for The 100th Hunger Games - The Lost Island (SYOT Closed!)3/31/2020 c21 Peeta Mellark
I enjoy the connection of your plot. The story works way better with certain sub-plots you’ve put in. Credit to the people who made the characters, I enjoyed them a lot. This could be a really good story, so keep working on it. It’s very unique, and I like your addition of Greek Mythology.
I enjoy the connection of your plot. The story works way better with certain sub-plots you’ve put in. Credit to the people who made the characters, I enjoyed them a lot. This could be a really good story, so keep working on it. It’s very unique, and I like your addition of Greek Mythology.
3/31/2020 c22 gogobubblegum
kill everyone then kill himself as he didn't want to go back to his district as a victor but not get any prizes and be thrown in jail
Q2. Because not only was he attracted to her and her purple hair, she was so good at camouflage, she astounded the instructor
I loved this chapter! I'm a new viewer but this story and it's plotline has me hooked! I'm vouching for Serena as my sister is called Serena so I kinda hope she wins!
kill everyone then kill himself as he didn't want to go back to his district as a victor but not get any prizes and be thrown in jail
Q2. Because not only was he attracted to her and her purple hair, she was so good at camouflage, she astounded the instructor
I loved this chapter! I'm a new viewer but this story and it's plotline has me hooked! I'm vouching for Serena as my sister is called Serena so I kinda hope she wins!
3/31/2020 c16 
3MonkeyPower435
Sorry, I accidentally posted my review for part 1 before it was finished. Here's the rest of it.
Serena: Oh dang. I mean, I expected for Poseidon to be District 4's god, but the manipulation of water will be a huge advantage in the games. I wouldn't be surprised if one of these tributes win. :0 Actually, I wouldn't mind Serena winning, I like her. Anyways, it's interesting to see the tension between Blaze and Serena. The two might develop a big rivalry. I want to see what happens between these two in later chapters!
Marvlo: Awwww, he and Emalynn have such a cute relationship! I'm really looking forward to seeing their alliance in the games. :D I'm so happy they got Zeus' power, I think it'll be super helpful. Manipulating electricity is also just pretty awesome in general. Can't wait to see this power in action!
Finleigh: Ok, this power is going to be super useful. If Finleigh or Aston comes across a Career, they can just run away and be safe. I guess the only disadvantage to the power would be if they were in the water. Still, though, this will be great to have.
Questions for chapter 15:
1. Invisibility
2. It's a lot for your body to handle awake, so the scientists made their bodies go unconscious to make it easier for them to handle.
Alright! Now for this chapter, which was also awesome.
Briar: As long as Briar and Raylie are able to get their hands on a bow, this power will be epic to see. If they don't get a bow (or a dart gun or any other weapon requiring aim), however, it might not be quite as effective as some of the other abilities. Night vision will still be helpful, though. Poor Briar and Raylie, I feel so bad for them. :(
Stitch: Stitch is so sweet, I kind of want her to win but I know that it's going to be extremely hard for her to do so. D: This power will help her, though. I don't like Flax having the same ability, though. If someone tries to kill him, he can just heal himself and be perfectly fine... yikes. Oh well. I guess we'll just have to see what happens.
Lennox: Lennox is kind of crazy but for some reason I liked him in this POV. God, I hate their escort though, she's rude and obnoxious. I guess that should be expected, though, since she's a Capitolite. While manipulating plant life doesn't seem like it'll be as helpful as some powers, it's still very interesting. Lennox and Barley will probably also be able to grow their own food, which'll be cool.
Shey: I feel so bad for these two! Their story in the arena will be a tragic one- even if one of them wins, they'll have to deal with living without the other for the rest of their lives. Also, this power will be so cool to see! I wonder if the skeletons can die? I would guess that even if they can die, it is very difficult to kill them.
Cobalt: Haha, poor Lilac. I sort of feel sorry for her since she's my tribute, but at the same time she's a total brat so... yeah, I don't have too much sympathy for her. She's sure to hold a grudge against Cobalt because of the situation. And shape shifting, YESSS! That's honestly such a fun power. It's a shame Lilac isn't going to make it far enough to use the power to its full extent. I'm sure Cobalt will last a while, though, so I'm looking forward to seeing him and his ability in the arena!
Liva: Fire manipulation sounds like it should be pretty fun. Since the arena is going to involve a lot of water, using fire might not end up working so well, but it'll still be neat to watch. I think that both Liva and Ellis are likely to go pretty far.
Questions:
1. She started crying, smh
2. The goddess is Artemis and the power is perfect accuracy/being able to see wherever you go
3MonkeyPower435Sorry, I accidentally posted my review for part 1 before it was finished. Here's the rest of it.
Serena: Oh dang. I mean, I expected for Poseidon to be District 4's god, but the manipulation of water will be a huge advantage in the games. I wouldn't be surprised if one of these tributes win. :0 Actually, I wouldn't mind Serena winning, I like her. Anyways, it's interesting to see the tension between Blaze and Serena. The two might develop a big rivalry. I want to see what happens between these two in later chapters!
Marvlo: Awwww, he and Emalynn have such a cute relationship! I'm really looking forward to seeing their alliance in the games. :D I'm so happy they got Zeus' power, I think it'll be super helpful. Manipulating electricity is also just pretty awesome in general. Can't wait to see this power in action!
Finleigh: Ok, this power is going to be super useful. If Finleigh or Aston comes across a Career, they can just run away and be safe. I guess the only disadvantage to the power would be if they were in the water. Still, though, this will be great to have.
Questions for chapter 15:
1. Invisibility
2. It's a lot for your body to handle awake, so the scientists made their bodies go unconscious to make it easier for them to handle.
Alright! Now for this chapter, which was also awesome.
Briar: As long as Briar and Raylie are able to get their hands on a bow, this power will be epic to see. If they don't get a bow (or a dart gun or any other weapon requiring aim), however, it might not be quite as effective as some of the other abilities. Night vision will still be helpful, though. Poor Briar and Raylie, I feel so bad for them. :(
Stitch: Stitch is so sweet, I kind of want her to win but I know that it's going to be extremely hard for her to do so. D: This power will help her, though. I don't like Flax having the same ability, though. If someone tries to kill him, he can just heal himself and be perfectly fine... yikes. Oh well. I guess we'll just have to see what happens.
Lennox: Lennox is kind of crazy but for some reason I liked him in this POV. God, I hate their escort though, she's rude and obnoxious. I guess that should be expected, though, since she's a Capitolite. While manipulating plant life doesn't seem like it'll be as helpful as some powers, it's still very interesting. Lennox and Barley will probably also be able to grow their own food, which'll be cool.
Shey: I feel so bad for these two! Their story in the arena will be a tragic one- even if one of them wins, they'll have to deal with living without the other for the rest of their lives. Also, this power will be so cool to see! I wonder if the skeletons can die? I would guess that even if they can die, it is very difficult to kill them.
Cobalt: Haha, poor Lilac. I sort of feel sorry for her since she's my tribute, but at the same time she's a total brat so... yeah, I don't have too much sympathy for her. She's sure to hold a grudge against Cobalt because of the situation. And shape shifting, YESSS! That's honestly such a fun power. It's a shame Lilac isn't going to make it far enough to use the power to its full extent. I'm sure Cobalt will last a while, though, so I'm looking forward to seeing him and his ability in the arena!
Liva: Fire manipulation sounds like it should be pretty fun. Since the arena is going to involve a lot of water, using fire might not end up working so well, but it'll still be neat to watch. I think that both Liva and Ellis are likely to go pretty far.
Questions:
1. She started crying, smh
2. The goddess is Artemis and the power is perfect accuracy/being able to see wherever you go
3/31/2020 c15 MonkeyPower435
Hello! I'm going to catch up on a few reviews.
Eagle: Oooh, this is an interesting power. It's definitely going to help Eagle and Sadie, as they'll be able to sneak up behind unsuspecting tributes and kill them without them even knowing that they're there. I wonder, though, if they turn invisible, will whatever weapon or supply they're holding also turn invisible? I would imagine not, because then that would sort of defeat the purpose of turning invisible. It'd be kind of funny to just see a random sword floating around in mid-air. :D Anyways, this power will be very helpful in the arena and very interesting to watch.
Darwin: Another cool power! It's bound to be a source of frustration for other tributes in the arena, and I imagine it'll be very hard for these two to die. Looking forward to seeing it in the arena!
Jollin: BLAHAHAHAHAHA! That's... amusing, to say the least. I think superhuman strength will definitely help Jollin in the arena, though, since one of his main weaknesses was superhuman strength. Bug with this power, on the other hand... yikes. That's most likely going to cause some gruesome deaths. Hopefully Jollin isn't one of her victims. D:
Hello! I'm going to catch up on a few reviews.
Eagle: Oooh, this is an interesting power. It's definitely going to help Eagle and Sadie, as they'll be able to sneak up behind unsuspecting tributes and kill them without them even knowing that they're there. I wonder, though, if they turn invisible, will whatever weapon or supply they're holding also turn invisible? I would imagine not, because then that would sort of defeat the purpose of turning invisible. It'd be kind of funny to just see a random sword floating around in mid-air. :D Anyways, this power will be very helpful in the arena and very interesting to watch.
Darwin: Another cool power! It's bound to be a source of frustration for other tributes in the arena, and I imagine it'll be very hard for these two to die. Looking forward to seeing it in the arena!
Jollin: BLAHAHAHAHAHA! That's... amusing, to say the least. I think superhuman strength will definitely help Jollin in the arena, though, since one of his main weaknesses was superhuman strength. Bug with this power, on the other hand... yikes. That's most likely going to cause some gruesome deaths. Hopefully Jollin isn't one of her victims. D:
3/31/2020 c22 4Greywolf44
Ashton and Finleigh was a surprising alliance, but I think it will work really well and I like this protective side of Ashton. Blaze and Flax are both some of the wild card tributes this year for sure. They’re both deadly and they’re both loners too.
Questions
1. Finleigh reminded Ashton of his brother and he wanted to protect her because of that. And she was also great at camouflage.
2. Flax is going to kill as many tributes as he can before he kills himself since he would rather die than go back to a cell.
4Greywolf44Ashton and Finleigh was a surprising alliance, but I think it will work really well and I like this protective side of Ashton. Blaze and Flax are both some of the wild card tributes this year for sure. They’re both deadly and they’re both loners too.
Questions
1. Finleigh reminded Ashton of his brother and he wanted to protect her because of that. And she was also great at camouflage.
2. Flax is going to kill as many tributes as he can before he kills himself since he would rather die than go back to a cell.
3/31/2020 c21 Greywolf44
I really like that we got more alliances forming. We got 3 new alliances. I think all of them could do something in the arena and it will be interesting. The one that stands out the most besides the Careers is the young alliance becuase they are all young but they have strength in numbers and that can help them in the arena.
Questions
1. No, he wanted to ally with only Shey, but she allowed Stitch and Barley to ally with them.
2. Jollin approached Briar and Raylie and introduced himself. Briar and Raylie then took him to introduce him to the rest of the alliance.
I really like that we got more alliances forming. We got 3 new alliances. I think all of them could do something in the arena and it will be interesting. The one that stands out the most besides the Careers is the young alliance becuase they are all young but they have strength in numbers and that can help them in the arena.
Questions
1. No, he wanted to ally with only Shey, but she allowed Stitch and Barley to ally with them.
2. Jollin approached Briar and Raylie and introduced himself. Briar and Raylie then took him to introduce him to the rest of the alliance.
3/30/2020 c21 14Nautics
Sorry I haven't been reviewing that much, iv'e forgotten most about the characters i submitted. Enjoying the training days so far. I'll start reviewing properly when the games begin!
14NauticsSorry I haven't been reviewing that much, iv'e forgotten most about the characters i submitted. Enjoying the training days so far. I'll start reviewing properly when the games begin!
3/28/2020 c20 4Greywolf44
Training has begun and I’m excited to see what happens! I think it’s going to be interesting to see Cobalt with the careers and Blaze as a loner. I also think Ellis and Liva will be a good duo.
Questions
1. The careers kicked Blaze out and replaced him with Cobalt becuase he was good with a scythe.
2. A sword.
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
4Greywolf44Training has begun and I’m excited to see what happens! I think it’s going to be interesting to see Cobalt with the careers and Blaze as a loner. I also think Ellis and Liva will be a good duo.
Questions
1. The careers kicked Blaze out and replaced him with Cobalt becuase he was good with a scythe.
2. A sword.
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
3/25/2020 c19 Greywolf44
I really like the parade and some of the tributes had great outfits.
Questions
1. Her favorite was District 5
2. Broad and Raylie, and Falco and Shey.
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
I really like the parade and some of the tributes had great outfits.
Questions
1. Her favorite was District 5
2. Broad and Raylie, and Falco and Shey.
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
3/20/2020 c18 Greywolf44
I’m glad to see you update! This was a nice little interlude. Torrac really saved himself with that little lie. It was clever though and I do wonder if the tributes become closer now. Overall, great chapter and I can’t wait until the next one!
I’m glad to see you update! This was a nice little interlude. Torrac really saved himself with that little lie. It was clever though and I do wonder if the tributes become closer now. Overall, great chapter and I can’t wait until the next one!
1/2/2020 c17 Greywolf44
I’m happy to see you back. I understand why you took a break and I hope to see more chapters soon. I think the serums being mixed is a really unique twist and I’m curious to see what some of the tributes can do with this unexpected twist.
Q1: Finnleigh and I don’t know who the guy is
Q2: Emalynn and I don’t know who the girl is
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
I’m happy to see you back. I understand why you took a break and I hope to see more chapters soon. I think the serums being mixed is a really unique twist and I’m curious to see what some of the tributes can do with this unexpected twist.
Q1: Finnleigh and I don’t know who the guy is
Q2: Emalynn and I don’t know who the girl is
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
8/11/2019 c1 Anna
Hi Panda! I just want to let you know that Freezing Hot has been updated recently and you may want to read the newest chapters! :)
Hi Panda! I just want to let you know that Freezing Hot has been updated recently and you may want to read the newest chapters! :)
4/27/2019 c13 Jackseptiguy
1 yes 2beck 3elias should win also
1 yes 2beck 3elias should win also
4/27/2019 c12 Jackseptiguy
Cobalt should win
Cobalt should win
4/27/2019 c16 Jackseptiguy
1 saying no he's not2artemis
1 saying no he's not2artemis