for From Heads Unworthy3/9/2019 c19 Nell
I like that you made Bellatrix a good, loyal sister. It makes her human and not the caricature she was in canon.
The Unlikely Trio -Ron, Hermione, Narcissa (!)- never seems to catch a breath. It's such a mess.
And Alecto is fun.
A 'Voldemort wins' that I enjoy a lot. Keep it up!
I like that you made Bellatrix a good, loyal sister. It makes her human and not the caricature she was in canon.
The Unlikely Trio -Ron, Hermione, Narcissa (!)- never seems to catch a breath. It's such a mess.
And Alecto is fun.
A 'Voldemort wins' that I enjoy a lot. Keep it up!
2/27/2019 c3 JustAnoth3rFan
This story had me on the edge of my seat you write action very well and bellatrix helping them nice twist keen for your next chapter
This story had me on the edge of my seat you write action very well and bellatrix helping them nice twist keen for your next chapter
1/23/2019 c18 Neneja
Wow that's quite a frightful story, I couldn't stop reading! I hope there will be a new chapter soon
Wow that's quite a frightful story, I couldn't stop reading! I hope there will be a new chapter soon
1/19/2019 c18 
13Jaely
I hope family becomes more important to Bella than ‘Her Dark Lord’ as I can see that might be the only way they will survive let alone win. I also hope Narcissa tells Bella she should look after Andromeda and Teddy. Though if you are going with canon then Bella might not care considering Bella was the one that killed Dora in the first place. It will be interesting to see how this all pans out.
Ron’s thoughts on right and wrong are going to have to expand if he doesn’t want to get himself or the others hurt or killed. I’ve actually liked seeing him grow from the prat that can’t see past the end of his nose to someone that is more open over the course of this story. It’s not a common track people take with Ron. I actually hope to see him continue to grow from here.
Until next time!
13JaelyI hope family becomes more important to Bella than ‘Her Dark Lord’ as I can see that might be the only way they will survive let alone win. I also hope Narcissa tells Bella she should look after Andromeda and Teddy. Though if you are going with canon then Bella might not care considering Bella was the one that killed Dora in the first place. It will be interesting to see how this all pans out.
Ron’s thoughts on right and wrong are going to have to expand if he doesn’t want to get himself or the others hurt or killed. I’ve actually liked seeing him grow from the prat that can’t see past the end of his nose to someone that is more open over the course of this story. It’s not a common track people take with Ron. I actually hope to see him continue to grow from here.
Until next time!
1/17/2019 c17 Jaely
Okay it’s almost as though someone has a tracking spell on one of them... the fact that Bellatrix seems to always be in the same area they happen to be at is too convenient... I’m really beginning to think that Narcissa’s wedding ring doubles as a tracking device. I look forward to reading the next chapters to find out what happens.
Okay it’s almost as though someone has a tracking spell on one of them... the fact that Bellatrix seems to always be in the same area they happen to be at is too convenient... I’m really beginning to think that Narcissa’s wedding ring doubles as a tracking device. I look forward to reading the next chapters to find out what happens.
1/17/2019 c17 Guest
So, family first for Bella...or not? Never a dull moment in this story. Action packed.
I enjoyed it.
So, family first for Bella...or not? Never a dull moment in this story. Action packed.
I enjoyed it.
1/16/2019 c15 Locutus
They aren't very smart about staying out of the way and hiding. How many close calls do they have to go through before they take more precautions about walking down a deserted street haphazardly and taking way too long to realize that maybe they should leave sooner rather than later. You have to turn Hermione brain-dead to keep this going. It's like they are TRYING to get caught at this point.
They aren't very smart about staying out of the way and hiding. How many close calls do they have to go through before they take more precautions about walking down a deserted street haphazardly and taking way too long to realize that maybe they should leave sooner rather than later. You have to turn Hermione brain-dead to keep this going. It's like they are TRYING to get caught at this point.
1/15/2019 c13 Guest
Liked it. Very well done.
Liked it. Very well done.
1/10/2019 c13 Jaely
I don’t think Narcissa would be able to go back to how it used to be even if they were to win the war the next day. I think she has been exposed to too much to go back to the life she had been living and not be impacted by everything that has already happened to her and everything she has learned.
I look forward to seeing how this story continues to unfold. Until next time.
I don’t think Narcissa would be able to go back to how it used to be even if they were to win the war the next day. I think she has been exposed to too much to go back to the life she had been living and not be impacted by everything that has already happened to her and everything she has learned.
I look forward to seeing how this story continues to unfold. Until next time.
12/22/2018 c12 ggf1
good story.
different than most. I hope narcissa gets a wand soon. AND hope it's Bella's
good story.
different than most. I hope narcissa gets a wand soon. AND hope it's Bella's