8/23 c43 Prosim
Dopsatje to krásné
Dopsatje to krásné
8/3 c7 arctic9924
Why are all the actually powerful ninjas from the show so weak in this fic? Rock Lee was, while injured, able to do work against Kimimaro. Then Gaara stepped in and finished the fight. Kakashi could wipe the floor with either of the two, and yet Kimimaro wiped an ANBU squad... This type of thing has already happened once or twice. That, and a few other reasons like the annoying grammar that pops up, will make me drop this fic. It is disappointing, I had heard such good things about this fic, but it already is going downhill.
Why are all the actually powerful ninjas from the show so weak in this fic? Rock Lee was, while injured, able to do work against Kimimaro. Then Gaara stepped in and finished the fight. Kakashi could wipe the floor with either of the two, and yet Kimimaro wiped an ANBU squad... This type of thing has already happened once or twice. That, and a few other reasons like the annoying grammar that pops up, will make me drop this fic. It is disappointing, I had heard such good things about this fic, but it already is going downhill.
5/31 c22 Guest
Im sorry I just dont like how protective naruto is of yakumo like I was thinking they could be a power couple, not yakumo probably being weak and naruto having to save her
Im sorry I just dont like how protective naruto is of yakumo like I was thinking they could be a power couple, not yakumo probably being weak and naruto having to save her
5/24 c4 11Uzumaki Suiren
Oh my God! YES! Finally! Someone, who thinks the same thing as me! As I also don't believe that it was the Curse Mark that made him leave Konoha, but his obsession with killing Itachi-kun (Sweet, kind, and loving Itachi *Pouts*). I really don't see how people can like Sasuke like at all. I mean, if it was Shisui, Itachi, Obito, Izuna, and...*sighs with a grimace* Madara, I can totally understand, but...Sasuke *Raised eyebrow mix grimace*? Really? Hell, I can understand Indra Otsutsuki...as he is really fucking cute...but, Sasuke Emo Princess Brat Uchiha? Yuck! No thanks.
Oh my God! YES! Finally! Someone, who thinks the same thing as me! As I also don't believe that it was the Curse Mark that made him leave Konoha, but his obsession with killing Itachi-kun (Sweet, kind, and loving Itachi *Pouts*). I really don't see how people can like Sasuke like at all. I mean, if it was Shisui, Itachi, Obito, Izuna, and...*sighs with a grimace* Madara, I can totally understand, but...Sasuke *Raised eyebrow mix grimace*? Really? Hell, I can understand Indra Otsutsuki...as he is really fucking cute...but, Sasuke Emo Princess Brat Uchiha? Yuck! No thanks.
4/30 c43 Kitsune-chan
Is there gonna be a next chapter? I hope so...
Is there gonna be a next chapter? I hope so...
4/29 c42 Kitsune-chan
Ouch...This is really bad
Ouch...This is really bad
4/27 c41 Kitsune-chan
Is it normal the Omake got me rolling on the floor ?!
Is it normal the Omake got me rolling on the floor ?!
4/25 c40 Kitsune-chan
I was reading this story and at the same time listening to the song "Sad Kids" by Munn at I swear it felt so good.
I was reading this story and at the same time listening to the song "Sad Kids" by Munn at I swear it felt so good.
4/25 c39 Kitsune-chan
An invasion a day keeps the boredom away ? And who knew that teuchi was THIS strong ?
An invasion a day keeps the boredom away ? And who knew that teuchi was THIS strong ?
4/25 c38 Kitsune-chan
"Dragon-sama will kill him for dying" bro maybe he will already dead...
"Dragon-sama will kill him for dying" bro maybe he will already dead...
4/25 c37 Kitsune-chan
I am sorry that I skipped the Omake but it's too interesting to wait...
I am sorry that I skipped the Omake but it's too interesting to wait...
4/25 c36 Kitsune-chan
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