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4/27/2019 c1 2Mimajo
You used too many pauses and new paragraphs. You use new paragraphs when someone new is speaking, a change of setting, or a change in time. I love the story though!
7/30/2018 c1 4DaLadyofSouls
This could be the beginning of an AU epic! Well done!
7/29/2018 c1 20bajy
Great job here!

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