12/7/2018 c10 Guest
Brilliant so far. Hope you update soon.
Brilliant so far. Hope you update soon.
12/6/2018 c10 15darkwolflovesgirls
Ooohhh, what an interesting idea, love what you have so far! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Ooohhh, what an interesting idea, love what you have so far! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
11/25/2018 c10 LoveGoodWriting
Thanks for another outstanding chapter. Their confidence really is outlandish ... And transformative.
Thanks for another outstanding chapter. Their confidence really is outlandish ... And transformative.
10/12/2018 c9 Guest
Pretty good! A nice twist and nice writing. So well done it could be canon...if JKR didn't write for kids. Kudos!
Pretty good! A nice twist and nice writing. So well done it could be canon...if JKR didn't write for kids. Kudos!
10/10/2018 c9 LoveGoodWriting
Good reminder of how shredded and complicated the world is for our ladies... thank you for another complex and heart rending chapter.
Good reminder of how shredded and complicated the world is for our ladies... thank you for another complex and heart rending chapter.
9/29/2018 c7 Jaely
It’s interesting seeing Ron once again being relegated to being the odd man out in the group. Though I believe he feels that it should be Narcissa that should be now, since he and Hermione had a history together, yet that isn’t what is happening. I think Ron is realizing that it will never be him that Hermione ‘chooses’ and that has to be a hard pill to swallow for him. Great chapter, I’m looking forward to more.
It’s interesting seeing Ron once again being relegated to being the odd man out in the group. Though I believe he feels that it should be Narcissa that should be now, since he and Hermione had a history together, yet that isn’t what is happening. I think Ron is realizing that it will never be him that Hermione ‘chooses’ and that has to be a hard pill to swallow for him. Great chapter, I’m looking forward to more.
9/25/2018 c7 LoveGoodWriting
Outstanding chapter. Their grief and exhaustion ring so true, and I have such hope!
Outstanding chapter. Their grief and exhaustion ring so true, and I have such hope!
9/22/2018 c6 Guest
Brilliant work so far, love the dynamic building. Hope for a new chapter soon.
Brilliant work so far, love the dynamic building. Hope for a new chapter soon.
9/20/2018 c6 daly
...just ...stupid Ron
read you later, I hope you are fine!
...just ...stupid Ron
read you later, I hope you are fine!
9/16/2018 c6 Guest
Nice, I liked Narcissa's adventures in the Muggle world.
Nice, I liked Narcissa's adventures in the Muggle world.