for The Truth11/23/2018 c1 Guest
Aww! This was REALLY sweet and adorable and exactly how I think this would go. Great job.
Oh also there's this Jason Aldean song called the truth... Kinda reminds me of the force awakens at times...
Just don't tell them I've gone crazy/that I'm still strung out over you/tell them anything you want to/just don't tell them all the truth/yeah don't tell them all the truth
The truth is I'm asking you to lie/we both know that it ain't right/and if you ever loved me please/have some mercy on me
Tell them anything you want to/just don't tell them all the truth/don't tell them all the truth/I still need you/yeah that's the truth/I still love you/baby that's the truth
Yeah I don't need my heart
Aww! This was REALLY sweet and adorable and exactly how I think this would go. Great job.
Oh also there's this Jason Aldean song called the truth... Kinda reminds me of the force awakens at times...
Just don't tell them I've gone crazy/that I'm still strung out over you/tell them anything you want to/just don't tell them all the truth/yeah don't tell them all the truth
The truth is I'm asking you to lie/we both know that it ain't right/and if you ever loved me please/have some mercy on me
Tell them anything you want to/just don't tell them all the truth/don't tell them all the truth/I still need you/yeah that's the truth/I still love you/baby that's the truth
Yeah I don't need my heart
8/7/2018 c1 
17WritingElephant
Ahahaha I like this, I like how awkward you made Han. This was a really solid scene. I could absolutely see it fitting into the source material. I was a little confused by Leia's reaction before Han cracks out the rock. Why is she glaring at him? Because he's being overly casual? Because of her inner conflicts? I feel the scene would have been stronger if that was made clearer. But I can't think of any other criticisms. This was lovely and warm and I'm head canoning it.
17WritingElephantAhahaha I like this, I like how awkward you made Han. This was a really solid scene. I could absolutely see it fitting into the source material. I was a little confused by Leia's reaction before Han cracks out the rock. Why is she glaring at him? Because he's being overly casual? Because of her inner conflicts? I feel the scene would have been stronger if that was made clearer. But I can't think of any other criticisms. This was lovely and warm and I'm head canoning it.
7/31/2018 c1 Guest
Interesting but needed conversation there.
Interesting but needed conversation there.
7/29/2018 c1 Guest
Thank you for this lovely and heartwarming story.
Loved the tension you have built up between Leia' s anguish and Han' s growing insecurity until finally everything is out in the open.
Thank you for this lovely and heartwarming story.
Loved the tension you have built up between Leia' s anguish and Han' s growing insecurity until finally everything is out in the open.