh noooo! O.O
5.) Before you go a head and get mad, HE DIDN’T TELL YA’LL TO PROTECT YA’LL!
6.) Now Huey...
7.) HE WAS GOING TO TELL YOU GUYS, BUT HE WASN’T SURE FROM WHAT HE FOUND OUT, SO HE DECIDED NOT TO SO THAT HE COULD PROTECT YOU TWO!
8.) Well...it’s his room too sooooo...
9.) Ohhh noooo...LOUIE! WALK BACK! TURN AROUND! PLZZZZ! XC
10.) Ohhh Louieeee...just turn arounddd! XC
11.) No no no no noooooo! XC
12.) SEE!
13.) At least they don’t know that he told Webby instead of them... O.O
14.) Uhhhh LOUIE WHAT?! THAT IS NOT EVEN CLOSE TO WHAT’S GONNA HAPPEN! THAT LITERALLY MAKES NO SENSE!
15.) LANGUAGE!
16.) Dewey honeyyy noooo! XC *hugs him* I’m here!
17.) LOUIE YOU DO CARE! STOP PLZ! XC
18.) I just wished you could of explained that to them better...maybe they would of understood better...
19.) They will Dew...they will... ;(
20.) Oh Webby...only you could brighten the darkness...your friend needs company...and your the right person for the job! :)
21.) OH MY BABY! XC WEBBY HUG HIM PLZ, CAUSE I CAN’T!
22.) They will forgive ya sooner or later Dew!
23.) Deweyyyyy!
24.) Webby, your the best sweet heart!
25.) Awww!
26.) Oh Webby! XD
27.) At least he spoke back...
28.) I’m hoping Louie’s east dropping some how...
29.) Dewey’s truly amazing... :)
30.) XD
31.) Uhhhhmmm wellll abouttt thattttt...O.O
32.) Now the hard part...LOUIE! O.O
33.) Ohhh that just shatters me...
34.) Louieeee it’s ok to cry...
35.) LOUIE THAT WILL NEVER HAPPEN! XC
36.) Oh Louie...;(
37.) Let me tell ya Lou, you’ll be the rich one! Dewey would the adventurer, while Huey, the explorer! ;)
38.) AWWWW! XC *sobs*
39.) *heart shatters everywhere* (I’m literally crying right now!)
40.) OHH MY LOU LOU! XC *hugs him sobing*
41.) Ok then, you have to tell them that Webby already knows, THEN you can keep the promise!
42.) THIS WAS SOOOO BEAUTIFUL AND SAD OMGOSH! XC
7/28/2018 c1 55Transformers 0
I love this in-depth story of Huey and Louie finally discovering the truth.
Here's to hoping that next week's episode, covering this issue, will exceed our expectations.
7/28/2018 c1 4SorceriesOfOld
This was really good, you explained Dewey's reason really well it could be what Dewey would say in the show. Heck, this story could be an episode, but probably while they're adventuring or after off-screen adventuring. And that very last sentence literally made me grin like an idiot, Bravo for putting that. Bravo *applauds*
7/27/2018 c1 Trailsman
Wow.
That was surprisingly good for a one-shot fic.
Still BEYOND better than what most of the Doraemon fandom creates online.
7/26/2018 c1 Lorrey020
This was such a sweet story! I was surprised Louie was thinking Della might be a bad person like Dewey was. And his fear of abandonment feels very in character. This was a cute story. And very satisfying too.
7/26/2018 c1 Guest
This was a really good fanfiction. I'm the kind of person who likes A LOT of sadness and loves drama. It has everything i love!

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