for A Period of Adjustments5/24/2023 c15 
1BreyerNut
I wish there was more of a conclusion here...but this was as good as the previous story...great characters...
1BreyerNutI wish there was more of a conclusion here...but this was as good as the previous story...great characters...
9/13/2020 c1 2starsgoblue52
I love your stories. You write so well. Characters are perfectly done. Plot is interesting and moves smoothly. It’s such a pleasure to read. I’ve really been enjoying them all. Can’t wait to read more! (Hint, hint)
2starsgoblue52I love your stories. You write so well. Characters are perfectly done. Plot is interesting and moves smoothly. It’s such a pleasure to read. I’ve really been enjoying them all. Can’t wait to read more! (Hint, hint)
10/16/2018 c15 Sara
I was not expecting Chapter 15 to be the final chapter of this story on first read. Given Jostan's explanation it makes sense, and I see how things were wrapped up. Thrilled to hear there will be another story soon because I wonder what's up with Johnson, and Pete and Sally.
I was not expecting Chapter 15 to be the final chapter of this story on first read. Given Jostan's explanation it makes sense, and I see how things were wrapped up. Thrilled to hear there will be another story soon because I wonder what's up with Johnson, and Pete and Sally.
10/15/2018 c15 5JOSTAN
Hi Folks,
As you can see, I have marked this story as complete. Yes, I know, but this story was about relationships instead of action. The partners have decided to take the exams and deal with the fallout together. I feel like Pete and Ed have reached a good place as far as understanding each other. I want to end that way.
As for the dropped hints about Tony, I do have the first chapter of a new story dealing with that done. As soon as I figure out a title, I will post it.
Thanks again for reading my stories.
~J~
5JOSTANHi Folks,
As you can see, I have marked this story as complete. Yes, I know, but this story was about relationships instead of action. The partners have decided to take the exams and deal with the fallout together. I feel like Pete and Ed have reached a good place as far as understanding each other. I want to end that way.
As for the dropped hints about Tony, I do have the first chapter of a new story dealing with that done. As soon as I figure out a title, I will post it.
Thanks again for reading my stories.
~J~
10/12/2018 c15 P413
Plot twist: Ed really IS a hero.
But honestly, I’m glad you didn’t make him a bad guy. I always liked him. Though I can’t really say why. It’s one of those mysteries things.
And yes, I’m still reading and waiting to see how it all ends. Can’t wait.
Plot twist: Ed really IS a hero.
But honestly, I’m glad you didn’t make him a bad guy. I always liked him. Though I can’t really say why. It’s one of those mysteries things.
And yes, I’m still reading and waiting to see how it all ends. Can’t wait.
10/8/2018 c14 Sara
I knew it. I sensed the guys are in trouble - or at least one of them is in for it. Thanks for the update. Can’t wait for more...
I knew it. I sensed the guys are in trouble - or at least one of them is in for it. Thanks for the update. Can’t wait for more...
10/8/2018 c14 AllTrekkedUp
Great chapter! Wonderful way to start a Monday off. Really liked the scene between Mac and Pete.
Great chapter! Wonderful way to start a Monday off. Really liked the scene between Mac and Pete.
10/7/2018 c14 5JOSTAN
Hi!
I'm sorry for the delay in posting, but real life got in the way. I know it's short, but I wanted to at least give you a small update so you would know that I haven't forgotten you or the story.
I promise the next chapter will come out faster than this one did.
~J~
5JOSTANHi!
I'm sorry for the delay in posting, but real life got in the way. I know it's short, but I wanted to at least give you a small update so you would know that I haven't forgotten you or the story.
I promise the next chapter will come out faster than this one did.
~J~
9/26/2018 c13 Sara
I am very interested to see what happens in the next chapter. I'm think Reed and Malloy are headed for trouble. Don't keep us in suspense.
I am very interested to see what happens in the next chapter. I'm think Reed and Malloy are headed for trouble. Don't keep us in suspense.
9/26/2018 c13 5AllTrekkedUp
This was so enjoyable. A great thing to wake up to! Loved the phone call between Pete and his mother.
5AllTrekkedUpThis was so enjoyable. A great thing to wake up to! Loved the phone call between Pete and his mother.
9/17/2018 c12 Sara
I echo All Trekked Up's post: great chapter and I'm on the edge of my seat, playing guessing games on what will happen next. Didn't expect to see Pete's mother mentioned in the last graf of chapter 12. Hate to see this story come to an end.
I echo All Trekked Up's post: great chapter and I'm on the edge of my seat, playing guessing games on what will happen next. Didn't expect to see Pete's mother mentioned in the last graf of chapter 12. Hate to see this story come to an end.
9/17/2018 c12 AllTrekkedUp
Great chapter. So glad to see them get this out in the open but now I am on the edge of my seat about what will happen next.
Great chapter. So glad to see them get this out in the open but now I am on the edge of my seat about what will happen next.
9/16/2018 c12 Anonymous
Hello Jostan,
Thank you for the clarification and information on the episode with Mr. Herman in the ambulance. I was really joking around by using that example. I hope I didn't offend. I'd expect Jim to have a better memory; not our busy writers.
I'm looking forward to more of this story...
Hello Jostan,
Thank you for the clarification and information on the episode with Mr. Herman in the ambulance. I was really joking around by using that example. I hope I didn't offend. I'd expect Jim to have a better memory; not our busy writers.
I'm looking forward to more of this story...
9/16/2018 c11 5JOSTAN
As angry as Jim was, I don't know that he would remember that night quickly enough to throw it back at Pete. Even if he did, one time over a partnership wouldn't prove Jim's arguement. Besides, Pete rode with Mr. Herman in order to get a statement in case the man died. That would usually be done by the senior officer, depending on the experience of the junior one.
Thanks again for following my story. It's almost done.
~J~
5JOSTANAs angry as Jim was, I don't know that he would remember that night quickly enough to throw it back at Pete. Even if he did, one time over a partnership wouldn't prove Jim's arguement. Besides, Pete rode with Mr. Herman in order to get a statement in case the man died. That would usually be done by the senior officer, depending on the experience of the junior one.
Thanks again for following my story. It's almost done.
~J~