8/3/2018 c3 Little Clover
Great chapter! I really like the idea of the Quell! I’m submitting a tribute.
District: 8
Gender: Female
Name: Stitch Wilson
Age: 12
Sexuality: Straight
Hair color: Light brown
Eye color: Brown
Ethnicity: Asian
Other features: She is skinny and small.
Strengths: Climbing trees, can hide in small spaces, runs fast, Might be able to attract sponsors.
Weaknesses: Can’t swim, not that strong, gets cold easily.
Likes: Sewing,knitting,reading
Dislikes: The hunger games, rude customers, and the other yarn shop.
Interview outfit: A white flared dress. The skirt is white with light pink and light blue undertones.
Reaping outfit: white dress with light pink shoes.
Weapon of choice: Slingshot
Personality: Sweet and Shy. She is very selfless and will help anyone who needs help.
Family and background: She has a sister named Yarn who is 9 years old. Yarn is very sweet and shy just like Stitch. They have a great sister relationship and Yarn bursts out in tears when Stitch is reaped. Her dad is not home a lot because of his job at the blanket factory. When he is home he spends as much time with his family as he can. Her mom owns a yarn shop and she started working there when she turned 12. They have a cat named Fuzzels. Fuzzels is very nice and will let anyone pet him.
Reaped or volunteer: Reaped; She is super scared when she is reaped but she tries to stay calm as she walks up to the stage.
What they hope to learn in training: Plant Identification, healing,and more slingshot.
Bloodbath strategy: Run into the forest. Doesn’t stop till she finds a hiding place or thinks she is far enough.
Remainder of the games strategy: Keep moving around every few days. When she moves she moves to a good area with food and shelter. Doesn’t kill unless absolutely necessary and doesn’t kill animals.
Open to an alliance?: Yes. Preferably an older female or other females.
Suggested placement: Past the bloodbath. 13th-10th. But I wouldn’t mind if she got 1st. :)
Great chapter! I really like the idea of the Quell! I’m submitting a tribute.
District: 8
Gender: Female
Name: Stitch Wilson
Age: 12
Sexuality: Straight
Hair color: Light brown
Eye color: Brown
Ethnicity: Asian
Other features: She is skinny and small.
Strengths: Climbing trees, can hide in small spaces, runs fast, Might be able to attract sponsors.
Weaknesses: Can’t swim, not that strong, gets cold easily.
Likes: Sewing,knitting,reading
Dislikes: The hunger games, rude customers, and the other yarn shop.
Interview outfit: A white flared dress. The skirt is white with light pink and light blue undertones.
Reaping outfit: white dress with light pink shoes.
Weapon of choice: Slingshot
Personality: Sweet and Shy. She is very selfless and will help anyone who needs help.
Family and background: She has a sister named Yarn who is 9 years old. Yarn is very sweet and shy just like Stitch. They have a great sister relationship and Yarn bursts out in tears when Stitch is reaped. Her dad is not home a lot because of his job at the blanket factory. When he is home he spends as much time with his family as he can. Her mom owns a yarn shop and she started working there when she turned 12. They have a cat named Fuzzels. Fuzzels is very nice and will let anyone pet him.
Reaped or volunteer: Reaped; She is super scared when she is reaped but she tries to stay calm as she walks up to the stage.
What they hope to learn in training: Plant Identification, healing,and more slingshot.
Bloodbath strategy: Run into the forest. Doesn’t stop till she finds a hiding place or thinks she is far enough.
Remainder of the games strategy: Keep moving around every few days. When she moves she moves to a good area with food and shelter. Doesn’t kill unless absolutely necessary and doesn’t kill animals.
Open to an alliance?: Yes. Preferably an older female or other females.
Suggested placement: Past the bloodbath. 13th-10th. But I wouldn’t mind if she got 1st. :)
8/3/2018 c3 MonkeyPower435
Hi! I'm here as a guest because I completely forgot about the questions. Here they are:
1. Ambrosia, or Ammie
2. her grandma
Hi! I'm here as a guest because I completely forgot about the questions. Here they are:
1. Ambrosia, or Ammie
2. her grandma
8/3/2018 c3 MiniMustache
Q1-Ambrosia/Ammie
Q2-Her grandmother
Awesome chapters!You said on your bio that reviewed tributes are fine is that still okay?
Q1-Ambrosia/Ammie
Q2-Her grandmother
Awesome chapters!You said on your bio that reviewed tributes are fine is that still okay?
8/4/2018 c5 3Lilah32
Both of these tributes were really cool. I liked how they weren't the average District Two tributes, which is refreshing. I liked how Ajax isn't a bloodthirsty beast and only volunteered because his parents wanted him to. I really like how Darwin is unique, and staying true to herself/himself (I'm not sure how to refer to Darwin). I hope she gets far.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate:
Both of these tributes were really cool. I liked how they weren't the average District Two tributes, which is refreshing. I liked how Ajax isn't a bloodthirsty beast and only volunteered because his parents wanted him to. I really like how Darwin is unique, and staying true to herself/himself (I'm not sure how to refer to Darwin). I hope she gets far.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Love: Darwin
Like: Serena, Ajax
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate:
8/4/2018 c5 4Greywolf44
Ajax: thanks for doing a great job with him so far! I'm really loving how you're writing him and I can't wait to see more of him!
Darwin: she's a really unique tribute and I'm how the Capitol will treat her. Overall, she's interesting and I wonder how she will interact with her fellow careers.
Q1: yes, Darwin is transgender
Q2: blacksmith.
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can't wait until the next one!
Ajax: thanks for doing a great job with him so far! I'm really loving how you're writing him and I can't wait to see more of him!
Darwin: she's a really unique tribute and I'm how the Capitol will treat her. Overall, she's interesting and I wonder how she will interact with her fellow careers.
Q1: yes, Darwin is transgender
Q2: blacksmith.
Overall, great chapter as usual and I can't wait until the next one!
8/4/2018 c5 3MonkeyPower435
District 2! What a rich district! The tributes were good.
Ajax: Wow. Ajax does not have much confidence. That's fine by me, though. I'm sick of District having such a huge ego. I'm glad Ajax's parents are proud of him. I'm giving him a like.
Darwin: She was okay, I suppose. I can't believe her (is it her? Or he? I'll just go with her) mom put the blame on Darwin for her never being an upper class woman. She seemed nice, but there was nothing amazing about her. Going to give her a neutral for now.
Questions:
1. Yes, Darwin is transgender
2. Ajax's dad is a blacksmith.
District 2! What a rich district! The tributes were good.
Ajax: Wow. Ajax does not have much confidence. That's fine by me, though. I'm sick of District having such a huge ego. I'm glad Ajax's parents are proud of him. I'm giving him a like.
Darwin: She was okay, I suppose. I can't believe her (is it her? Or he? I'll just go with her) mom put the blame on Darwin for her never being an upper class woman. She seemed nice, but there was nothing amazing about her. Going to give her a neutral for now.
Questions:
1. Yes, Darwin is transgender
2. Ajax's dad is a blacksmith.
8/4/2018 c4 14Nautics
I like how you wrote my Tribute Blaze but how you wrote Marlin was perfect. Can't wait until more of his character is developed!
I like how you wrote my Tribute Blaze but how you wrote Marlin was perfect. Can't wait until more of his character is developed!
8/4/2018 c4 4Greywolf44
Blaze: I'm not sure about him, I like a little bit but he seems extremely cocky. He will be dangerous, but I can see his cockyness being his downfall. He's neutral but I think my opinion may change the more I read of him.
Serena: this is my tribute and you wrote her perfectly. I love how you wrote her with her interactions and personality! I can't wait to see how she dies in the games and thanks for accepting her.
Q1: yes, he's adopted
Q2: Jordan and Orchid
Overall, great chapter and I can't wait until the next one!
Blaze: I'm not sure about him, I like a little bit but he seems extremely cocky. He will be dangerous, but I can see his cockyness being his downfall. He's neutral but I think my opinion may change the more I read of him.
Serena: this is my tribute and you wrote her perfectly. I love how you wrote her with her interactions and personality! I can't wait to see how she dies in the games and thanks for accepting her.
Q1: yes, he's adopted
Q2: Jordan and Orchid
Overall, great chapter and I can't wait until the next one!
8/4/2018 c2 3Lilah32
Both of these tributes seem okay. I like Eagle's siblings, but I'm not sure about him. I wish I could have learned more about their backgrounds and life before the Hunger Games. Otherwise, I just see them as Careers and not actual people. Neutral for now, but this may change when I see later chapter involving them and get a little insight into their backstories.
Mine:
Love:
Like:
Neutral: Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate:
Both of these tributes seem okay. I like Eagle's siblings, but I'm not sure about him. I wish I could have learned more about their backgrounds and life before the Hunger Games. Otherwise, I just see them as Careers and not actual people. Neutral for now, but this may change when I see later chapter involving them and get a little insight into their backstories.
Mine:
Love:
Like:
Neutral: Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate:
8/4/2018 c4 Lilah32
Q1: Yes.
Q2: Orchid and Jordan.
Both of these characters were great. I'm impressed that Blaze can run a mile in 4:30, and he also seems very talented in other things. I bet he'll go far if his ego doesn't get in the way.
Serena and Jordan were very cute and Orchid added some comic relief to the chapter. I want to know more about her skills, though.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Love:
Like: Serena
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate:
Q1: Yes.
Q2: Orchid and Jordan.
Both of these characters were great. I'm impressed that Blaze can run a mile in 4:30, and he also seems very talented in other things. I bet he'll go far if his ego doesn't get in the way.
Serena and Jordan were very cute and Orchid added some comic relief to the chapter. I want to know more about her skills, though.
Mine: Briar, Raylie
Love:
Like: Serena
Neutral: Blaze, Eagle, Sadie
Dislike:
Hate:
8/4/2018 c4 3MonkeyPower435
Sweet! I always love to see District 4.
Blaze: Meh. Blaze wasn't horrible, but he was too confident and typical. I suppose it would be tough with a stepfather like that, but still. I'm giving him a neutral, but that might change later.
Serena: Serena was nice. She didn't seem like she liked the games as much as some of the other Careers, which I always like to see. It was really cute seeing Jordan and Serena together. I'll give her a like.
Here are the answers to the questions:
1. yes, Blaze was adopted
2. Jordan and Orchid
I think I might make another tribute. I'll probably give him to you in the next chapter. Looking forward to the next district!
Sweet! I always love to see District 4.
Blaze: Meh. Blaze wasn't horrible, but he was too confident and typical. I suppose it would be tough with a stepfather like that, but still. I'm giving him a neutral, but that might change later.
Serena: Serena was nice. She didn't seem like she liked the games as much as some of the other Careers, which I always like to see. It was really cute seeing Jordan and Serena together. I'll give her a like.
Here are the answers to the questions:
1. yes, Blaze was adopted
2. Jordan and Orchid
I think I might make another tribute. I'll probably give him to you in the next chapter. Looking forward to the next district!
8/3/2018 c3 2RedPanda56
Thank you MonkeyPower435! I have really liked your tributes so far, and it would be awesome if you make another one! Can't wait to see what all of you think about District 4! See you there!
-RedPanda56
Thank you MonkeyPower435! I have really liked your tributes so far, and it would be awesome if you make another one! Can't wait to see what all of you think about District 4! See you there!
-RedPanda56
8/3/2018 c3 3MonkeyPower435
Cool chapter! I liked the tributes. Here’s what I think of them:
Briar: Briar was pretty cool. Nothing about him really stood out to me, but I still liked him. I always have a lot of sympathy for tributes when they have a crush on someone, especially if that someone is also reaped. I’ll just give him a like for now.
Raylie: Poor Raylie. That would be awful, having to go into the games with your crush. I hope that Raylie and Briar find their way through this. I’ll give her a like as well.
Okay, I made two more tributes! Sorry I can’t do this through pms, but I’m not allowed to turn that setting on. I made two, and I might make another as well later. Hope you enjoy them!
SYOT Form:
District: 11
Gender: female
Name: Lilac Amrin
Age: 16
Sexuality: straight
Hair color: black (very long and wavy)
Eye color: chocolate brown
Ethnicity: African American
Other features: Lilac prefers keeping her hair down rather than putting into a ponytail or bun. She tends to put on a lot of makeup, and she likes wearing fancy clothes.
Strengths: Lilac has good social skills, she’s decent with a knife (as she found while training), and she’s a good climber.
Weaknesses: Lilac isn’t good with weapons other than knives, she’s physically weak, and she’s not good at survival skills.
Likes: Lilac likes pretty much anything girly: makeup, dresses, boys, you name it. She also loves to dance.
Dislikes: Lilac doesn’t like bugs of any kind (especially spiders), the woods, and the dark.
Interview outfit: Lilac wears a dark green dress that shimmers in the light. If you look closely, you can see traces of all the crops that District 11 grows. For the shoes, Lilac wears black high heels.
Reaping outfit: Lilac wears a long, golden dress. She also wears golden high heels and golden makeup. She loves looking her best for the Reaping.
Weapon of choice: knife
Personality: Lilac is your typical teenage girl. She’s always hanging out with her friends, talking about fashion and boys. She’s a nice girl, but a bit of an airhead. She doesn’t worry about the Hunger Games and figures that there are so many people in District 11 that there’s no way she’ll get reaped. Lilac has had a crush on more boys than she can count. She doesn’t pay much attention in school and usually gets bad grades.
Family and background: Lilac’s father is one of the Victors of District 11. He’s always trying to warn Lilac about the Hunger Games, but she never listens to him. Because of this, they often get in fights and have become very distant with each other. Lilac’s mother is always caught up in the middle of these fights, always being forced to choose sides. The family has gotten very unstable.
Lilac is friends with a bunch of different girls. Her best friend’s name is named Loria. They love having sleepovers together.
Lilac’s current crush is on a boy named Jase. Jase is tall and has short blond hair and green eyes. She was planning on asking him out after the Reaping before she was reaped. The fact that she would never be able to confess her feelings to him devastated her. He was the only boy she had truly loved.
Reaped or volunteer: Reaped. When Lilac was first reaped, she denied it. Then she burst into tears and demanded for volunteers. None stepped forward, however.
What they hope to learn in training: Lilac wants to learn some survival skills and how to fight with most weapons.
Bloodbath strategy: Lilac will try to grab a knife from the Cornucopia.
Remainder of the games strategy: Lilac will hunt for the weak tributes to kill, but hide from the strong ones, such as the Careers.
Open to an alliance?: Sure. Why not?
Suggested placement: Bloodbath. Lilac just wasn’t prepared for the intensity of the Hunger Games.
SYOT Form:
District: 3
Gender: male
Name: Jollin Kraser
Age: 14
Sexuality: straight
Hair color: brown
Eye color: brown
Ethnicity: White American
Other features: Jollin wears glasses. He has lots of scratches and bruises due to the kids at school, and his hair is messy because he never combs it. He’s also very short.
Strengths: Jollin is extremely smart, the smartest in school, and is good with technology. He’s also halfway decent at using swords. Jollin is very good at survival skills, as well.
Weaknesses: Jollin is extremely weak physically. He can’t climb trees or swim, and he’s not good with any weapon besides a sword.
Likes: Jollin likes any sort of technology, reading, school, his family, and his teachers.
Dislikes: Jollin doesn’t like any activity that involves running, the kids at school, fighting, and death.
Interview outfit: Jollin wears a silver suit that seems to glow, as well as black dress shoes.
Reaping outfit: Jollin wears a dark blue cardigan and pants. He also wears his gym shoes.
Weapon of choice: Electrical traps (is that considered a weapon? If not, the sword is his weapon of choice.)
Personality: Jollin is your classic nerd. He’s the best student in the school, and all the teachers love him. He’s kind, but he always gets picked on because of his size and how smart he is. Jollin loves making electronic gadgets. He works on them all the time at home.
Family and background: Jollin’s mother and father both work at the CC Company (Computers for the Capitol). The company makes all sorts of electrical appliances for the Capitol. The company is fairly successful, but not enough for Jollin’s parents to be rich. Jollin also has a little brother named Lathius. Lathius is seven years old and is terrified that Jollin will be reaped for the Hunger Games. Jollin has a very strong bond with his family and hates when something bad happens to them.
Jollin is constantly bullied by the kids in his class. He hates it, but he can’t stop them. Jollin has only one friend. His name is Bade. Bade is also bullied and understands Jollin.
Reaped or volunteer: Reaped. Jollin was terrified when he heard his name called, but he forced himself not to cry and tried his best to look confident.
What they hope to learn in training: Jollin wants to learn all of the survival skills, as well as how to use a few weapons.
Bloodbath strategy: If there’s a sword or some wire close to Jollin, he’ll try to grab it, but otherwise, he’ll run away immediately.
Remainder of the games strategy: Jollin will try to make an electrical trap to kill a bunch of the tributes. Then he’ll just hide out and only kill if he has to.
Open to an alliance?: No. Jollin would prefer to work alone.
Suggested placement: First would be great, but if not first, around the 6th, 7th, 8th range. It’d be cool if he could kill one or two of the Careers (or all six), so that he could show his bullies that he’s tougher than they think.
Cool chapter! I liked the tributes. Here’s what I think of them:
Briar: Briar was pretty cool. Nothing about him really stood out to me, but I still liked him. I always have a lot of sympathy for tributes when they have a crush on someone, especially if that someone is also reaped. I’ll just give him a like for now.
Raylie: Poor Raylie. That would be awful, having to go into the games with your crush. I hope that Raylie and Briar find their way through this. I’ll give her a like as well.
Okay, I made two more tributes! Sorry I can’t do this through pms, but I’m not allowed to turn that setting on. I made two, and I might make another as well later. Hope you enjoy them!
SYOT Form:
District: 11
Gender: female
Name: Lilac Amrin
Age: 16
Sexuality: straight
Hair color: black (very long and wavy)
Eye color: chocolate brown
Ethnicity: African American
Other features: Lilac prefers keeping her hair down rather than putting into a ponytail or bun. She tends to put on a lot of makeup, and she likes wearing fancy clothes.
Strengths: Lilac has good social skills, she’s decent with a knife (as she found while training), and she’s a good climber.
Weaknesses: Lilac isn’t good with weapons other than knives, she’s physically weak, and she’s not good at survival skills.
Likes: Lilac likes pretty much anything girly: makeup, dresses, boys, you name it. She also loves to dance.
Dislikes: Lilac doesn’t like bugs of any kind (especially spiders), the woods, and the dark.
Interview outfit: Lilac wears a dark green dress that shimmers in the light. If you look closely, you can see traces of all the crops that District 11 grows. For the shoes, Lilac wears black high heels.
Reaping outfit: Lilac wears a long, golden dress. She also wears golden high heels and golden makeup. She loves looking her best for the Reaping.
Weapon of choice: knife
Personality: Lilac is your typical teenage girl. She’s always hanging out with her friends, talking about fashion and boys. She’s a nice girl, but a bit of an airhead. She doesn’t worry about the Hunger Games and figures that there are so many people in District 11 that there’s no way she’ll get reaped. Lilac has had a crush on more boys than she can count. She doesn’t pay much attention in school and usually gets bad grades.
Family and background: Lilac’s father is one of the Victors of District 11. He’s always trying to warn Lilac about the Hunger Games, but she never listens to him. Because of this, they often get in fights and have become very distant with each other. Lilac’s mother is always caught up in the middle of these fights, always being forced to choose sides. The family has gotten very unstable.
Lilac is friends with a bunch of different girls. Her best friend’s name is named Loria. They love having sleepovers together.
Lilac’s current crush is on a boy named Jase. Jase is tall and has short blond hair and green eyes. She was planning on asking him out after the Reaping before she was reaped. The fact that she would never be able to confess her feelings to him devastated her. He was the only boy she had truly loved.
Reaped or volunteer: Reaped. When Lilac was first reaped, she denied it. Then she burst into tears and demanded for volunteers. None stepped forward, however.
What they hope to learn in training: Lilac wants to learn some survival skills and how to fight with most weapons.
Bloodbath strategy: Lilac will try to grab a knife from the Cornucopia.
Remainder of the games strategy: Lilac will hunt for the weak tributes to kill, but hide from the strong ones, such as the Careers.
Open to an alliance?: Sure. Why not?
Suggested placement: Bloodbath. Lilac just wasn’t prepared for the intensity of the Hunger Games.
SYOT Form:
District: 3
Gender: male
Name: Jollin Kraser
Age: 14
Sexuality: straight
Hair color: brown
Eye color: brown
Ethnicity: White American
Other features: Jollin wears glasses. He has lots of scratches and bruises due to the kids at school, and his hair is messy because he never combs it. He’s also very short.
Strengths: Jollin is extremely smart, the smartest in school, and is good with technology. He’s also halfway decent at using swords. Jollin is very good at survival skills, as well.
Weaknesses: Jollin is extremely weak physically. He can’t climb trees or swim, and he’s not good with any weapon besides a sword.
Likes: Jollin likes any sort of technology, reading, school, his family, and his teachers.
Dislikes: Jollin doesn’t like any activity that involves running, the kids at school, fighting, and death.
Interview outfit: Jollin wears a silver suit that seems to glow, as well as black dress shoes.
Reaping outfit: Jollin wears a dark blue cardigan and pants. He also wears his gym shoes.
Weapon of choice: Electrical traps (is that considered a weapon? If not, the sword is his weapon of choice.)
Personality: Jollin is your classic nerd. He’s the best student in the school, and all the teachers love him. He’s kind, but he always gets picked on because of his size and how smart he is. Jollin loves making electronic gadgets. He works on them all the time at home.
Family and background: Jollin’s mother and father both work at the CC Company (Computers for the Capitol). The company makes all sorts of electrical appliances for the Capitol. The company is fairly successful, but not enough for Jollin’s parents to be rich. Jollin also has a little brother named Lathius. Lathius is seven years old and is terrified that Jollin will be reaped for the Hunger Games. Jollin has a very strong bond with his family and hates when something bad happens to them.
Jollin is constantly bullied by the kids in his class. He hates it, but he can’t stop them. Jollin has only one friend. His name is Bade. Bade is also bullied and understands Jollin.
Reaped or volunteer: Reaped. Jollin was terrified when he heard his name called, but he forced himself not to cry and tried his best to look confident.
What they hope to learn in training: Jollin wants to learn all of the survival skills, as well as how to use a few weapons.
Bloodbath strategy: If there’s a sword or some wire close to Jollin, he’ll try to grab it, but otherwise, he’ll run away immediately.
Remainder of the games strategy: Jollin will try to make an electrical trap to kill a bunch of the tributes. Then he’ll just hide out and only kill if he has to.
Open to an alliance?: No. Jollin would prefer to work alone.
Suggested placement: First would be great, but if not first, around the 6th, 7th, 8th range. It’d be cool if he could kill one or two of the Careers (or all six), so that he could show his bullies that he’s tougher than they think.
8/2/2018 c3 4Greywolf44
Briar: I like him and his relationship with Raylie is great. He seems to be a fun guy.
Raylie: I also like her for her fun personality. It was sad that both Briar and Raylie git reaped, but they'll be allies for sure.
Q1: Ambrosia
Q2: her grandmother
Overall, good chapter and I can't wait until the next one!
Briar: I like him and his relationship with Raylie is great. He seems to be a fun guy.
Raylie: I also like her for her fun personality. It was sad that both Briar and Raylie git reaped, but they'll be allies for sure.
Q1: Ambrosia
Q2: her grandmother
Overall, good chapter and I can't wait until the next one!