9/1/2018 c8 4Greywolf44
Glad to see you back! I totally understand about school since I just started college and I’m having a tough time to write my SYOT.
Aston: I’m not sure about him yet, I don’t that he’s an addict, but I do like his relationship with his brother. I also like how both his name and his brother’s name are a car company.
Finleigh: I liked her a little bit better and her relationship with her sisters are great. I’m not sure how she will do though
Q1: Willow, Jemmie, and Saphira
Q2: train factory
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
Glad to see you back! I totally understand about school since I just started college and I’m having a tough time to write my SYOT.
Aston: I’m not sure about him yet, I don’t that he’s an addict, but I do like his relationship with his brother. I also like how both his name and his brother’s name are a car company.
Finleigh: I liked her a little bit better and her relationship with her sisters are great. I’m not sure how she will do though
Q1: Willow, Jemmie, and Saphira
Q2: train factory
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can’t wait until the next one!
9/1/2018 c8 3Lilah32
Q1. Willow, Jemmie, and Saphira.
Q2. The train factory.
This chapter was great. Aston was very interesting, with his relationship with his brother and addiction to morphine. Although, the drug that is mentioned a lot in the Hunger Games is morphling, and morphine is an actual drug. I'm not sure if he was submitted to be a morphine addict, but I feel like it's supposed to be morphling. Anyway, I thought it was noble how Aston volunteered for his brother, although I'm not sure how I feel about him yet in terms of his personality. Neutral for now. Finleigh seemed nice, especially with Willow and Jemmie. I'm not sure how well she'll do, but I like her. Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one! I hope your school will mellow out soon.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Rooting For: Jollin
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax, Marvlo, Emalynn, Finleigh
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie, Aston
Dislike:
Hate: Bug
Q1. Willow, Jemmie, and Saphira.
Q2. The train factory.
This chapter was great. Aston was very interesting, with his relationship with his brother and addiction to morphine. Although, the drug that is mentioned a lot in the Hunger Games is morphling, and morphine is an actual drug. I'm not sure if he was submitted to be a morphine addict, but I feel like it's supposed to be morphling. Anyway, I thought it was noble how Aston volunteered for his brother, although I'm not sure how I feel about him yet in terms of his personality. Neutral for now. Finleigh seemed nice, especially with Willow and Jemmie. I'm not sure how well she'll do, but I like her. Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one! I hope your school will mellow out soon.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Rooting For: Jollin
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax, Marvlo, Emalynn, Finleigh
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie, Aston
Dislike:
Hate: Bug
8/13/2018 c7 Little Clover
Q1: Marvlo's older brother’s name is Nick and he is a Victor.
Q2: Emalynn does not have two hands.
Q1: Marvlo's older brother’s name is Nick and he is a Victor.
Q2: Emalynn does not have two hands.
8/13/2018 c7 Little Clover
Great Chapter! Can’t wait for District 6!
Great Chapter! Can’t wait for District 6!
8/13/2018 c7 4Greywolf44
Marvlo: I like him and his relationship with his siblings was awesome. It was interesting how he seemed distant from Nick and if he's Marvolo's mentor, i'm interested to see more of them. Overall, I don't see him going far sadly, but I like him though.
Emalynn: I like her too and I like how she doesn't let having one hand bring her down. I'm interested to see how she does in the games.
Q1: Nick and yes, he's a victor.
Q2: no, she only has one hand.
Overall, good chapter as usual and I can't wait until the next one!
Marvlo: I like him and his relationship with his siblings was awesome. It was interesting how he seemed distant from Nick and if he's Marvolo's mentor, i'm interested to see more of them. Overall, I don't see him going far sadly, but I like him though.
Emalynn: I like her too and I like how she doesn't let having one hand bring her down. I'm interested to see how she does in the games.
Q1: Nick and yes, he's a victor.
Q2: no, she only has one hand.
Overall, good chapter as usual and I can't wait until the next one!
8/12/2018 c7 3MonkeyPower435
Yes! The next chapter is up! Yay!
Marvlo: Marvlo seemed really nice. I enjoyed the scenes with him and all his siblings. I can't believe he lost his dad! I'm going to give him a love!
Emalynn: You wrote her amazingly. The way she talked about nature was great! That was awesome!
Questions:
1. Marvlo's older brother was Nick, and yes, he was a victor.
2. No, Emalynn does not have two hands.
I kind of wish I had gotten in another tribute, but I've been too busy with my own SYOT. (that I haven't updated in, like, 15 days. Whoops.) Anyway, loved the chapter! I'm excited for more!
Yes! The next chapter is up! Yay!
Marvlo: Marvlo seemed really nice. I enjoyed the scenes with him and all his siblings. I can't believe he lost his dad! I'm going to give him a love!
Emalynn: You wrote her amazingly. The way she talked about nature was great! That was awesome!
Questions:
1. Marvlo's older brother was Nick, and yes, he was a victor.
2. No, Emalynn does not have two hands.
I kind of wish I had gotten in another tribute, but I've been too busy with my own SYOT. (that I haven't updated in, like, 15 days. Whoops.) Anyway, loved the chapter! I'm excited for more!
8/12/2018 c7 3Lilah32
Q1. Nick, and yes he was a Victor.
Q2. No, Emalynn only has one hand.
It was sad that these tributes are both so young. But despite their age, they both seem somewhat confident that they'll survive. I'm curious how Emalynn's going to do with one hand. I also wonder how she lost her hand. I love your writing, keep updating! I can't wait to see how you do with Ellis and Liva!
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Rooting For: Jollin
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax, Marvlo, Emalynn
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate: Bug
Q1. Nick, and yes he was a Victor.
Q2. No, Emalynn only has one hand.
It was sad that these tributes are both so young. But despite their age, they both seem somewhat confident that they'll survive. I'm curious how Emalynn's going to do with one hand. I also wonder how she lost her hand. I love your writing, keep updating! I can't wait to see how you do with Ellis and Liva!
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Rooting For: Jollin
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax, Marvlo, Emalynn
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate: Bug
8/10/2018 c6 Lilah32
Q1. Bug killed her parents.
Q2. CC Company
I really liked this chapter. It was very well written, although I would have preferred some insight into Jollin’s character. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Jollin seems pretty normal right now. I want to learn more about his personality. Regardless, he seems relatable, which is always good. I wonder how is knowledge of computers will help him advance in the Games? I hope he gets far. I’m rooting for him (besides my own tributes).
Bug is very interesting. I bet she’ll get far in the Games, but I don’t want her to win. I hope we’ll see her have a humane side sometime in the Game. I’m putting her as hate, because she seems like a classic villain. However, I like the idea of her. It seems like she’ll add intensity to the story.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Rooting For: Jollin
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate: Bug
Q1. Bug killed her parents.
Q2. CC Company
I really liked this chapter. It was very well written, although I would have preferred some insight into Jollin’s character. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Jollin seems pretty normal right now. I want to learn more about his personality. Regardless, he seems relatable, which is always good. I wonder how is knowledge of computers will help him advance in the Games? I hope he gets far. I’m rooting for him (besides my own tributes).
Bug is very interesting. I bet she’ll get far in the Games, but I don’t want her to win. I hope we’ll see her have a humane side sometime in the Game. I’m putting her as hate, because she seems like a classic villain. However, I like the idea of her. It seems like she’ll add intensity to the story.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Rooting For: Jollin
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate: Bug
8/6/2018 c6 Little Clover
Great Chapter!
Q1: She killed her mom and step father.
Q2: CC Company
Great Chapter!
Q1: She killed her mom and step father.
Q2: CC Company
8/6/2018 c6 4Greywolf44
Jollin: I like him because I like his personality and he seems to be a sweet kid. Unfortunately, I don't see him going that far.
Bug: I honestly can't stand tributes like her. She was very well written but I just don't like her personality. She will be a threat in the games though.
Q1: killing her mom and step dad
Q2: CC Company, a computer store
Overall, good chapter as usual and I can't wait until the next one!
Jollin: I like him because I like his personality and he seems to be a sweet kid. Unfortunately, I don't see him going that far.
Bug: I honestly can't stand tributes like her. She was very well written but I just don't like her personality. She will be a threat in the games though.
Q1: killing her mom and step dad
Q2: CC Company, a computer store
Overall, good chapter as usual and I can't wait until the next one!
8/4/2018 c4 ava riddle
there should be more of the book
there should be more of the book
8/4/2018 c4 Little Clover
Great Chapter!
1. Yes
and Jordan
Great Chapter!
1. Yes
and Jordan
8/6/2018 c6 3MonkeyPower435
YAYYYYY! The chapter was awesome! Here's my opinion on the tributes...
Jollin: YES! YES! You wrote Jollin perfectly! I loved how you described him working with technology. The relationship he had with his parents was amazing! Sweet!
Bug: Bug was just plain scary. Everything about her kind of terrified me. The fact that she killed her mom and stepfather, the way the other inmates treated her like a god, and how the peacekeepers acted really nervous around her, it was all really creepy. BUG, YOU HAD BETTER NOT KILL JOLLIN, YOU HEAR ME?! IF YOU DO, I WILL HAUNT YOUR DREAMS FOREVER! With that being said, I'm giving her a hate.
Here are the questions:
1. Bug killed her mom and stepfather.
2. Jollin's parents worked at the CC Company, which made Computers for the Capitol.
Looking forward to more!
YAYYYYY! The chapter was awesome! Here's my opinion on the tributes...
Jollin: YES! YES! You wrote Jollin perfectly! I loved how you described him working with technology. The relationship he had with his parents was amazing! Sweet!
Bug: Bug was just plain scary. Everything about her kind of terrified me. The fact that she killed her mom and stepfather, the way the other inmates treated her like a god, and how the peacekeepers acted really nervous around her, it was all really creepy. BUG, YOU HAD BETTER NOT KILL JOLLIN, YOU HEAR ME?! IF YOU DO, I WILL HAUNT YOUR DREAMS FOREVER! With that being said, I'm giving her a hate.
Here are the questions:
1. Bug killed her mom and stepfather.
2. Jollin's parents worked at the CC Company, which made Computers for the Capitol.
Looking forward to more!
8/3/2018 c3 MiniMustache
Here's my tribute!
District:3
Gender:female
Name:Tricity Wire
Age:17
Sexuality:straight
Hair color:long brown hair
Eye color:grey
Ethnicity:white/American
Other features:glasses
Strengths:looks,speed,bow n arrow,smarts,posion
Weaknesses:strength weapons,climbing,camouflage,swimming
Likes:school,dogs and banana bread
Dislikes:cats(allergic),swimming,the Capitol
Interview outfit:long,flowy pink dress
Reaping outfit:faded pink dress
Weapon of choice:bow and arrow
Personality:Smart-She is top of her class and helps younger kids with math.
Kind-She helps kids and works at shelters sometimes.
Family and background:She has two dads and a little sister,Eleca(4).Sometimes she helps out at the orphanage and donates food she helps at the orphanage the day before the reaping there is a 12 year old that is girl is scared of being picked because she takes tessarae out for her little Tricity tells her that she won't be picked and that she will try her best to protect unfortunely the girl,Celly Thompson is picked.
Reaped or volunteer:volunteer
What they hope to learn in training:more bow skills,poison,hand to hand combat,medical and survival skills
Bloodbath strategy:grab some things close ,maybe kill,then run
Remainder of the games strategy:protect allies,kill when needed(if she is with 12/13yr olds maybe find some poison to kill tributes (not bloody)),kill herself if it's between her and a 13or12yr old
Open to an alliance?:Yeah,maybe with younger girls(12or13)
Suggested placement:12-Victor(sorry that's a long range)
Here's my tribute!
District:3
Gender:female
Name:Tricity Wire
Age:17
Sexuality:straight
Hair color:long brown hair
Eye color:grey
Ethnicity:white/American
Other features:glasses
Strengths:looks,speed,bow n arrow,smarts,posion
Weaknesses:strength weapons,climbing,camouflage,swimming
Likes:school,dogs and banana bread
Dislikes:cats(allergic),swimming,the Capitol
Interview outfit:long,flowy pink dress
Reaping outfit:faded pink dress
Weapon of choice:bow and arrow
Personality:Smart-She is top of her class and helps younger kids with math.
Kind-She helps kids and works at shelters sometimes.
Family and background:She has two dads and a little sister,Eleca(4).Sometimes she helps out at the orphanage and donates food she helps at the orphanage the day before the reaping there is a 12 year old that is girl is scared of being picked because she takes tessarae out for her little Tricity tells her that she won't be picked and that she will try her best to protect unfortunely the girl,Celly Thompson is picked.
Reaped or volunteer:volunteer
What they hope to learn in training:more bow skills,poison,hand to hand combat,medical and survival skills
Bloodbath strategy:grab some things close ,maybe kill,then run
Remainder of the games strategy:protect allies,kill when needed(if she is with 12/13yr olds maybe find some poison to kill tributes (not bloody)),kill herself if it's between her and a 13or12yr old
Open to an alliance?:Yeah,maybe with younger girls(12or13)
Suggested placement:12-Victor(sorry that's a long range)
8/5/2018 c5 2RedPanda56
Thank you everybody for your reviews! Yes, review tributes are fine with me, but only if you can't PM me. The next district will be District 3. See you there!
Thank you everybody for your reviews! Yes, review tributes are fine with me, but only if you can't PM me. The next district will be District 3. See you there!