for Heart of the Storm5/9 c48 
3AllThingWeird35
This moment is like your first born being born; FINALLYY such a beautiful fic
3AllThingWeird35This moment is like your first born being born; FINALLYY such a beautiful fic
3/9 c67 7savethemadscientist
I'm wondering if you managed to get the beta readers that you were looking for and hope you can now get PMs again. I hope everything in going well for you and that you can get around to posting the sequel soon.
7savethemadscientistI'm wondering if you managed to get the beta readers that you were looking for and hope you can now get PMs again. I hope everything in going well for you and that you can get around to posting the sequel soon.
2/6 c2 Iamacceptable
Had to come back bc I missed Hartley so much love her so much, I’m going read a chapter where’s she’s having fun
Had to come back bc I missed Hartley so much love her so much, I’m going read a chapter where’s she’s having fun
1/9 c67 Iamacceptable
I am absolutely so obsessed with this story. I watch doctor who now and find myself thinking, “where’s Hartley?” I’m left awestruck at the way you’ve intertwined her into this massive, complex universe. If I knew about doctor who in a way that would do this story justice and had any experience, I would jump at the chance to beta. Unfortunately I have yet to finish the show. I told myself I would stop reading until I finished season 2 but this was too good to stop reading. I made an acc just to follow this story and hopefully leave a review abt how much I enjoyed it. I hope you find perfect betas and have a ton of fun writing the sequel. Obviously I’m super excited for it. I have a feeling Eleven would be amazing in your voice. Thank you so much for this and I can’t wait for more!
I am absolutely so obsessed with this story. I watch doctor who now and find myself thinking, “where’s Hartley?” I’m left awestruck at the way you’ve intertwined her into this massive, complex universe. If I knew about doctor who in a way that would do this story justice and had any experience, I would jump at the chance to beta. Unfortunately I have yet to finish the show. I told myself I would stop reading until I finished season 2 but this was too good to stop reading. I made an acc just to follow this story and hopefully leave a review abt how much I enjoyed it. I hope you find perfect betas and have a ton of fun writing the sequel. Obviously I’m super excited for it. I have a feeling Eleven would be amazing in your voice. Thank you so much for this and I can’t wait for more!
1/5 c56 Guest
I really love your writing, and after a long time I have enjoyed a fan fiction.
I can't wait for the sequel to be posted, I am very eagerly awaiting it.
Please keep up the good work.
I really love your writing, and after a long time I have enjoyed a fan fiction.
I can't wait for the sequel to be posted, I am very eagerly awaiting it.
Please keep up the good work.
11/24/2024 c67 Celestialite
Sadly, I am not caught up with the show an mostly know it from fanfiction, but I'm rooting for you! If you ever do write the sequel, I'll be right here
(I should really see if I can still access my old account)
Sadly, I am not caught up with the show an mostly know it from fanfiction, but I'm rooting for you! If you ever do write the sequel, I'll be right here
(I should really see if I can still access my old account)
11/11/2024 c45 2sweetanarchy22
I would've actually like to see Hartley on her own for a while. To see how she is by hereself without the Doctor or even Jack. To try to process her trauma on her own and get some space from everything. Maybe even evaluate her own choice of staying with the Doctor, questioning it over a period of time, before ultimately choosing him again. A new territory for both of them. Her staying after everything just happened felt like a punch to the gut. Like all the sufferring she went through, and the suffering we as the reader went through with her, didn't matter. Even though you say she's not fully healed, it still feels swept under the rug. Only something affecting her in small moments, but not her relationship with the doctor. I wanted her to be angry. I was angry for her. I just feel like we could've had more time with her being angry with him. Feeling abandoned by him. Again. To eventually feel what he's felt and understand him and forgive him yes, but to focus on herself more. Her own feelings. Her own sorrow. To spare some of all that Heart for herself! Now it feels like she's constantly forgiving him, being understanding of him, constantly GIVING in the relationship whenever SHE'S HURT. It feels like a power imbalance that I don't quite like. Hopefully this next chapter will be better. I still think her taking a break from it all to process everything would've helped. Not only for her character but also for us the reader to have time to feel angry and sad and resentful and to have a segueway into forgiveness and acceptance. Because I already know and love the Doctor, but I've now fallen in love with Hartley and I'd like to see how she fares on her own for a while. Thanks for the chapter though. You are an excellent writer.
2sweetanarchy22I would've actually like to see Hartley on her own for a while. To see how she is by hereself without the Doctor or even Jack. To try to process her trauma on her own and get some space from everything. Maybe even evaluate her own choice of staying with the Doctor, questioning it over a period of time, before ultimately choosing him again. A new territory for both of them. Her staying after everything just happened felt like a punch to the gut. Like all the sufferring she went through, and the suffering we as the reader went through with her, didn't matter. Even though you say she's not fully healed, it still feels swept under the rug. Only something affecting her in small moments, but not her relationship with the doctor. I wanted her to be angry. I was angry for her. I just feel like we could've had more time with her being angry with him. Feeling abandoned by him. Again. To eventually feel what he's felt and understand him and forgive him yes, but to focus on herself more. Her own feelings. Her own sorrow. To spare some of all that Heart for herself! Now it feels like she's constantly forgiving him, being understanding of him, constantly GIVING in the relationship whenever SHE'S HURT. It feels like a power imbalance that I don't quite like. Hopefully this next chapter will be better. I still think her taking a break from it all to process everything would've helped. Not only for her character but also for us the reader to have time to feel angry and sad and resentful and to have a segueway into forgiveness and acceptance. Because I already know and love the Doctor, but I've now fallen in love with Hartley and I'd like to see how she fares on her own for a while. Thanks for the chapter though. You are an excellent writer.
11/7/2024 c66 TheGuardianoftimeandspace
I cry every time I re-read this, the Doctors honesty and vulnerability in that moment hurts my heart.
I cry every time I re-read this, the Doctors honesty and vulnerability in that moment hurts my heart.
10/13/2024 c57 raspberry-fields
i loooove this chapter rewrite and can't wait to see what these changes will bring to the story!
i loooove this chapter rewrite and can't wait to see what these changes will bring to the story!
10/7/2024 c18 2Walker 19049
It kinda hurts reading doctor saying everyone leaves him when it's equally true that he does the same too. He left Jack and Hart there, without an explanation, without even looking back. It hurts to think that way, how Jack and she felt, looking to Doctor as one hope for all those years. Its painful on both ends and I hate it, lol
2Walker 19049It kinda hurts reading doctor saying everyone leaves him when it's equally true that he does the same too. He left Jack and Hart there, without an explanation, without even looking back. It hurts to think that way, how Jack and she felt, looking to Doctor as one hope for all those years. Its painful on both ends and I hate it, lol
10/7/2024 c16 Walker 19049
Huh, so they became the undying pair? Never thought I'll see any fanfic explore this path but can't say I don't love it
Huh, so they became the undying pair? Never thought I'll see any fanfic explore this path but can't say I don't love it
10/7/2024 c15 Walker 19049
God, your writing style is absolutely amazing. Each emotion is written so well, expressed so immaculately that it's amazing
God, your writing style is absolutely amazing. Each emotion is written so well, expressed so immaculately that it's amazing
10/7/2024 c13 Walker 19049
Loved the way Jack is portrayed but loved our girl Hart's chemistry with him even more. Not to mention, the beauty of the universe point was so well put that it even put me into a thought spiral, lol. Also, TARDIS Mum seems like a job much needed and well cut out for our girl. All of the resta really children and they do need constant supervision
Loved the way Jack is portrayed but loved our girl Hart's chemistry with him even more. Not to mention, the beauty of the universe point was so well put that it even put me into a thought spiral, lol. Also, TARDIS Mum seems like a job much needed and well cut out for our girl. All of the resta really children and they do need constant supervision