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3/3/2022 c21 12Village-Mystic
Yes, for some it has been summer vacation. Good contrast and good addition to friends in the know.
3/2/2022 c16 Village-Mystic
Dancing is good exercise, and Harry does have several female employees to practice with.
3/2/2022 c15 Village-Mystic
I like how you're having a ripple effect of positive behavior.
3/2/2022 c11 Village-Mystic
I think that I am following.
3/2/2022 c10 Village-Mystic
Ah, nice way to show that his blocks are answered and he can be attracted to and want her.
3/2/2022 c8 Village-Mystic
Enjoying the world-building and re-building. Part of helping orphans is to help them find permanent homes - even if they are fosterings and not blood adoptions. Hopefully, they will think that far. I'm sure they will need at least 2 potion specialists, 4 care-givers, healer coverage, and some teachers, as is.
3/2/2022 c25 3Rashio
Absolutely love this story. Very well written and goes into a lot of detail that I'm missing in other fanfics. A bit sad that you're going the technomage path, because I think it takes away from the magnificence of Magic, but that's your call. So far it isn't a large part anyway. I was a bit annoyed at your handlings concerning quidditch, but that's alright. I can't expect you to understand every aspect of the world.
Overall, fantastic. I can't wait to start reading the sequel (though I don't understand why people split up their stories...)
3/2/2022 c24 Rashio
What do you mean start at the bottom of the League? It's a league system, they all start at 0 points at the start of the season. ALSO it would NOT be hard to figure out matchups when you have an odd number of teams. Every match day, one team gets to rest. Simple as that.
3/1/2022 c6 12Village-Mystic
Well, it seems they both want to try a bit and give it a chance. Reader knows it won't work, but it is nice that they want to try.
3/1/2022 c5 Village-Mystic
An interesting follow-up for Draco. Meanwhile Harry could host the winter grounds of a Quiddich Team. I wonder if he owns any part of any team.
3/1/2022 c4 Village-Mystic
I'm enjoying this massive tour. A lot of these properties are so big that they could be resorts. However, since Wizards live for so long and they mainly socialize with their peers, there's also rooms for lots of guests. Thanks for crafting and sharing this.
3/1/2022 c2 Village-Mystic
New jobs and businesses will be good for the economy. Hopefully they'll be able to deal with CCTV by and by, too.
3/1/2022 c1 Village-Mystic
Good set-up, and curious to see how things play out.
3/1/2022 c22 3Rashio
I understand if you don't know this, since not everyone is that into Sports, but changing the entire image and colours of a well established club is never a good move. Especially not if you're a new owner, that's the way you alienate your supporters. You're taking something away from those people, something that means so much to them. They've grown up loving a specific team, wearing their colours and badge. That you suddenly buy out everyone and change everything is NOT going to go down well. Not in the slightest.
3/1/2022 c18 Rashio
I sort of wish it stuck to the theme though.. Diagon Alley, Knockturn Alley, Horizont Alley etc. could have gone for something like Vertic Alley.
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