for Meeting the Godfather5/7 c5 Jake Crepeau
That's a hilarious typo you have up there. I know you means "infraction," but what fell off your keyboard was "infarction."
Seriously, though, I'm really enjoying this story. It's one of the more realistic ones of its kind out there. Kudos! ;D
That's a hilarious typo you have up there. I know you means "infraction," but what fell off your keyboard was "infarction."
Seriously, though, I'm really enjoying this story. It's one of the more realistic ones of its kind out there. Kudos! ;D
3/6 c18 Amelia Who
I will never understand how people read about this character: “A broad, square-jawed witch with very short gray hair sat on Fudge’s left; she wore a monocle and looked forbidding.” and decided that she’s a hottie in her thirties who is close to Sirius in age.
TBH this was better when you stuck with the Sirius and Harry bonding and didn’t try to work in the weird, nonsensical Sirius-Amelia Bones stuff that so many authors do.
I will never understand how people read about this character: “A broad, square-jawed witch with very short gray hair sat on Fudge’s left; she wore a monocle and looked forbidding.” and decided that she’s a hottie in her thirties who is close to Sirius in age.
TBH this was better when you stuck with the Sirius and Harry bonding and didn’t try to work in the weird, nonsensical Sirius-Amelia Bones stuff that so many authors do.
2/27 c18 Anonopotamous
How could Amelia have only been 18 in 1981? In 1995, she was gray-haired and the Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. She should be a good deal older than Sirius, not several years younger than him.
How could Amelia have only been 18 in 1981? In 1995, she was gray-haired and the Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. She should be a good deal older than Sirius, not several years younger than him.
2/15 c18 Lauraf68
This is a great story! Recent update has me excited to see where you are going. Happy Writing!
This is a great story! Recent update has me excited to see where you are going. Happy Writing!
1/20 c18 Millie072
Read the entire story again to put chap 18 into prospective. Amelia was 18. No matter how big a stink she might have raised when Crouch was in charge, it likely wouldn't have mattered. Crouch was getting the job done; that seems to be all the ministry cares about. Appearances are all. BTW, the story still holds up. Caught my interest again and now I'm anxiously awaiting the next update. Thanks for sharing.
Read the entire story again to put chap 18 into prospective. Amelia was 18. No matter how big a stink she might have raised when Crouch was in charge, it likely wouldn't have mattered. Crouch was getting the job done; that seems to be all the ministry cares about. Appearances are all. BTW, the story still holds up. Caught my interest again and now I'm anxiously awaiting the next update. Thanks for sharing.
1/20 c3 
4GinnyPotter6891
Glad you're enjoying writing thi, because I'm enjoying reading it! I hope Sirius is able to completely destroy the Dursleys. Looking forward to chapter 4 to see what you've come up with.
4GinnyPotter6891Glad you're enjoying writing thi, because I'm enjoying reading it! I hope Sirius is able to completely destroy the Dursleys. Looking forward to chapter 4 to see what you've come up with.
1/20 c18 Reader
Why do so many authors write Amelia Bones as if she's this hottie who is close to Sirius in age?
Amelia Bones was described in OOTP and HBP as gray-haired and middle-aged. She was the Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. There is absolutely no way that she's as young as you're writing her to be.
Why do so many authors write Amelia Bones as if she's this hottie who is close to Sirius in age?
Amelia Bones was described in OOTP and HBP as gray-haired and middle-aged. She was the Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement. There is absolutely no way that she's as young as you're writing her to be.
11/13/2024 c14 Anton Vlasov
Поттер слишком избалованный и позволяет себе слишком много. Его нужно поставит на песто. Это наверное единственный сюжет про который скажу он по качеству не же плинтуса.
Поттер слишком избалованный и позволяет себе слишком много. Его нужно поставит на песто. Это наверное единственный сюжет про который скажу он по качеству не же плинтуса.
10/25/2024 c17 Guest
Great story!
I love the characters and the story line, please keep up the great work.
Great story!
I love the characters and the story line, please keep up the great work.