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8/25/2019 c1 2k+Hawki
Been ages since I’ve read the book, so I had to look up who Bid’daum even was. So, when I ask about dragons purring, maybe I’m also forgetting that being a nugget of information.

Anyway, it’s okay. It starts off as what feels like fluff, but then drama happens, so nice job there. I will say the ending is a bit awkward though. The whole “wasn’t due to the pain,” feels like part of a paragraph rather than the end of one. Maybe making it a new line would help.

Still, decent.
8/27/2018 c1 JustAnotherWildDragon
Hi there, a good one shot you made there.
I liked your characters but for me the story could have been a hit longer. I would love to know how u continue this if you decide to.
Feyndal
8/5/2018 c1 6RedRebelPirate
It's a bit outside of what I imagined going by the canon, but beautiful none the less.

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