for Luffy's New Game Plus2/12/2020 c1 Guest
Hope you update this story. I really want to see it because compared to your other story luffy is of age and lemon can happen.
Hope you update this story. I really want to see it because compared to your other story luffy is of age and lemon can happen.
11/13/2019 c1 Guest
Of course you made him not put anything in intelligence, lame.
Of course you made him not put anything in intelligence, lame.
4/4/2019 c1 Guest
i realise you havent updated anything since last year i really hope your ok and if you are that you can update this the bleach and harry potter stories soon
i realise you havent updated anything since last year i really hope your ok and if you are that you can update this the bleach and harry potter stories soon
11/13/2018 c1 HAEVs Sha
Luffy 17 years old is weak like a new born baby. And became strong in a day? Wtf?!
Luffy 17 years old is weak like a new born baby. And became strong in a day? Wtf?!
10/28/2018 c1 VoidGivenForm
No pls. I need a One Piece Gamer-fic. Please...
I. NEED. IT.
*Insert crazed tone, bloodshot red eyes, and frothing mouth.*
No pls. I need a One Piece Gamer-fic. Please...
I. NEED. IT.
*Insert crazed tone, bloodshot red eyes, and frothing mouth.*
9/30/2018 c1 
1TheGreatBubbaJ
Interesting stuff, and nice to finally see a story where the main is a dumbass and seems likely to remain so. I will suggest that luck and charm bump up a bit since that was something he had in spades, but otherwise I look forward to reading more, and maybe even a bigger 'core' crew.
1TheGreatBubbaJInteresting stuff, and nice to finally see a story where the main is a dumbass and seems likely to remain so. I will suggest that luck and charm bump up a bit since that was something he had in spades, but otherwise I look forward to reading more, and maybe even a bigger 'core' crew.
9/3/2018 c1 2Xerzo LotCN
i got around to checking this one out its kinda not fair you cant do a save wipe on a NG1 at least have started him eariler as a kid or after ace left (that make the most sense though the prefered is pre shanks arm but have luffy know to let sabo go) or taken a few key memories so events he basically fucked since canon luffy mostly steamrolled through most early things and zoro was probably10 times stronger then dadan mountain bandit momma who he 2/3rds as strong as at least have given him like a percentage of his first game stats and level if your not gonna start him with prep time their difficult and then their bullshit every things hard and he not even a percent as powerful as he was at the start last time
also what about the exp he got from killing the lvl 100 sea king that should be some decent exp also why only 10% of their exp thats uber unfair
2Xerzo LotCNi got around to checking this one out its kinda not fair you cant do a save wipe on a NG1 at least have started him eariler as a kid or after ace left (that make the most sense though the prefered is pre shanks arm but have luffy know to let sabo go) or taken a few key memories so events he basically fucked since canon luffy mostly steamrolled through most early things and zoro was probably10 times stronger then dadan mountain bandit momma who he 2/3rds as strong as at least have given him like a percentage of his first game stats and level if your not gonna start him with prep time their difficult and then their bullshit every things hard and he not even a percent as powerful as he was at the start last time
also what about the exp he got from killing the lvl 100 sea king that should be some decent exp also why only 10% of their exp thats uber unfair