
3/11 c39 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
3/5 c39 OrkinEX78
Dude...how have you not written your own book yet? The way you write scenes, whether fight scenes or just normal dialogue, makes the reader WANT to read more. It makes me eager to read the next chapter, and I'm happy to wait if each chapter is the same quality as this. :)
Dude...how have you not written your own book yet? The way you write scenes, whether fight scenes or just normal dialogue, makes the reader WANT to read more. It makes me eager to read the next chapter, and I'm happy to wait if each chapter is the same quality as this. :)
2/20 c38 damienfoxy
so, when are you gonna break Brianna down and teach her some manners? cause by the looks of it, they're gonna need to put her down cause of power hunger.
so, when are you gonna break Brianna down and teach her some manners? cause by the looks of it, they're gonna need to put her down cause of power hunger.
2/8 c38 Weasselk
Yeh, another good chapter, and lots happening. Loving it. Hope they wil deal with the city things and lords fast, cant wait for them to get to the dwarven city at last. And yes, just want Miara get onto hang out with dwarven smith masters.
And sweet to see you getting more fanart, this story deserves way more arts. Too bad the site doesnt have options to add images (at least In not aware if its possible or not).
Yeh, another good chapter, and lots happening. Loving it. Hope they wil deal with the city things and lords fast, cant wait for them to get to the dwarven city at last. And yes, just want Miara get onto hang out with dwarven smith masters.
And sweet to see you getting more fanart, this story deserves way more arts. Too bad the site doesnt have options to add images (at least In not aware if its possible or not).
2/7 c38 Vampirenick
Great story man can't get the links to work sadly would love the link to discord though. Also to the person below me fuck off!
Great story man can't get the links to work sadly would love the link to discord though. Also to the person below me fuck off!
2/6 c38 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
2/4 c38 Rios
Story is still looking great
Tried to copy and paste links, it doesn't work
Story is still looking great
Tried to copy and paste links, it doesn't work