
12/16/2021 c9 hdres
I am really enjoying your story and the way Harry and Daphne are rebuilding their world. I am particularly enjoying the way they are setting up GSC and the Potter foundation and how they are bringing in people to help them. Thank you for sharing your story
I am really enjoying your story and the way Harry and Daphne are rebuilding their world. I am particularly enjoying the way they are setting up GSC and the Potter foundation and how they are bringing in people to help them. Thank you for sharing your story
12/10/2021 c25 Di
Thank you. A truly enjoyable story.
Thank you. A truly enjoyable story.
12/9/2021 c18
2Mionefan
I find myself questioning why I started reading this story. While the writing is excellent (if a bit long), and my bad for not realizing that it's not a complete story, but only part one of a series. Part two might not even be the end of it, so I'm reluctant to start that, knowing it may also be a very long read. It's a very complex story and would have been better published professionally as a book, rather than a fan fiction. Of course, then you might run into copyright issues with JKR, but that said, I'll withhold final judgement until you complete the story. At the moment, I don't have the time to wait for the completion and will put it aside for now, much as I enjoy the excellent writing of an author who truly knows how to write.

I find myself questioning why I started reading this story. While the writing is excellent (if a bit long), and my bad for not realizing that it's not a complete story, but only part one of a series. Part two might not even be the end of it, so I'm reluctant to start that, knowing it may also be a very long read. It's a very complex story and would have been better published professionally as a book, rather than a fan fiction. Of course, then you might run into copyright issues with JKR, but that said, I'll withhold final judgement until you complete the story. At the moment, I don't have the time to wait for the completion and will put it aside for now, much as I enjoy the excellent writing of an author who truly knows how to write.
12/8/2021 c24 mike3308
I hope they can find the antidote for Abercrombies poison.
Nott dealing with the vampire is bad news.
I hope they can find the antidote for Abercrombies poison.
Nott dealing with the vampire is bad news.
12/8/2021 c23 mike3308
It's good Harry got Daphne to take some time off. It will help them both relax.
It's good Harry got Daphne to take some time off. It will help them both relax.
12/8/2021 c22 mike3308
It's nice that Draco decided to court Astoria in the old ways.
It will help their relationship that Daphne approved it.
It's nice that Draco decided to court Astoria in the old ways.
It will help their relationship that Daphne approved it.
12/7/2021 c19 mike3308
They have finally started dating.
Angelina and George would also be a good match.
They have finally started dating.
Angelina and George would also be a good match.
12/7/2021 c17 mike3308
Anita Zabini was a good mother to Blaise. That's all that needs to be said other than a mind healer might be needed.
Anita Zabini was a good mother to Blaise. That's all that needs to be said other than a mind healer might be needed.
12/7/2021 c16 mike3308
Nott will need to be watched.
As far as the guilds, it's a very old type of business. Look to the future.
Nott will need to be watched.
As far as the guilds, it's a very old type of business. Look to the future.
12/7/2021 c15 mike3308
Harry needs to allow the Ministry to honor him. Both a Day and a medal will be appropriate.
Harry needs to allow the Ministry to honor him. Both a Day and a medal will be appropriate.
12/7/2021 c14 mike3308
The Dursleys are better off away from Harry. It might be worth it to have a meeting between Harry and Dudley.
The Dursleys are better off away from Harry. It might be worth it to have a meeting between Harry and Dudley.