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Bug- Oh, God. I'm scared for Jollin's life. D: Bug is honestly so creepy, and Barley didn't deserve to be killed by her. For a second there, I thought Barley would be able to escape, but nope. I hope Bug dies soon, she scares me. XD
Shey- I'm kind of surprised how quickly Shey gave up hope. I feel bad for these three. :( Poor Flaco, too, even though he didn't want allies at first he seems to have gotten much closer to them since he first met them.
Eagle- Oh, man! Poor Liva. I'm foreseeing a showdown between Bug and the Careers. I think that'll be pretty fun to see, as they're some of the most powerful tributes in the games.
Eulogies:
Barley: Barley was always so sweet and I liked her a lot. I did expect her to go farther, and I'm sad that she died here. However, I don't think that she had the strength in her to win, and so probably better to kill her off early than it is too just drag her along for a while and then kill her. Rest in peace, you deserved so, so much better.
Liva- I liked her a lot in her Reaping scene, but then as the games went on other tributes started jumping out at me more. Still, though, I always enjoyed reading about her and she was a really fun tribute. I wish she didn't have to die here. :( RIP Liva.
3MonkeyPower435Bug- Oh, God. I'm scared for Jollin's life. D: Bug is honestly so creepy, and Barley didn't deserve to be killed by her. For a second there, I thought Barley would be able to escape, but nope. I hope Bug dies soon, she scares me. XD
Shey- I'm kind of surprised how quickly Shey gave up hope. I feel bad for these three. :( Poor Flaco, too, even though he didn't want allies at first he seems to have gotten much closer to them since he first met them.
Eagle- Oh, man! Poor Liva. I'm foreseeing a showdown between Bug and the Careers. I think that'll be pretty fun to see, as they're some of the most powerful tributes in the games.
Eulogies:
Barley: Barley was always so sweet and I liked her a lot. I did expect her to go farther, and I'm sad that she died here. However, I don't think that she had the strength in her to win, and so probably better to kill her off early than it is too just drag her along for a while and then kill her. Rest in peace, you deserved so, so much better.
Liva- I liked her a lot in her Reaping scene, but then as the games went on other tributes started jumping out at me more. Still, though, I always enjoyed reading about her and she was a really fun tribute. I wish she didn't have to die here. :( RIP Liva.
5/4/2020 c30 4Greywolf44
It seems that the gamemakers or something else took away everyone’s food. That’s going to be a challenge for the remaining tributes. Bug’s plan is crazy but it makes sense since she doesn’t care about winning. She attacks the careers too and we get a long awaited confrontation. It’s a shame skilled Cobalt and Sadie, I liked both of them and they were sweet characters. At lease Bug finally died, she was crazy and she was a threat. We’re down to the 8 and I can’t wait to see what’s next. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4Greywolf44It seems that the gamemakers or something else took away everyone’s food. That’s going to be a challenge for the remaining tributes. Bug’s plan is crazy but it makes sense since she doesn’t care about winning. She attacks the careers too and we get a long awaited confrontation. It’s a shame skilled Cobalt and Sadie, I liked both of them and they were sweet characters. At lease Bug finally died, she was crazy and she was a threat. We’re down to the 8 and I can’t wait to see what’s next. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
5/4/2020 c30 1Kkash4
Wow 2 careers left! I'm really excited to see who wins because most of the people left are little kids. You never know maybe this year the youngest Victor will win.
1Kkash4Wow 2 careers left! I'm really excited to see who wins because most of the people left are little kids. You never know maybe this year the youngest Victor will win.
4/28/2020 c1 Kkash4
When will a new chapter come out? I'm just dying for more, I've almost become one of those hunger games obsessed capitol freaks!
When will a new chapter come out? I'm just dying for more, I've almost become one of those hunger games obsessed capitol freaks!
4/24/2020 c29 4Greywolf44
I really liked Falco and he was definitely a surprise death, but he put a good fight against the bear. I really wonder how it will affect Shey. I hope to see a showdown between Bug and the careers soon. It’s sure to be entertaining. It was sad to read that Raylie will die for Briar to win but that’s the Hunger Games unfortunately. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4Greywolf44I really liked Falco and he was definitely a surprise death, but he put a good fight against the bear. I really wonder how it will affect Shey. I hope to see a showdown between Bug and the careers soon. It’s sure to be entertaining. It was sad to read that Raylie will die for Briar to win but that’s the Hunger Games unfortunately. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4/24/2020 c26 3MonkeyPower435
BLOODBATH! YEAH! It's so cool to read about all these powers in action.
Briar- Holy crap that just happened! I'm so glad Briar was able to take out Flax, but I have to admit that I'm really surprised he died in the bloodbath. Briar just eliminated an extremely powerful threat. The lightning power is going to be very helpful in the arena.
Liva- WOAH. So, um, yeah. That... was a thing. I honestly can't believe Sadie killed Ellis like that. I mean, I know she's a Career and she's been trained to kill, but like... you were kind of friends with him? I wonder if she'll be affected at all after killing him or if she'll simply shrug it off. I'm glad Liva survived, though.
Serena- Oh, wow, another threat gone! This is such a surprising bloodbath and I love it. Lol, Lilac is dead. No surprise there. It isn't looking good for Finleigh and Aston though... NOO, Marvlo is dead! I sort of expected this would happen but he was so awesome and I wish he had been able to live. His family is going to be so sad... :(
Emalynn- Awww, that's so sad how Marvlo sacraficed himself. It's interesting to see Briar so traumatized, I wonder if killing FLax will drive him to insanity, or if he'll be able to recover? And Lennox is dead too! Now Bug is the only psycho left.
Eulogies:
Blaze- Eh, he was a jerk, so I'm not sad, but I am pretty shocked at his death, since he was such a powerful tribute. It would have been interesting to see him later in the games, but I'm glad he's gone.
Flax- Yeah, this guy was scary and I'm very happy that he's dead now. If he had gotten through the bloodbath, he could've been a big threat in the arena.
Ellis- This death surprised me. I had thought Ellis would've lasted longer. I liked him, but I think he faded into the background a little for me. He was still a nice person, though, and didn't deserve his death. RIP.
Lilac- Yep. That's it for Lilac. XD She was so fun to read about, and I really love the way you wrote her. :)
Marvlo- NO! I loved this guy so much. While I didn't think he'd last very long, I still hoped that he'd go far, and he's probably who I was routing for to win if Emalynn and Jollin died. Rest in peace, Marvlo.
Aston- Again, I thought he'd go farther. While he had a fairly cold personality, he still had a soft side to him, and I loved him and Finleigh together. Oh, man, his brother is going to be devastated! D:
Finleigh- I liked Finleigh a lot, and she didn't deserve to be in the games, but then again, nobody ever deserves to be in the games. I didn't think that she'd make it super far, but I was still quite sad when she died. RIP.
Lennox- Despite this guy being insane, I actually kind of liked him. He wasn't as craxy as Flax and Bug. Ironic, he always loved causing fires and he died from fire. :D Rest in peace, Lennox.
I loved this bloodbath so much, you did really great writing it!
3MonkeyPower435BLOODBATH! YEAH! It's so cool to read about all these powers in action.
Briar- Holy crap that just happened! I'm so glad Briar was able to take out Flax, but I have to admit that I'm really surprised he died in the bloodbath. Briar just eliminated an extremely powerful threat. The lightning power is going to be very helpful in the arena.
Liva- WOAH. So, um, yeah. That... was a thing. I honestly can't believe Sadie killed Ellis like that. I mean, I know she's a Career and she's been trained to kill, but like... you were kind of friends with him? I wonder if she'll be affected at all after killing him or if she'll simply shrug it off. I'm glad Liva survived, though.
Serena- Oh, wow, another threat gone! This is such a surprising bloodbath and I love it. Lol, Lilac is dead. No surprise there. It isn't looking good for Finleigh and Aston though... NOO, Marvlo is dead! I sort of expected this would happen but he was so awesome and I wish he had been able to live. His family is going to be so sad... :(
Emalynn- Awww, that's so sad how Marvlo sacraficed himself. It's interesting to see Briar so traumatized, I wonder if killing FLax will drive him to insanity, or if he'll be able to recover? And Lennox is dead too! Now Bug is the only psycho left.
Eulogies:
Blaze- Eh, he was a jerk, so I'm not sad, but I am pretty shocked at his death, since he was such a powerful tribute. It would have been interesting to see him later in the games, but I'm glad he's gone.
Flax- Yeah, this guy was scary and I'm very happy that he's dead now. If he had gotten through the bloodbath, he could've been a big threat in the arena.
Ellis- This death surprised me. I had thought Ellis would've lasted longer. I liked him, but I think he faded into the background a little for me. He was still a nice person, though, and didn't deserve his death. RIP.
Lilac- Yep. That's it for Lilac. XD She was so fun to read about, and I really love the way you wrote her. :)
Marvlo- NO! I loved this guy so much. While I didn't think he'd last very long, I still hoped that he'd go far, and he's probably who I was routing for to win if Emalynn and Jollin died. Rest in peace, Marvlo.
Aston- Again, I thought he'd go farther. While he had a fairly cold personality, he still had a soft side to him, and I loved him and Finleigh together. Oh, man, his brother is going to be devastated! D:
Finleigh- I liked Finleigh a lot, and she didn't deserve to be in the games, but then again, nobody ever deserves to be in the games. I didn't think that she'd make it super far, but I was still quite sad when she died. RIP.
Lennox- Despite this guy being insane, I actually kind of liked him. He wasn't as craxy as Flax and Bug. Ironic, he always loved causing fires and he died from fire. :D Rest in peace, Lennox.
I loved this bloodbath so much, you did really great writing it!
4/24/2020 c25 MonkeyPower435
Shey- Ohhh, interesting. I have a feeling the games are starting early, with how Shey and Falco are in a hovercraft with other tributes. Oh man, this is scary! To be honest I'm sort of glad the interviews are being skipped. I don't have anything against them, they just tend to get sort of dull and bland after a while.
Ajax- It's happening, holy crap! I'm so freaking excited the bloodbath is finally happening. Ajax with the powers of Demeter could be interesting. It seems like it's one of the slightly less powerful abilities, but it could still definitely do some damage on other tributes, especially if it's in the control of a trained Career.
Stitch- AHH! The suspense! I really hope Stitch survives because she's so sweet, though she's only 12 so I don't know... This is an interesting arena, I can't wait to see some of its surprises later in the games.
Okay, questions:
1. So I've already read the bloodbath so I can't really answer this question. But if I was answering it before I read the bloodbath, then... Marvlo, Stitch, Lilac, Finleigh, Barley, Briar, and maybe Jollin?
2. Obviously I'm biased, but from an unbiased standpoint then Serena, since she's pretty likable and extremely powerful.
Shey- Ohhh, interesting. I have a feeling the games are starting early, with how Shey and Falco are in a hovercraft with other tributes. Oh man, this is scary! To be honest I'm sort of glad the interviews are being skipped. I don't have anything against them, they just tend to get sort of dull and bland after a while.
Ajax- It's happening, holy crap! I'm so freaking excited the bloodbath is finally happening. Ajax with the powers of Demeter could be interesting. It seems like it's one of the slightly less powerful abilities, but it could still definitely do some damage on other tributes, especially if it's in the control of a trained Career.
Stitch- AHH! The suspense! I really hope Stitch survives because she's so sweet, though she's only 12 so I don't know... This is an interesting arena, I can't wait to see some of its surprises later in the games.
Okay, questions:
1. So I've already read the bloodbath so I can't really answer this question. But if I was answering it before I read the bloodbath, then... Marvlo, Stitch, Lilac, Finleigh, Barley, Briar, and maybe Jollin?
2. Obviously I'm biased, but from an unbiased standpoint then Serena, since she's pretty likable and extremely powerful.
4/23/2020 c28 4Greywolf44
Eagle and Darwin were both shocking deaths. I really liked both of them and it was crazy that they both died this early. Serena’s going great, she’s really proving to be a threat in the games and she’s doing great. Bug’s a threat the careers need to watch out for. She may bleed out like Cobalt said, but if she doesn’t she’s still a threat. I like that touch that Briar still regrets killing someone and his alliance is going good so far. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4Greywolf44Eagle and Darwin were both shocking deaths. I really liked both of them and it was crazy that they both died this early. Serena’s going great, she’s really proving to be a threat in the games and she’s doing great. Bug’s a threat the careers need to watch out for. She may bleed out like Cobalt said, but if she doesn’t she’s still a threat. I like that touch that Briar still regrets killing someone and his alliance is going good so far. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4/22/2020 c28 Tivera
Wow! This was a really cool twist! I really like Raylie, I hope she wins if Serena doesn't. I really like this chapter! Good Job! I am looking forward to the next chapter. But take your time, no pressure! I would wait all day for the next chapter if I had to! Quality over quantity ans speed, right?
Wow! This was a really cool twist! I really like Raylie, I hope she wins if Serena doesn't. I really like this chapter! Good Job! I am looking forward to the next chapter. But take your time, no pressure! I would wait all day for the next chapter if I had to! Quality over quantity ans speed, right?
4/22/2020 c27 Tivera
Hi RedPanda56! I think your story is really cool! I love the new arena, a very original idea. The super powers are really cool too, except i don't know who got the last few powers. Anyway, this is just a suggestion, but may you could give one chapter to a tribute. So, for example, tomorrow or chapter 28 could be all from Serena perspective. BTW, she is my favourite. Oh, and please don't be offended by this. I always get worried that people will be offended by my suggestions. But if you don't change the story structure, I totally get it.
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Hi RedPanda56! I think your story is really cool! I love the new arena, a very original idea. The super powers are really cool too, except i don't know who got the last few powers. Anyway, this is just a suggestion, but may you could give one chapter to a tribute. So, for example, tomorrow or chapter 28 could be all from Serena perspective. BTW, she is my favourite. Oh, and please don't be offended by this. I always get worried that people will be offended by my suggestions. But if you don't change the story structure, I totally get it.
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4/22/2020 c27 1Kkash4
My thoughts on the district 9 tributes.
Honestly I thought Lennox would last a little longer because he's violent, but he doesn't have the fire one which he'd love. Also we all know he thinks everything is a joke.
Barley I don't think she would last long cuz she did not do good in training.
1Kkash4My thoughts on the district 9 tributes.
Honestly I thought Lennox would last a little longer because he's violent, but he doesn't have the fire one which he'd love. Also we all know he thinks everything is a joke.
Barley I don't think she would last long cuz she did not do good in training.
4/22/2020 c27 4Greywolf44
I liked Barley and she was sweet I feel sad that Bug killed her. Bug’s definitely the most evil character right now, I honestly think she’s more evil than the careers. I feel bad for Shey becuase she knows Barley is dead and I sympathize with Falco becuase he doesn’t want to beleive it. Live was another great character but it makes sense since that losing Ellis would cause her to give up. I’ll miss her. I’m sure the careers are going to be hunting for Bug tomorrow and I can’t wait to see what happens. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4Greywolf44I liked Barley and she was sweet I feel sad that Bug killed her. Bug’s definitely the most evil character right now, I honestly think she’s more evil than the careers. I feel bad for Shey becuase she knows Barley is dead and I sympathize with Falco becuase he doesn’t want to beleive it. Live was another great character but it makes sense since that losing Ellis would cause her to give up. I’ll miss her. I’m sure the careers are going to be hunting for Bug tomorrow and I can’t wait to see what happens. Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4/22/2020 c24 3MonkeyPower435
Holy crap, Emalynn scored a 9! Thank you so much! Jollin's 5 is pretty good too, considering he doesn't have much training. Darwin is definitely much weaker than I originally thought.
I think Serena will probably do the best because she has training, she scored an 11, and she's lived in District 4 her whole life.
3MonkeyPower435Holy crap, Emalynn scored a 9! Thank you so much! Jollin's 5 is pretty good too, considering he doesn't have much training. Darwin is definitely much weaker than I originally thought.
I think Serena will probably do the best because she has training, she scored an 11, and she's lived in District 4 her whole life.